Tuesday, November 22, 2005

Finally.....55 words story......contd from the previous one....

“Five years, isn’t it?”

“Yes.” Five years, two months, 7 days and 10 hours.

“How have you been?”

“Ok.”

“See you around.”

“Ok.” Her heart was breaking apart.

“Momma?” A little boy came running.

“ Is he mine?”

“Yes.”

“Will you marry me?”

“I will.”

They were in each other’s arms, kissing as never before.


15 comments:

Nahuatl said...

Yeah.. stuff of fairy tales.

DARLing said...

WO... love story good ending !!

Shruti T A said...

Amazing! Keep writing, Gautami.

gautami tripathy said...

Thanks Nayan,Darling and Flickering flame.

Wanted to write a love story in shortest of words!

Did I succeed?

Nahuatl said...

You sure did... but eh.. don't u think this story is a depicting 'him' a bit unromantic, while 'she' has all the best thoughts? ;)

gautami tripathy said...

If you read between the lines, you will find he too feels the same way!

Nahuatl said...

Hmmm.. a little bit though :)

gautami tripathy said...

Men do not express their feelings! They take a lot of time to open up to emotions.

Nahuatl said...

Amazing!
Sigh! Wish most of the people had your wisdom.

Ghost Particle said...

I would say this is one of the best 55 word stories ive read on the blogosphere recently...

gautami tripathy said...

Thanks Nayan...:)

Thanks Ghost.....A love story is not what most guys like!

DARLing said...

u make it ;***

gautami tripathy said...

:)))))))

still_figuring_out said...

i love happy endings!

gautami tripathy said...

Me too! But life is not always as we want it to be....