Tuesday, November 22, 2005

Finally.....55 words story......contd from the previous one....

“Five years, isn’t it?”

“Yes.” Five years, two months, 7 days and 10 hours.

“How have you been?”

“Ok.”

“See you around.”

“Ok.” Her heart was breaking apart.

“Momma?” A little boy came running.

“ Is he mine?”

“Yes.”

“Will you marry me?”

“I will.”

They were in each other’s arms, kissing as never before.


15 comments:

Nayan said...

Yeah.. stuff of fairy tales.

DARLing said...

WO... love story good ending !!

Anonymous said...

Amazing! Keep writing, Gautami.

gautami tripathy said...

Thanks Nayan,Darling and Flickering flame.

Wanted to write a love story in shortest of words!

Did I succeed?

Nayan said...

You sure did... but eh.. don't u think this story is a depicting 'him' a bit unromantic, while 'she' has all the best thoughts? ;)

gautami tripathy said...

If you read between the lines, you will find he too feels the same way!

Nayan said...

Hmmm.. a little bit though :)

gautami tripathy said...

Men do not express their feelings! They take a lot of time to open up to emotions.

Nayan said...

Amazing!
Sigh! Wish most of the people had your wisdom.

gP said...

I would say this is one of the best 55 word stories ive read on the blogosphere recently...

gautami tripathy said...

Thanks Nayan...:)

Thanks Ghost.....A love story is not what most guys like!

DARLing said...

u make it ;***

gautami tripathy said...

:)))))))

still_figuring_out said...

i love happy endings!

gautami tripathy said...

Me too! But life is not always as we want it to be....