Thursday, November 15, 2007

shoes ramble on---Totally Optional Prompts



Totally Optional Prompts wants us to write about places

sun beats down on my back
tarpaulins has holes, i barely notice.
my wares are placed haphazardly,
right in front of me.

nails, polish, strings, leather,
plastics with solutions of various hues.
disarrayed shoes, clogs, sandals
lie in wait to be renewed.

i might stay at the same place
for forty odds years now,
repairing broken, torn down shoes
soles reattached, fixed with glue.

stayed, i have not in one place, shoes
do have tales to tell of places visited.

21 comments:

Don Iannone said...

Good one, Gautami. And perhaps the same could be said about tattered souls.

Jo said...

I like how the stasis is undermined in the last stanza.

Crafty Green Poet said...

this reminds me very much of markets in Malawi.

sister AE said...

When I was 8 my teacher gave us all a book called "A Hole Is to Dig" and it was full of sentences like, "mashed potatoes are so everyone has enough."

This fits into that - shoes are for visiting.

And more. Nice.

Alan Bender said...

Nice spin on place. I always enjoy your work but this is one of the betterest;-)

Dennis said...

There's something very spiritual about repairing worn out shoes - repairing soles/souls. I love this.

Rambler said...

A pair of shoes always tell you, don't they

but one thing is that they can always be misleading.

...deb said...

Oh I liked this!

paisley said...

it makes me feel as if he has at last become willing to accept the tales of others as his own travels... very nice....

tumblewords said...

The title is perfect for this layered piece. Very nice!

Rethabile said...

Reminds me of that boots are made for walking song. The soles reattached image is nice, as Don says.

Square1 said...

I love your focus on such an ordinary object. But shoes can tell you a lot about a person.

Jerry in Tampa said...

Bravo! Bravo!
Love it!
Very creative and thought provoking....


Jerry in Tampa

Pauline said...

shoe tales! what a great concept. Perhaps you will write a poem about one of them?

AnnieElf said...

Like this so very, very much, Gautami. You've given the shoes life and their own voice.

aka Danny Wise said...

Yeah, shoes really do go to some great places - love the imagery!

Rose Dewy Knickers said...

I love the shoes traveling to this spot and then back on the road. The world of soles revolving around a single stall.

Rose

xo

iamnasra said...

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Linda said...

This brought me right back to being a kid and going to the cobbler's shop. I could smell the leather. Thanks! ~Linda

Susan Helene Gottfried said...

Solid and visual. Another great one!

polona said...

the whole world in one place... good one!