Saturday, July 12, 2008

for my closest friend-----a senryu

twenty five years ago
you steamrolled into my life
stuck through thick and thin

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As both of us are not into mushy stuff or display our feelings for each other, she is gonna hate me, if she sees this! And a sloppy one at that!


17 comments:

Whitesnake said...

So why don't the two of you harden the F@&$ Up and carry on?

Whitesnake said...

OH!!!!!
Ya call that sloppy????
Good grief woman.......not sloppy at all.......
Get the lexion out girl and find the defintion of sloppy......
Call ya self a teacher......GOOD grief!!!!!!!

;-)

anthonynorth said...

Some friends are like that :-)

keithsramblings said...

Perhaps this will bring about a freash start. Go on - give her a cuddle!

Lilibeth said...

I had to look up senryu, but I finally got it. I love it. She sounds dominating.

Just Jen said...

LOL
I love the comments you've gotten so far, just as good as the writing...lol

Lucy said...

excellent senryu! :))

b said...

You made me smile...I could be that friends. Always a friends but no mushy stuff please!

b

Linda Jacobs said...

Not sloppy at all! It just tells it like it is. I love the word 'steamrolled"; it shows so much!

Linda - Nickers and Ink said...

Nice!

Blessings,
Linda
INTEGRITY, at NICKERS AND INK

amarettogirl said...

Geez - unfortunately my oldest friend and I seemed to have a whole hell of a lot more words between us and she can't even talk! Check it out.

Tammy said...

I liked it Tami and I'm glad you have her. HUG

Tammy said...

I liked it Tami and I'm glad you have her. HUG

danni said...

stuck through thick and thin - i think she'll stick through "steamrolled" - it ain't exactly mushy!!!

dsnake1 said...

that's not sloppy!

Noah the Great said...

Friendship is powerful.

polona said...

i think tis is rather wonderful :)