Tuesday, May 12, 2009

swaying ways

cemented in my ways
yet I make you sway
WILL YOU MARRY ME?
swaying to my tune
forever cemented


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that burning heat reaches out, touching me, almost scorches my sensitive skin. Just as suddenly it touches those exhilarating heights, so calming. fire was never so welcome, coming from your inner core anything is.

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17 comments:

Annamari said...

ah, yes marraige cementing a relationship...

and off toppic you are tagged....

Whitesnake said...

I err Hmmm Well now err I sort ta ..........hmmm .....Yep!

zoya gautam said...

.. great poem .. many thanks ..

JP/deb said...

mmmm... love the intensity in this one. peace, jp/deb

Andy Sewina said...

Hi Gautami, forever cemented, now there's a thought!!

Andy Sewina said...

...btw here is a little something I wrote for you earlier...
sway

Deborah Godin said...

You come up with the most amazing images! I always enjoy what you write!

Janice Thomson said...

I like your use of 'cemented' - powerful connotations.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

interesting! :)

anthonynorth said...

So important to have that cement in a relationship.

sarah said...

Fabulous. I love, love, love the first two lines.

Linda Jacobs said...

I like the words you used in this especially cement and sway. Very cool!

Tumblewords: said...

cemented is a word not often used with love/marriage - it rings a new bell! nice...

Wayne Pitchko said...

nicely written....forever "cemented"....hmmmm not sure about that

Raven's Wing Poetry said...

Thought-provoking. I wonder who's cemented and who's swaying.

-Nicole

Claire said...

succint and powerful

Lawrence Gladeview said...

your brevity's clarity bounces well, i see grey wind blowing. refreshing read.