Tuesday, January 12, 2010

WHATEVER! CUT OUT THOSE RIBBONS

I can't have mercy
I can't let it be
i can't let it go
I will mess with you
to monstrous extremity
with zeal, I will jolt you
WHATEVER! CUT OUT THOSE RIBBONS
jolted by my zeal-
extremely monstrous
this mess that you create
you have to let it go
but I can't let it be
as I never learnt mercy

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A taunt thrown for Sir Silley!

15 comments:

Wendy Naisa said...

Hi Gautami, many thanks for posting to The NaiSaiKu challenge?

anthonynorth said...

Harsh words beautifully written.

ThomG said...

No mercy!

Julie JordanScott said...

You know, the more times I read this, the more power I see combined in JOLT and ZEAL.

Thank you, Guatami.

pia said...

Demonstrates revenge perfectly

Percy Bisque Silley said...

Gautami my dear, if ye would consort less with truckers from the Bronx who reek of gasoline then Poesy might fall from thy hand that was lady-like and demure as becomes a member of your Dainty sex.

Anthony, Thom, Julie, Pia: Pooh.

Crybbe666 said...

Great revenge piece...laughter abounded, and for that, I thank you!

Stan Ski said...

Firm but fair...

Lilibeth said...

Yikes. That'll teach him to tangle with you!

Linda Jacobs said...

Oh, I like the strength I see here! You go!

Tumblewords: said...

Yup! You win!

Dee Martin said...

you are kicking some serious poetic butt now girl!

Just someone said...

That is some cool verse!

bunnygirl said...

I love the second half of this, where you turn it all around. So clever!

one more believer said...

mercy is for babies....