Sunday, January 17, 2010

rays permeate

growing old with you-
incandescent emotions
aglow within my heart

24 comments:

Bruce Miller said...

Clever to use links in the haiku back to the memes -- I like it, and the poem, serving two purposes and doing it so well.

sarah said...

very nice indeed.

Teri said...

Good job!

Lorraine said...

Hmm, nice...warm

Quiet Paths said...

Sweet light...

Percy Bisque Silley said...

Whatever

Debra Kay said...

Very well done-I have link envy too.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Nicely put Tami. Less is best.



Melanie

lissa said...

a sweet old to love

Stan Ski said...

Old flames can be extinguished - some stay alight...

Percy Bisque Silley said...

“Less Is Best” - ?
For Cassiopeia
By Percy Bisque Silley, Knighted

Less is best - yet how much less?
Less by half or less two times?
Nursery-rhyme short
Or less than “War and Peace”
Which still could be a lot?
With derision then
I snort upon thine imprecision
And with condescension
Perforce must say again:
"Whatever"
Only when I said it first
Upon Gautami’s thread
My comment's length
Was ever so much less than this,
Indeed, it was much less
Than all those others writ before
And therefore Best.

Yours in Triumph,
Sir Percy

Artist Victoria O'Neill said...

so sweet.....

PS the Pratsie said...

beautiful expression .. so much love filled :)

Margie said...

Very nice!

Happy New year!

Greyscale Territory said...

Love the heavy, multi-textured beauty of "incandescent emotions"! Beautiful haiku!

Andy Sewina said...

Like fine wine, you need to let this breathe...

<3

SisterJulia said...

Ooh, that's pretty.

carolsnotebook said...

Love it.

keiths ramblings said...

Brilliant - again!

Larry said...

incandescent emotions aglow within my heart... Nice I love this one Thanks for Sharing. I look forward to reading you again next week.
Larry.
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For My Wife

Tumblewords: said...

Nicely done!

fourwindshaiga said...

Oh, what a nice feeling to write about.

Lisa at Greenbow said...

It is so true that love shines through.

one more believer said...

hello g...that love could last a lifetime along with the wrinkles...now that is heaven on earth....