Sunday, April 17, 2011

"more" me


with knick knacks
I have created space
that is unique to me
in a palette
colours bleed into each other
merging my soul
I have thrown shackles
at threshold of me

22 comments:

Ramesh Sood said...

Your page most of the time make me sit and wonder..and think.. you create master pieces and that can happen only with the help of an unshackled mind..and heart.. when spirit flows in abundance..no boundaries..total freedom to create.. Thanks Gautami..happy to be here..

Greyscale Territory said...

Love the idea of knick knacks symbloising elements of a personality! How true! Lovely poem!

Harshad mehta said...

A peep into the SPACE WITHIN. Unique to each one.

Linda Jacobs said...

I love the word "threshold" here! It surprised me and I had to think about it but it's perfect!

5thsister said...

Yes! They are our "truth"!

ayala said...

Lovely!

Swapna John said...

Nice one, friend

teric said...

Very interesting thoughts and comparisons. How true for us all.

Brian Miller said...

i kinda like it when the colors bleed...not so much with shackles..

Monkey Man said...

Knick Knacks are an expression of color and self. I like this. Thanks for playing along with the Sunday 160.

Bill said...

my bookshelves
the spaces I planned
to leave empty

Christine said...

ones knick knacks certainly speak volumes of who they are, love this poem.

Andy said...

Nice interpretation Gautami

eof777 said...

You write beautiful succinct poetry... I enjoyed my visit.
Thanks for stopping by my blog. I'm following you via GFC.
Best,
Elizabeth

Jingle Poetry said...

wise and true.
well done,

PremI said...

A wonderful space to visit...
very well written.

Lyn said...

The space within and without match...perfect!

lynnaima said...

"shackles at threshold of me" hmmm I am savouring/pondering this, sweet!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/

bodhirose said...

Ah, I like how you put this, Gautami--very clever and beautifully done.

My potluck entry: http://bodhirose.wordpress.com/2011/04/06/lovely-horror/

fiveloaf said...

nice.. my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/22/springtide/

Mia said...

so lovely, thank you!

Luna

http://lunawitch15.wordpress.com/

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Lovely and nicely put my friend....

Melanie