Sunday, July 10, 2011

scrolled

rough notes
fragment of snatched words
unspoken yet loud
I find on that bench
in a hollow pipe
you left that scroll aeons ago
and the sign read thus

silence

20 comments:

A Daft Scots Lass said...

nice.

Jinksy said...

Some people can have the effect of making us roll our words out of sight, in silence...

Deborah said...

Brillliant!

ayala said...

I love this !

Brian Miller said...

silence is often a blessing itself...

The Woodswoman said...

Goodness gracious ... well done!!!

Ramesh Sood said...

And to know the silence.. beautiful... Gautami..

I invite you to my 300th post and would love to seek your feedback..?

It will inspire..

MorningAJ said...

That's lovely.

Sue said...

Well done!

=)

BECKY said...

I agree with all of the above! So very lovely!

Dazee Dreamer said...

wow, so little words, but such a big impact. loved it.

Judie said...

A very visual piece!

Mama Zen said...

I like this!

Morning said...

cool write,

Christine said...

that second line is brilliant, good one.

Jo said...

oh you convey so much with so few words ... this was beautiful

twitches said...

"unspoken yet loud" - great line!

Karen S. said...

Yes! silence is golden...and this is awesome, thank you!

cj Schlottman said...

"...snatched words
unspoken yet loud..."

Powerful words, I say. This is a lovely poem, expressing so much in so few words.

Namaste..........cj

Jenny said...

Such quiet power you've shared here in so few words.

Brilliant.