Sunday, July 10, 2011

scrolled

rough notes
fragment of snatched words
unspoken yet loud
I find on that bench
in a hollow pipe
you left that scroll aeons ago
and the sign read thus

silence

19 comments:

A Daft Scots Lass said...

nice.

Jinksy said...

Some people can have the effect of making us roll our words out of sight, in silence...

Deborah said...

Brillliant!

Brian Miller said...

silence is often a blessing itself...

Unknown said...

Goodness gracious ... well done!!!

Ramesh Sood said...

And to know the silence.. beautiful... Gautami..

I invite you to my 300th post and would love to seek your feedback..?

It will inspire..

MorningAJ said...

That's lovely.

Susan Anderson said...

Well done!

=)

BECKY said...

I agree with all of the above! So very lovely!

Dazee Dreamer said...

wow, so little words, but such a big impact. loved it.

Judie said...

A very visual piece!

Maude Lynn said...

I like this!

Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry said...

cool write,

Christine said...

that second line is brilliant, good one.

Jo said...

oh you convey so much with so few words ... this was beautiful

mareymercy said...

"unspoken yet loud" - great line!

21 Wits said...

Yes! silence is golden...and this is awesome, thank you!

cj Schlottman said...

"...snatched words
unspoken yet loud..."

Powerful words, I say. This is a lovely poem, expressing so much in so few words.

Namaste..........cj

Jenny said...

Such quiet power you've shared here in so few words.

Brilliant.