tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post1012839778589976594..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: ribbons of her thoughtsgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-81949985918004413792008-11-13T06:22:00.000+05:302008-11-13T06:22:00.000+05:30Love the way you fitted this all together, cool as...Love the way you fitted this all together, cool as a cucumber!Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-42840463971854776822008-11-10T05:08:00.000+05:302008-11-10T05:08:00.000+05:30This is lovely.There are lots of wonderful lines i...This is lovely.<BR/><BR/>There are lots of wonderful lines in this poem. I enjoyed reading this.<BR/><BR/>Also, thank you kindly for visiting my poetry journal!<BR/><BR/>Cheers!<BR/><BR/>http://alotus-poetry.livejournal.comAmbiguitylotushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01247817064783732958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-41980287755594587912008-11-09T23:29:00.000+05:302008-11-09T23:29:00.000+05:30this works very wellthis works very wellpolonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-20100921720507633042008-11-09T07:36:00.000+05:302008-11-09T07:36:00.000+05:30The wisdom in here staggers me, lady. Nicely done!...The wisdom in here staggers me, lady. Nicely done!<BR/><BR/>(I especially love the chips being too heavy to hold... that stanza's amazing)Susan Helene Gottfriedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12778191943289129869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-74299763384174449622008-11-08T09:56:00.000+05:302008-11-08T09:56:00.000+05:30I really like this one!I really like this one!J. Andrew Lockharthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12567156257114496618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-88366196843076113692008-11-08T00:01:00.000+05:302008-11-08T00:01:00.000+05:30Beautiful. Full of the ambiguity of being human.Beautiful. Full of the ambiguity of being human.Debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14744896385434246402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-77127795616668932552008-11-07T22:29:00.000+05:302008-11-07T22:29:00.000+05:30gautami -this was a wonderful piece... ;)gautami -<BR/><BR/>this was a wonderful piece... ;)Rob Kistnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11365982588165098990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-51098837554438884512008-11-07T19:56:00.000+05:302008-11-07T19:56:00.000+05:30You did a great job finding your own poem in the m...You did a great job finding your own poem in the mix of lines. I like the hopeful ending.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-88199986162582377992008-11-07T18:36:00.000+05:302008-11-07T18:36:00.000+05:30I really like the way "soul's duality" is echoed b...I really like the way "soul's duality" is echoed by the image of her lips.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-53687209223093802642008-11-07T18:07:00.000+05:302008-11-07T18:07:00.000+05:30if she carries enough chips ...Finally dawned on m...<EM>if she carries enough chips ...</EM><BR/><BR/>Finally dawned on me what this means!<BR/><BR/>Very cool.Philip Thrifthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03021615111948806998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-58159067228984976532008-11-07T06:32:00.000+05:302008-11-07T06:32:00.000+05:30Lots of images jump out of the words.Lots of images jump out of the words.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-25331601732935484622008-11-07T06:31:00.000+05:302008-11-07T06:31:00.000+05:30yes...I can really relate to this one...it definit...yes...I can really relate to this one...it definitely shows some of my layers...great job!hollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06973648530219556353noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-67781981534518117042008-11-07T06:14:00.000+05:302008-11-07T06:14:00.000+05:30wow, you did a great job making sense with these l...wow, you did a great job making sense with these lines. <BR/>"the line of her lips<BR/>curves into the morning" is just a gorgeous image!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-42453489063976721962008-11-07T04:17:00.000+05:302008-11-07T04:17:00.000+05:30"...ribbons of her thoughtstie her down." Nice!"...ribbons of her thoughts<BR/>tie her down." Nice!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15334812243182354729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-19537240792363412232008-11-07T03:30:00.000+05:302008-11-07T03:30:00.000+05:30The title is wonderful! And the poem is powerful.The title is wonderful! And the poem is powerful.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-52402924642768868282008-11-06T23:42:00.000+05:302008-11-06T23:42:00.000+05:30Heavy thoughts sending my own to splinterts! A go....Heavy thoughts sending my own to splinterts! A go.d job!:)Boruthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13990298332042076231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-9879757045007143302008-11-06T23:01:00.000+05:302008-11-06T23:01:00.000+05:30• very well knit• smooth resolution• fine work• very well knit<BR/><BR/>• smooth resolution<BR/><BR/>• fine workAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-35844597389027666792008-11-06T20:35:00.000+05:302008-11-06T20:35:00.000+05:30I don't know which lines are your own here, but th...I don't know which lines are your own here, but the last two lines, whether "yours" or not, are beautifully placed.Billhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10717622168200846486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-3096530884673711932008-11-06T20:18:00.000+05:302008-11-06T20:18:00.000+05:30You're getting deeper and deeper. Excellent.You're getting deeper and deeper. Excellent.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-27961759220987102942008-11-06T18:52:00.000+05:302008-11-06T18:52:00.000+05:30That was an interesting read...Nice compilation......That was an interesting read...<BR/><BR/>Nice compilation...<BR/><BR/>Have a nice evening.. cheers...Arvhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00537617826418052413noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-59463928925728416522008-11-06T18:32:00.000+05:302008-11-06T18:32:00.000+05:30Now I really enjoyed this one......Now I really enjoyed this one......Whitesnakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.com