tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post1116088651361871418..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: Pencilledgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-58989614877425901302007-04-18T06:17:00.000+05:302007-04-18T06:17:00.000+05:30I enjoy your writing so much. What a strong ending...I enjoy your writing so much. What a strong ending- a metaphor I can relate to.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-25595582730017750542007-04-12T21:58:00.000+05:302007-04-12T21:58:00.000+05:30anne: The crux of the matter is I am trying to wri...anne: The crux of the matter is I am trying to write on inanimate objects. I started on statinery series as I am teacher and these are all familiar objects for me. I already wrote on blackboard, stapler, chalks etc etc.<BR/><BR/>My thoughts do not enter into it. I write what I think that objects feels.<BR/><BR/>:Dgautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-57028995611910742002007-04-12T21:52:00.000+05:302007-04-12T21:52:00.000+05:30Why?Because it sounds as if the pencil is sad, and...<I>Why?</I><BR/>Because it sounds as if the pencil is sad, and maybe you too. :(Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-88853603351237286412007-04-12T17:04:00.000+05:302007-04-12T17:04:00.000+05:30anne: Why? Neither is poorer! Infact we are richer...anne: Why? Neither is poorer! Infact we are richer by the experinces shared.<BR/><BR/>sage: I had almost left that last line. Left it as it is. Glad I did. <BR/><BR/>andrew: I will chk out your tanka.<BR/><BR/>ghost: yes. Someday is the operative word.<BR/><BR/>trinitystar: Thanks!<BR/><BR/>lotus: Isn't that scary at times?gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-9396005626661230692007-04-12T17:00:00.000+05:302007-04-12T17:00:00.000+05:30You know Gautami, your poem got me thinking...what...You know Gautami, your poem got me thinking...what if pencils had a way to convey what their previous owners had written...there would be secrets galore to share!Lotus Readshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02081192215823615529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-12814374581091290062007-04-12T14:52:00.000+05:302007-04-12T14:52:00.000+05:30Like this ... well written.witnessing it all in so...Like this ... well written.<BR/><BR/>witnessing it all <BR/>in somber bemoan<BR/>pencil stays mute<BR/>its lead busted<BR/><BR/>hugs for you.trinitystarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18134309193793933391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-19736204113425861422007-04-12T11:31:00.000+05:302007-04-12T11:31:00.000+05:30dont we all end up like this, someday?dont we all end up like this, someday?gPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07439371766182405053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-594954346195585772007-04-12T10:35:00.000+05:302007-04-12T10:35:00.000+05:30this is a lot like my tanka that I just posted.this is a lot like my tanka that I just posted.J. Andrew Lockharthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12567156257114496618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-82248809261405419172007-04-12T06:16:00.000+05:302007-04-12T06:16:00.000+05:30i was thinking it's a good thing it's in pencil--w...i was thinking it's a good thing it's in pencil--with the dark thoughts and lies and betrayals--that way you can erase, then I got to the last line and smiledsagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-55221369827996133402007-04-12T04:09:00.000+05:302007-04-12T04:09:00.000+05:30Poor pencil, and poor you.Poor pencil, and poor you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com