tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post1292417476264946551..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: irrationalitygautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-28347398816315374802008-09-26T09:35:00.000+05:302008-09-26T09:35:00.000+05:30That is intense still I search for you with violen...That is intense still I search for you with violent desperation. <BR/>wow. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-24936983321170262072008-09-24T21:13:00.000+05:302008-09-24T21:13:00.000+05:30violent desperation - painfully familiar though di...violent desperation - painfully familiar though distant now with time.Annie Jeffrieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15415548089882625246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-65498827507028040322008-09-24T03:16:00.000+05:302008-09-24T03:16:00.000+05:30a lot of passion and emotion here. like ita lot of passion and emotion here. like itpolonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-69383972814513488192008-09-20T17:06:00.000+05:302008-09-20T17:06:00.000+05:30Makes one think!Makes one think!Whitesnakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-2817789713574588172008-09-20T14:08:00.000+05:302008-09-20T14:08:00.000+05:30'Difficult words' printed on evertone's skin - we ...'Difficult words' printed on evertone's skin - we usually ignore them and concentrate on the easy ones.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-2731266671191779632008-09-19T21:37:00.000+05:302008-09-19T21:37:00.000+05:30This is stunning. Loved it.This is stunning. Loved it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-3625073444745094382008-09-19T20:32:00.000+05:302008-09-19T20:32:00.000+05:30A longing for sensual love, communicated with stro...A longing for sensual love, communicated with strong feeling!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-42683294950704257422008-09-19T20:01:00.000+05:302008-09-19T20:01:00.000+05:30"pausing at the difficult wordsimprinted on your s..."pausing at the difficult words<BR/>imprinted on your skin"<BR/><BR/>This image is lovely and intimate. Reminds me of tracing letters on someone's back and making them guess what the word is.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-72566181213901033082008-09-19T19:46:00.000+05:302008-09-19T19:46:00.000+05:30This is so tangible, so sensuous...then it's gone....This is so tangible, so sensuous...then it's gone. This is such a powerful feeling you've captured.carolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08020421002889991849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-64240959773857436012008-09-19T18:40:00.000+05:302008-09-19T18:40:00.000+05:30What a dream!Enjoyed your read Thank you.What a dream!<BR/>Enjoyed your read Thank you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-1222905651181211222008-09-19T09:17:00.000+05:302008-09-19T09:17:00.000+05:30whispers - I love that thoughtwhispers - I love that thoughtJ. Andrew Lockharthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12567156257114496618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-54469541386464499782008-09-19T07:15:00.000+05:302008-09-19T07:15:00.000+05:30you asked me to stay strong, no fear and jst move ...you asked me to stay strong, no fear and jst move on. Im going to stay the same, with a shoulder to cry. :) hugs.gPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07439371766182405053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-46627860605568564942008-09-19T05:01:00.000+05:302008-09-19T05:01:00.000+05:30My favorite lines:"letting my fingers read youpaus...My favorite lines:<BR/><BR/><I>"letting my fingers read you<BR/>pausing at the difficult words"</I><BR/><BR/>Beautiful!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-73172821336197878282008-09-19T03:23:00.000+05:302008-09-19T03:23:00.000+05:30"whispers filled my earspermeating into each of my..."whispers filled my ears<BR/>permeating into each of my pores<BR/>drenching me <BR/>with the essentiality of you"<BR/><BR/>Wow, oh, wow! "essentiality" just blew me away!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-39496362852159315952008-09-19T03:14:00.000+05:302008-09-19T03:14:00.000+05:30Oh, I loved the last line- it encapsules the rest ...Oh, I loved the last line- it encapsules the rest of the poem so well...<BR/>Great job, Gautami!Reginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14287107184977896696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-67758179499168862872008-09-19T03:00:00.000+05:302008-09-19T03:00:00.000+05:30"the essentiality of you" was a great line!"the essentiality of you" was a great line!Kimberleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17787970553045999626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-57360725207415538932008-09-19T02:44:00.000+05:302008-09-19T02:44:00.000+05:30Nice work!! I like the way you started with whispe...Nice work!! I like the way you started with whispers and ended there, as well. The quote at the end tells so much.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-35428395358553420022008-09-19T02:22:00.000+05:302008-09-19T02:22:00.000+05:30Wow Gautami, That's passion like it's going outta ...Wow Gautami, That's passion like it's going outta fasion!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-11750238392046044442008-09-18T21:24:00.000+05:302008-09-18T21:24:00.000+05:30This was utterly perfect for my mood today!This was utterly perfect for my mood today!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15334812243182354729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-90336612065659445932008-09-18T20:23:00.000+05:302008-09-18T20:23:00.000+05:30Deeply felt. Excellent.Deeply felt. Excellent.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-2757346012486647542008-09-18T17:06:00.000+05:302008-09-18T17:06:00.000+05:30Nice poem.:)Nice poem.:)venuss66https://www.blogger.com/profile/17804023747114879683noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-63708389004629330402008-09-18T10:17:00.000+05:302008-09-18T10:17:00.000+05:30Rings true for me.How about 'careless whispers'?"I...Rings true for me.<BR/><BR/>How about 'careless whispers'?<BR/><BR/>"I should have known better than to cheat a friend<BR/>And waste a chance that I've been given.<BR/>So I'm never gonna dance again<BR/>the way I danced with you.<BR/><BR/>Time can never mend the careless whispers of a good friend.<BR/>To the heart and mind ignorance is kind.<BR/>There's no comfort in the truth<BR/>pain is all you'll find.<BR/>I'm never gonna dance again<BR/>guilty feet have got no rhythm"<BR/><BR/>George Michael @ WHAMRomeo Morningwoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10826410608415260786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-84754575962017383372008-09-18T07:17:00.000+05:302008-09-18T07:17:00.000+05:30Excellent poem . Tum kaise ho?Excellent poem . Tum kaise ho?cyclopsevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11440123931878867581noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-72737531079369561522008-09-18T06:13:00.000+05:302008-09-18T06:13:00.000+05:30it has been forever, but your link has always been...it has been forever, but your link has always been active on my site. This topic looked interesting and wow, the poetry has evovled. Nothing like a year ago. You should almost just pick one at random and compare. I finally picked up a pen again and I can't stop, but I will always write my way. You obviously have many many facets. Excellent poem!Clockworkchrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09889793842709699969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-43767729166891693342008-09-18T04:55:00.000+05:302008-09-18T04:55:00.000+05:30Wow, Gautami!That was pretty passionate and full o...Wow, Gautami!<BR/><BR/>That was pretty passionate and full of feeling! Lovely. That's what makes the world go round.WithinWithouthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05545398587099834271noreply@blogger.com