tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post1330868808547797111..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: Waiting......[Fiction] Fridaygautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-66278821489438055162007-08-18T10:34:00.000+05:302007-08-18T10:34:00.000+05:30After the first few lines, of course I knew what w...After the first few lines, of course I knew what was coming... until the end. What a great stark image to have her with a knife under her pillow. And her favorite knife at that. I've missed your previous entries, but I look forward to future Fridays!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-89582975270147556172007-08-18T04:32:00.000+05:302007-08-18T04:32:00.000+05:30Sounds like how you would behave!Ok maybe not, put...Sounds like how you would behave!<BR/>Ok maybe not, put down that knife.... come on be a good girl!<BR/>:-)Stevehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16715829842292110540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-74610876238765304382007-08-18T02:15:00.000+05:302007-08-18T02:15:00.000+05:30Nice job...and I love the fact that we have a poet...Nice job...and I love the fact that we have a poet participating...Dale Challener Roehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04605721172822135196noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-67074667295609023112007-08-18T02:10:00.000+05:302007-08-18T02:10:00.000+05:30You put so many of the childlike habits into such ...You put so many of the childlike habits into such a small space! Very clever...Yeah, I wouldn't want to make her mad.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-88022195651526019132007-08-18T01:11:00.000+05:302007-08-18T01:11:00.000+05:30I had thought to combine them all, but didn't. You...I had thought to combine them all, but didn't. You blew it out of the water, it worked so well, like it was meant to be.Marcia (MeeAugraphie)https://www.blogger.com/profile/00656288704821106002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-85864173107016228112007-08-17T23:49:00.000+05:302007-08-17T23:49:00.000+05:30I loved it!I loved it!Boricua in Texashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10408201125366918838noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-795715867461820572007-08-17T22:25:00.000+05:302007-08-17T22:25:00.000+05:30I really love how you rolled all of the traits int...I really love how you rolled all of the traits into one character. Wonderful piece of prose.<BR/><BR/>:),<BR/>Jenjenihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04510876745659994876noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-34326167279666712372007-08-17T22:10:00.001+05:302007-08-17T22:10:00.001+05:30Enjoyed this and I am glad to have found your blog...Enjoyed this and I am glad to have found your blogYolandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10135944573305009556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-30507001338877424192007-08-17T22:10:00.000+05:302007-08-17T22:10:00.000+05:30ooops.......Michele says hello and so do i!ooops.......Michele says hello and so do i!awarenesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06098432781380754899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-86695399298661527532007-08-17T22:09:00.000+05:302007-08-17T22:09:00.000+05:30Hey Gautami.......the intensity increases as you r...Hey Gautami.......the intensity increases as you read along.....<BR/><BR/>I love your word tripping here....great work!!awarenesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06098432781380754899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-52340005146659336202007-08-17T22:08:00.000+05:302007-08-17T22:08:00.000+05:30Very enjoyable read. I'm sure it was as much fun t...Very enjoyable read. I'm sure it was as much fun to write.Paulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08136225187552117043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-54287986114629948522007-08-17T21:42:00.000+05:302007-08-17T21:42:00.000+05:30Excellent imagination, Guatami. You write so well....Excellent imagination, Guatami. You write so well.<BR/><BR/>Michele sent me here.Jean-Luc Picardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01689798190618944262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-32082430746457628272007-08-17T21:16:00.000+05:302007-08-17T21:16:00.000+05:30Great! It's a nice continued piece from last week....Great! It's a nice continued piece from last week.lissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00706027242022517570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-79719692672136230212007-08-17T21:11:00.000+05:302007-08-17T21:11:00.000+05:30these are wonderful, gautami. they will be nice ad...these are wonderful, gautami. they will be nice additions to your book...Don Iannone, D.Div., Ph.D.https://www.blogger.com/profile/01922412641433868679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-18826972310920132562007-08-17T21:03:00.000+05:302007-08-17T21:03:00.000+05:30wow! more great stuff!wow! more great stuff!polonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-26653850861640219642007-08-17T20:28:00.000+05:302007-08-17T20:28:00.000+05:30That writing has a nice energy to it! Lots of pen...That writing has a nice energy to it! Lots of pent up aggresion in many of those actions which is a nice contrast to them being associted with more child-like things.<BR/><BR/>I think we all display child-like behaviours sometimes. Michele sent me over to admit to liking too much ketchup and chocolate milk!Bobkathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842625953465490864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-79613697062632675622007-08-17T20:27:00.000+05:302007-08-17T20:27:00.000+05:30HEY! you are having WAY too much fun with the lang...HEY! you are having WAY too much fun with the language. <BR/>my compliments on your playfulness.David Edwardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02690273066219097101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-25619581163997250312007-08-17T17:20:00.000+05:302007-08-17T17:20:00.000+05:30Whoa, Gautami! I wouldn't want to be her enemy. I...Whoa, Gautami! I wouldn't want to be her enemy. I like the flow of your story. Good job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com