tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post168641305759777486..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: Abysm-----3WWgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-5280586402249448402007-07-02T07:53:00.000+05:302007-07-02T07:53:00.000+05:30ok so one disadvanage of being late on yours...Gay...ok so one disadvanage of being late on yours...Gay and TC totally nailed it! I agree with them! wow. always amazing!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-2828137747333778282007-07-01T13:01:00.000+05:302007-07-01T13:01:00.000+05:30You truly did this well.You truly did this well.Marcia (MeeAugraphie)https://www.blogger.com/profile/00656288704821106002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-41195155224771496742007-06-30T18:02:00.000+05:302007-06-30T18:02:00.000+05:30A few lines really hit home with me, " I hurl all ...A few lines really hit home with me, " I hurl all care " and " festers of agony that no can see." This is a great poetic use of the words.Clockworkchrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09889793842709699969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-31052219155056335502007-06-29T17:00:00.000+05:302007-06-29T17:00:00.000+05:30Well, TC stole my comment. That was my favorite l...Well, TC stole my comment. That was my favorite line, too.<BR/><BR/>I tried a poem this week, as well.Bonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10096591352278195759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-46548743221614571732007-06-28T23:45:00.000+05:302007-06-28T23:45:00.000+05:30no real excuses for all that I truly resent-This l...<I>no real excuses for all that I truly resent-</I><BR/><BR/>This line got me. <BR/><BR/>I think this is true for most of us: why do we resent what we do? There aren't excuses for it... it just is.TChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02487739742081226423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-17029641692678042262007-06-28T20:12:00.000+05:302007-06-28T20:12:00.000+05:30I'm envious of sonnet writers and yours was excell...I'm envious of sonnet writers and yours was excellent.Xinhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03501092550620255199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-17174488995469172302007-06-28T10:30:00.000+05:302007-06-28T10:30:00.000+05:30another wonderful poem -- no, I haven't given up o...another wonderful poem -- no, I haven't given up on my attempt to write a sonnet -- some day it will finish. :)J. Andrew Lockharthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12567156257114496618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-84110563342364000802007-06-28T08:42:00.000+05:302007-06-28T08:42:00.000+05:30This is soooo good. And to think I'd never have re...This is soooo good. And to think I'd never have read it if it weren't for 3WW. You have a gift with words.Ma Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02227496793296772405noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-33917226289068843782007-06-28T05:23:00.000+05:302007-06-28T05:23:00.000+05:30Truly leaves much to ponderTruly leaves much to ponderAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-65416339047581175752007-06-28T04:31:00.000+05:302007-06-28T04:31:00.000+05:30i love the fullness of your word choices...i'm so ...i love the fullness of your word choices...i'm so glad i discovered great writers like you through 3ww.BeLoved....https://www.blogger.com/profile/01771614142603767239noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-67726113566606477242007-06-28T02:17:00.000+05:302007-06-28T02:17:00.000+05:30you really excel at sonnets.what feelings!you really excel at sonnets.<BR/>what feelings!polonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-50976465263611275812007-06-28T01:25:00.000+05:302007-06-28T01:25:00.000+05:30with much thought . . .with much thought . . .Shelbyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02757079675613448834noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-89642855343261402982007-06-28T01:24:00.000+05:302007-06-28T01:24:00.000+05:30when i feel like that i confess that i reach for t...when i feel like that i confess that i reach for the open air<BR/>or the vodka<BR/>rather than a pen<BR/>well doneflootshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01530734765701940680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-42649460683069030442007-06-28T00:55:00.000+05:302007-06-28T00:55:00.000+05:30I hurl all care,no real excuses for all that I tru...I hurl all care,<BR/>no real excuses for all that I truly resent-<BR/>lone moments have crinkles engraved there<BR/><BR/>You say so much, leave so much to ponder.<BR/><BR/>--GayGayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09308862059975983327noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-7382119984066425882007-06-27T23:36:00.000+05:302007-06-27T23:36:00.000+05:30steve: writing poetry sometimes comes natural!ces:...steve: writing poetry sometimes comes natural!<BR/><BR/>ces: I do struggle at times.<BR/><BR/>nasra: Do take care. Cyclones never do us any good.<BR/><BR/>sage: Sonnets tend to flow from me!<BR/>and those words struck a chord!<BR/><BR/>rose: I have had this kind of feeling all day long today. <BR/><BR/>finn: Thanks for the visit.<BR/><BR/>h.e.: One has to do everythin in style!<BR/><BR/>ozymandiaz: In a way, yes it is.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-52336264711856856632007-06-27T23:26:00.000+05:302007-06-27T23:26:00.000+05:30this one is toughhalf tongue twisterhalf heart twi...this one is tough<BR/>half tongue twister<BR/>half heart twisterozymandiazhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07891897071966903895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-4106867747263277792007-06-27T23:02:00.000+05:302007-06-27T23:02:00.000+05:30I genuinely wish that I had"no real excuses for al...I genuinely wish that I had<BR/>"no real excuses for all that I truly resent" for they are legion.<BR/><BR/>However all of my disdain for the injustice in this ridiculous world is "beyond cure."<BR/><BR/>Methinks that the Lady dost protest with stylish lucidity.Romeo Morningwoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10826410608415260786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-83079970147620182112007-06-27T19:34:00.000+05:302007-06-27T19:34:00.000+05:30Nice sonnet; well done.Michele sent me today!Nice sonnet; well done.<BR/><BR/>Michele sent me today!Meganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15049341972075281915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-82423942872238662352007-06-27T18:14:00.000+05:302007-06-27T18:14:00.000+05:30I love the opening line, it shows a person unable ...I love the opening line, it shows a person unable to move away from the edge.<BR/><BR/>Hope you are doing well and are refreshed after your break.<BR/><BR/>Rose<BR/><BR/>xoAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-58427987649561177412007-06-27T17:40:00.000+05:302007-06-27T17:40:00.000+05:30wow--Bone hasn't his words up very long--good job!...wow--Bone hasn't his words up very long--good job!sagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-30357690683890483922007-06-27T17:23:00.000+05:302007-06-27T17:23:00.000+05:30It feel like that ...Many thanks for sharing with ...It feel like that ...Many thanks for sharing with us ur thoughts.. a gentle reminder on LIP, I know its taking me so long but with all what we had down here ..we are getting back to normal after the cycloneiamnasrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16030794699915000249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-53074253184246490682007-06-27T17:14:00.000+05:302007-06-27T17:14:00.000+05:30Now who else could have written a poem about abysm...Now who else could have written a poem about abysm? You are a word warrior Gautami.Ces Adoriohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17338000465619901229noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-60348706585849590112007-06-27T16:13:00.000+05:302007-06-27T16:13:00.000+05:30Sometimes you simple amaze me with your shear bril...Sometimes you simple amaze me with your shear brillianceStevehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16715829842292110540noreply@blogger.com