tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post2367412721057947633..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: beguiling timegautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-67276141015426442632011-05-17T01:56:14.059+05:302011-05-17T01:56:14.059+05:30So often we choose to ignore what we don't und...So often we choose to ignore what we don't understand.. I think you have brought that tendency very beautifully here, Gautami...Kavitahttp://kavisionz.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-91158342467323497212011-05-16T01:10:46.700+05:302011-05-16T01:10:46.700+05:30Lovely poem, Gautami! I like how the narrator beg...Lovely poem, Gautami! I like how the narrator begins complacent in his situation and then challenges himself more and more: how can two unlike beings merge, and finally "When did I turn to stone?" Good progression, good points. LoveMargaret Pangerthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09995968579194433270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-10668483531868149762011-05-13T00:11:03.191+05:302011-05-13T00:11:03.191+05:30A great economy of language and very expressive.A great economy of language and very expressive.James Rainsfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12981399551842327691noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-69294020553357219822011-05-13T00:02:44.256+05:302011-05-13T00:02:44.256+05:30some life's going on while other things die......some life's going on while other things die...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-70984718934795853882011-05-12T20:32:16.941+05:302011-05-12T20:32:16.941+05:30Time stops for no one...Time stops for no one...Helena Whitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03022290127423654311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-26928246737339152912011-05-12T19:48:40.318+05:302011-05-12T19:48:40.318+05:30A mystical take on an unusual promptA mystical take on an unusual promptJinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-8794177045359641582011-05-12T09:47:30.637+05:302011-05-12T09:47:30.637+05:30When? I know not, so I must continue moving befor...When? I know not, so I must continue moving before I become a stationary masonary. Nice/ Should "difference" read "different"? Just wondering.Jerryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04874006676004790578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-2962333856796587712011-05-12T07:47:25.438+05:302011-05-12T07:47:25.438+05:30Intriging.Intriging.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-22217417231636048742011-05-12T07:34:26.042+05:302011-05-12T07:34:26.042+05:30keep it up.
check out short story slam and welcom...keep it up.<br /><br />check out short story slam and welcome your submission.Bluebell Books Twitter Clubhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02346482636849975765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-29073650372037149072011-05-12T02:26:58.517+05:302011-05-12T02:26:58.517+05:30I wonder if St. Francis had to confront what he di...I wonder if St. Francis had to confront what he didn't understand; or if he understood what others couldn't comprehend. I always thought of him like Van Gogh with special talents to whisper to horse and speak to the birds. His abilities however probably have turned to stone as Van Goghs have dried on canvas. Never in either case, to be duplicated. Interesting piece. Thank you. GayBeachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-2244707660077910652011-05-11T22:08:28.191+05:302011-05-11T22:08:28.191+05:30Nice One Shot, Gautami... solid as a rock! :)Nice One Shot, Gautami... solid as a rock! :)Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-40242271631990622942011-05-11T17:20:09.199+05:302011-05-11T17:20:09.199+05:30Gorgeous - so succintGorgeous - so succintAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-80819768004847474032011-05-11T09:36:18.326+05:302011-05-11T09:36:18.326+05:30So meaningful and rich.So meaningful and rich.Radhikahttp://dailysketchings.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-88616091680269574552011-05-11T09:17:11.058+05:302011-05-11T09:17:11.058+05:30Succinct, but with so many layers of meaning. Beau...Succinct, but with so many layers of meaning. Beautiful.Mystic Margaritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10043803636315553905noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-19701091236866212962011-05-11T08:33:41.102+05:302011-05-11T08:33:41.102+05:30cute magpie,
keep wondering, bless you.cute magpie,<br /><br />keep wondering, bless you.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-43561730607361576172011-05-11T08:17:47.467+05:302011-05-11T08:17:47.467+05:30Very nice. And if you turn to stone, you know what...Very nice. And if you turn to stone, you know what the birds will use you for...Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-48513480608632987252011-05-11T08:07:32.633+05:302011-05-11T08:07:32.633+05:30in a false sense to protect ourselves maybe...in a false sense to protect ourselves maybe...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-29304108116445118242011-05-11T07:57:41.824+05:302011-05-11T07:57:41.824+05:30Great question at the end, tying into my favorite ...Great question at the end, tying into my favorite lines "I can't confront <br />what I don't comprehend." You express a contemplative, perhaps unanswerable, search very well.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-37171813046783298172011-05-11T07:51:25.980+05:302011-05-11T07:51:25.980+05:30Sometimes we turn to stone because of the cards de...Sometimes we turn to stone because of the cards dealt our way!ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-71633204366182697922011-05-11T04:41:40.051+05:302011-05-11T04:41:40.051+05:30Time, we all must give in.Time, we all must give in.Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.com