tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post2689011477262238601..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: a day in a child's lifegautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-14154297851224721822009-07-11T22:12:45.658+05:302009-07-11T22:12:45.658+05:30well written...
the pain of the child, was well s...well written... <br />the pain of the child, was well structured in the poem...Leohttp://leoimpromptu.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-26114199398586372952009-07-11T10:38:44.930+05:302009-07-11T10:38:44.930+05:30Wow..great innocent emotions...well put...I like i...Wow..great innocent emotions...well put...I like itMeghahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08456122349556682811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-7070368093023459552009-07-11T09:01:20.944+05:302009-07-11T09:01:20.944+05:30vivid indeedvivid indeedWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-43632015737805633912009-07-10T19:39:23.174+05:302009-07-10T19:39:23.174+05:30it's not as gloomy as I expected, I thought so...it's not as gloomy as I expected, I thought something more tragic than a broken toy, but that can mean more to a child than anything else, makes me think of a parent trying to soothe a child, something almost intimidate in a waylissahttp://www.justwritingwords.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-44005980369983760302009-07-10T16:54:52.361+05:302009-07-10T16:54:52.361+05:30Your poem is alive with the simple way to please a...Your poem is alive with the simple way to please a child! If only we always remembered that simple is beautiful!Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-13567824061002990352009-07-10T16:16:04.133+05:302009-07-10T16:16:04.133+05:30The scene is everyday-like. But the rhythmn is tak...The scene is everyday-like. But the rhythmn is taking me with it.<br /><br />Best wishes<br />RalfRalf Brökerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08602494065251750620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-22100785939261151442009-07-10T10:44:46.753+05:302009-07-10T10:44:46.753+05:30I mend them as best I can, too, but unfortunately ...I mend them as best I can, too, but unfortunately I can not mend them very well. Very little is sadder than a broken toy, especially one bought with one's own money at a special place.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-69267511389832857842009-07-09T22:00:35.864+05:302009-07-09T22:00:35.864+05:30I love it...and I want to give him a hug!!I love it...and I want to give him a hug!!angiehttp://therer2doors.wordpress.com/2009/07/08/subterfuge3ww/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-57271778370622871152009-07-09T16:26:44.829+05:302009-07-09T16:26:44.829+05:30i liked this...
you really have a way with words....i liked this...<br /><br />you really have a way with words...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-83352592521447060272009-07-09T14:02:12.890+05:302009-07-09T14:02:12.890+05:30Brings a tear to my eyes!
Well written!
<3Brings a tear to my eyes! <br />Well written!<br /><3andyhttp://naisaiku.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-11144316707347460502009-07-09T10:51:16.403+05:302009-07-09T10:51:16.403+05:30I love the construction here. So nicely done, as ...I love the construction here. So nicely done, as always.Ann (bunnygirl)http://www.maelstromrock.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-23351626800306298972009-07-09T10:19:20.652+05:302009-07-09T10:19:20.652+05:30cleverly done - it IS a day in a child's life....cleverly done - it IS a day in a child's life... enjoyable read!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-57163422903230700712009-07-09T09:45:23.265+05:302009-07-09T09:45:23.265+05:30Nicely done.Nicely done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-9560800883397347502009-07-09T09:26:32.874+05:302009-07-09T09:26:32.874+05:30What a lovely poem, so true to the sometimes dark ...What a lovely poem, so true to the sometimes dark spirit of childhood. You are endlessly clever.sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03818420999930644450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-21952216350085981132009-07-09T09:05:26.971+05:302009-07-09T09:05:26.971+05:30Lovely poem..Lovely poem..Jeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-48853466612178388642009-07-09T08:30:49.785+05:302009-07-09T08:30:49.785+05:30Excellent uses of these words ... love the twists ...Excellent uses of these words ... love the twists in meaning from beginning to end of poem. Wonderful.<br /><br />Peace,<br />JP/debJP/debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16588554280207421724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-14801206468403463062009-07-09T07:03:30.766+05:302009-07-09T07:03:30.766+05:30The mood was captured to perfection.The mood was captured to perfection.Stan Skihttp://says-sir-ten.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-11640383355470156262009-07-09T06:55:00.543+05:302009-07-09T06:55:00.543+05:30You nailed it:) I love the visual of the inconsola...You nailed it:) I love the visual of the inconsolable kid...<br /><br />I am in a gloomy mood too :)Anya Padyamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05292308457359940182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-67015895798243578312009-07-08T23:37:13.382+05:302009-07-08T23:37:13.382+05:30This was me last weekend with my granddaughter! W...This was me last weekend with my granddaughter! Wow, you totally captured it perfectly!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-18695130249196199292009-07-08T23:34:47.651+05:302009-07-08T23:34:47.651+05:30you leave me amazed !!!! loved this :)you leave me amazed !!!! loved this :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-70145554962642542772009-07-08T22:15:14.067+05:302009-07-08T22:15:14.067+05:30You do marvelous things with words.
great job!You do marvelous things with words.<br /><br />great job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-53442119333412728232009-07-08T20:52:14.611+05:302009-07-08T20:52:14.611+05:30Sometimes a child can't be consoled no matter ...Sometimes a child can't be consoled no matter what. It just takes time for him to release all his sadness. Well written, as always. Hope all is well. Have a great day.poefusionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15157059633840032305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-45143786300624392222009-07-08T20:46:31.312+05:302009-07-08T20:46:31.312+05:30The construction of this is excellent. And the ima...The construction of this is excellent. And the images riveting. Gloomy, yes, but with feeling. And that counts for something.Thom Gabrukiewiczhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-1813459094202848062009-07-08T19:40:05.964+05:302009-07-08T19:40:05.964+05:30Yes, those tears can pull us along. Excellently do...Yes, those tears can pull us along. Excellently done.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-61748227999710148092009-07-08T19:32:20.883+05:302009-07-08T19:32:20.883+05:30I loved this one. Gloomy or not, I always look for...I loved this one. Gloomy or not, I always look forward to your vivid imagination and wonderful way with words!Sherri B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.com