tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post2787956766738981641..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: exulting mixturegautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-59197620193231363472009-10-20T12:46:04.064+05:302009-10-20T12:46:04.064+05:30Very creative, nice readVery creative, nice readRekhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07325404106975842879noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-62659809387088788532009-10-17T10:04:45.888+05:302009-10-17T10:04:45.888+05:30Good job!Good job!Zouxzouxhttp://www.zouxzoux.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-61610437280109166422009-10-17T02:48:48.042+05:302009-10-17T02:48:48.042+05:30quite impressive word choice...
very well writtenquite impressive word choice...<br />very well writtenRajlakshmihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05947753574286557864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-44699335955118397602009-10-16T22:54:57.924+05:302009-10-16T22:54:57.924+05:30I noticed that we both started with lines that rea...I noticed that we both started with lines that read [adjective] [noun] of [noun]. I wonder if many others did and, if so, why.EKSwitajhttp://www.elizabethkateswitaj.net/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-10931560180477533152009-10-16T22:49:28.286+05:302009-10-16T22:49:28.286+05:30nicely done Guatami...love that exploding ending.....nicely done Guatami...love that exploding ending...thanks for sharingWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-66000842255824376192009-10-16T20:51:37.249+05:302009-10-16T20:51:37.249+05:30Wow. Not a single word left unspent, and so succin...Wow. Not a single word left unspent, and so succinct as well! Bravo, GuatamiJulie Jordan Scotthttp://juliejordanscott.typepad.com/jjspoetry/2009/10/renegades-soul-progeny-readwritepoem-get-your-poem-on-96.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-64673125493144822222009-10-16T05:08:48.140+05:302009-10-16T05:08:48.140+05:30A thunder and lightning of words, crushing down on...A thunder and lightning of words, crushing down on my late-night-brain, kicking away the romantic idea of a friendly moon. Good one.<br /><br />Best wishes<br />RalfRalf Brökerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08602494065251750620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-16319819380833875172009-10-16T02:56:03.727+05:302009-10-16T02:56:03.727+05:30So impressed...you did it! I found the words impo...So impressed...you did it! I found the words impossible this week, yet you were able to string together the mass of them into something artistic...good for you!Cynthia Shorthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12386358503730817278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-40819839952033166922009-10-15T23:05:14.156+05:302009-10-15T23:05:14.156+05:30I love your ending, Gautami:
words need to cool d...I love your ending, Gautami:<br /><br /><i>words need to cool down before<br />exploded chelations hit me hard</i>Paul Oakleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17426789386840488470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-57948943973685553672009-10-15T22:57:59.862+05:302009-10-15T22:57:59.862+05:30Namaste, you certainly were able to put all the Wo...Namaste, you certainly were able to put all the Wordle together, something I found impossible to accomplish. Good rhythm too.<br />Regards,<br />DHAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-53101046084911494692009-10-15T22:02:02.916+05:302009-10-15T22:02:02.916+05:30yep. you nailed ityep. you nailed itAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-7233203887159605822009-10-15T21:39:21.235+05:302009-10-15T21:39:21.235+05:30from Therese L. Broderick -- someone once told me ...from Therese L. Broderick -- someone once told me that a good poem is one which works even if only the last words of each line are read. This poem passes that test very well! Read just these last words: internet...language...croak...vehement...together...rebrobates...me...low...before...hardAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-25104734721004543402009-10-15T21:10:09.694+05:302009-10-15T21:10:09.694+05:30A meta-poem on the words themselves -- I liked the...A meta-poem on the words themselves -- I liked the approach and enjoyed the read.<br /><br />-NicoleRaven's Wing Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08576438868694047958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-71631833788380400852009-10-15T20:59:46.230+05:302009-10-15T20:59:46.230+05:30I hope they don't hit you too hard.
This make...I hope they don't hit you too hard.<br /><br />This make me smile. That alone makes it worthwhile...markhttp://radio-nowhere.org/nb/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-85218273206288520482009-10-15T20:55:04.670+05:302009-10-15T20:55:04.670+05:30I don't 'do' poetry, but this makes me...I don't 'do' poetry, but this makes me want to...Sarahhttp://www.sarahbbc.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-52734091983878183702009-10-15T20:15:53.356+05:302009-10-15T20:15:53.356+05:30Hi Gautami,
This certainly sounds good to me!Hi Gautami,<br /><br />This certainly sounds good to me!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00861397533660827678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-49425276172442133982009-10-15T20:05:59.508+05:302009-10-15T20:05:59.508+05:30a very creative piece. hope all is well.a very creative piece. hope all is well.poefusionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15157059633840032305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-19312632464531470902009-10-15T18:23:01.387+05:302009-10-15T18:23:01.387+05:30I really like the idea of spam as progeny of the i...I really like the idea of spam as progeny of the internet, and of spam both exulting and croaking. Dead on great perception, and use of the words.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-69671311883627995642009-10-15T18:18:26.950+05:302009-10-15T18:18:26.950+05:30Compacted, concise and creative. The mixture works...Compacted, concise and creative. The mixture works<br />Gautami. Thank you for your clever approach.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03241402645242821612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-47978025995347300082009-10-15T16:38:13.901+05:302009-10-15T16:38:13.901+05:30Oh yeah love the cosmoranic rebrobates lol great g...Oh yeah love the cosmoranic rebrobates lol great great expressionLorrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-32877707428738433272009-10-15T15:45:35.385+05:302009-10-15T15:45:35.385+05:30Inventive use of spam.Inventive use of spam.Irenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12918979903066830662noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-19330689328989789232009-10-15T15:28:13.387+05:302009-10-15T15:28:13.387+05:30A great use of the words.A great use of the words.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.com