tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post2982810650019879161..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: ambiguously so---for want of better title...3WWgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-8293107849067557482007-09-22T03:52:00.000+05:302007-09-22T03:52:00.000+05:30Beautiful emotion... raw, bare, sad and through it...Beautiful emotion... raw, bare, sad and through its honesty, true beauty. Love it.Gayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09308862059975983327noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-52981230904709203382007-09-21T10:47:00.000+05:302007-09-21T10:47:00.000+05:30Hi Gautami! Devastating and heartbreaking about al...Hi Gautami! Devastating and heartbreaking about all the children who have lost parents and other family and friends due to "mindless blast". You wrote this so beautifully, and I was so relieved this little girl has a new home. <BR/>:)Clarehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11746014771712020963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-75901830175743613162007-09-21T08:05:00.000+05:302007-09-21T08:05:00.000+05:30What words can I leave here that everyone else bef...What words can I leave here that everyone else before me hasn't already said? This is so sad, beautiful and happy all at once. You are truly a gifted writer.<BR/><BR/>Michelle Johnsonpoefusionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15157059633840032305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-3647983312245909652007-09-21T04:12:00.000+05:302007-09-21T04:12:00.000+05:30she sleptat last, when clock struck nine,her world...she slept<BR/><BR/>at last, when clock struck nine,<BR/>her world fallen apart. the epistle<BR/>had hit home taking all shine<BR/><BR/>from her.<BR/><BR/>Beautiful, GautamiAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-18128860931881897272007-09-21T03:29:00.000+05:302007-09-21T03:29:00.000+05:30Love the way this reads, with all articles removed...Love the way this reads, with all articles removed.<BR/><BR/>And I agree with Jo and Romancewriter about my favorite part.Bonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10096591352278195759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-87749100397102645422007-09-21T01:54:00.000+05:302007-09-21T01:54:00.000+05:30so sad and yet something beautiful to be found...so sad and yet something beautiful to be found...polonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-9426790146676068382007-09-20T16:19:00.000+05:302007-09-20T16:19:00.000+05:30Nice. Beautiful.But please stop emailing me things...Nice. Beautiful.<BR/><BR/>But please stop emailing me things like this:<BR/><BR/>as an afterthought<BR/>that reminds me, ennui setting in,<BR/>apparently, for no reason, I have been bored<BR/>with you of late.<BR/><BR/>you shameless lion you.Writing on Boardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03586187888418224291noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-82090135459025804082007-09-20T11:04:00.000+05:302007-09-20T11:04:00.000+05:30I'm very impressed by the poem that came out of yo...I'm very impressed by the poem that came out of your three-word prompt. Definitely has a raw emotion to it. Wonderful, Gautami.Julia Phillips Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-13489474681061942352007-09-20T09:28:00.000+05:302007-09-20T09:28:00.000+05:30It oozes emotion both sweet and bitter.It oozes emotion both sweet and bitter.Stevehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16715829842292110540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-19429045514322673992007-09-20T07:29:00.000+05:302007-09-20T07:29:00.000+05:30wow I have to say this has got to be one of my fav...wow I have to say this has got to be one of my favorites...the emotion was just so raw...I love that someone was watching over her.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-30780130267506466622007-09-20T05:42:00.000+05:302007-09-20T05:42:00.000+05:30such a sad truth... may none of us ever have to li...such a sad truth... may none of us ever have to live with the realization that all we have ever known,,, is gone.....paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-1947695777269603392007-09-20T05:16:00.000+05:302007-09-20T05:16:00.000+05:30i like! =)i like! =)Therhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00032674476317023443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-68016566782407922982007-09-20T04:29:00.000+05:302007-09-20T04:29:00.000+05:30very nicely executed. :)~Svery nicely executed. :)<BR/>~SShephardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07318615370914088651noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-83652177969587406542007-09-20T04:24:00.000+05:302007-09-20T04:24:00.000+05:30I feel so small next to work like this.Nice piece,...I feel so small next to work like this.<BR/>Nice piece, Guatami. So emotional, so moving.bonemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01615987464724590203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-27750080744969017232007-09-20T01:56:00.000+05:302007-09-20T01:56:00.000+05:30Some great lines in here, for sure - nice take on ...Some great lines in here, for sure - nice take on this prompt!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-43640057157369098202007-09-20T00:41:00.000+05:302007-09-20T00:41:00.000+05:30I feel somewhat guilty finding beauty in something...I feel somewhat guilty finding beauty in something so sad, but you did an excellent job with this. A tragic event.TChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02487739742081226423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-24670017596723927812007-09-20T00:28:00.000+05:302007-09-20T00:28:00.000+05:30nicely done!nicely done!sagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-28614210787424640862007-09-19T23:36:00.000+05:302007-09-19T23:36:00.000+05:30The ending brings closure to the poem.The ending brings closure to the poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-66829793899841924412007-09-19T22:53:00.000+05:302007-09-19T22:53:00.000+05:30loved this linethe epistlehad hit home taking all ...loved this line<BR/>the epistle<BR/>had hit home taking all shine<BR/><BR/>from her.<BR/><BR/>gorgeous.RomanceWriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14920489469191764147noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-61873160330396254952007-09-19T22:11:00.000+05:302007-09-19T22:11:00.000+05:30at last, when clock struck nine,her world fallen a...at last, when clock struck nine,<BR/>her world fallen apart. the epistle<BR/>had hit home taking all shine from her<BR/><BR/>This is lovely, so lovely. I enjoyed your take....Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15149139820474072721noreply@blogger.com