tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post3004521780189054530..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: Saluting the poetic words....an experiment...gautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-8094436045703259552007-01-29T23:30:00.000+05:302007-01-29T23:30:00.000+05:30Thanks anon.
gel: I know you have been visiting ...Thanks anon. <br /><br />gel: I know you have been visiting me. Sorry I got to you late. I will chk out your archives.gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-55075526188610024722007-01-29T11:28:00.000+05:302007-01-29T11:28:00.000+05:30I love the phrases and the visual effect you use. ...I love the phrases and the visual effect you use. I sometimes use a cascading effect in my poetry, too.<br />Like this phrase "Vison of poets' sparkle in hands, imaginings asccending to the sky." <br /><br />(I didn't participate in Poetry Thurs. this past week, but I have for other times. Plese check out my archives, by clicking on the Poetry Thursday category on the right sidebar of my blog.)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-77881588075900822692007-01-28T23:37:00.000+05:302007-01-28T23:37:00.000+05:30I love this. Words cascade, falling, hitting the ...I love this. Words cascade, falling, hitting the page, my favorite way of writing.Anonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05081985008634647284noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-15259924978959076212007-01-28T20:56:00.000+05:302007-01-28T20:56:00.000+05:30Thanks deborah, cate and clockworkchris. I appreci...Thanks deborah, cate and clockworkchris. I appreciate your visits and comments.gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-30352254679945342822007-01-28T03:58:00.000+05:302007-01-28T03:58:00.000+05:30I loved this poem. I am taking my time to get aro...I loved this poem. I am taking my time to get around Poetry Thursday's entries this week but thanks for visiting me. My favorite stanza was the last one.Clockworkchrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09889793842709699969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-12294303336789771152007-01-28T03:30:00.000+05:302007-01-28T03:30:00.000+05:30A lovely tribute you've created here!A lovely tribute you've created here!Catehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10202276151927596999noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-69776992437159546792007-01-28T01:24:00.000+05:302007-01-28T01:24:00.000+05:30I like the construction of this poem! JPI like the construction of this poem! JPJP (mom)https://www.blogger.com/profile/03120439923927414464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-61633867095864481642007-01-27T14:40:00.000+05:302007-01-27T14:40:00.000+05:30leonie: Ah well! Welcome! Thanks!
sideon: Thanks ...leonie: Ah well! Welcome! Thanks!<br /><br />sideon: Thanks and welcome. Just one of those things!<br /><br />polona: Thanks. Next I think I should be reading out loud!<br /><br />Ghosty: Architecture! Well I never thought like that!<br /><br />firebird: Thanks. I cringe when I see my earlier works.gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-52101477966429156322007-01-27T09:51:00.000+05:302007-01-27T09:51:00.000+05:30Gautami--I can see you growing in confidence and p...Gautami--I can see you growing in confidence and power in the short time I've known your work--<br />love the shapes in this poem, and the thoughts are so strong and clear...Yeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08924005848870170400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-70978892314650950222007-01-27T01:11:00.000+05:302007-01-27T01:11:00.000+05:30amazing! had a very good architecture to it!amazing! had a very good architecture to it!gPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07439371766182405053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-23653031185026372322007-01-27T00:44:00.000+05:302007-01-27T00:44:00.000+05:30i love how this weaves through the page, through t...i love how this weaves through the page, through the mind.<br />well done!polonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-41997235651476772012007-01-26T23:50:00.000+05:302007-01-26T23:50:00.000+05:30Wonderful poem. The lines, the spacing, the rhyth...Wonderful poem. The lines, the spacing, the rhythm - it's very beautiful. <br /><br />Be well!<br /><br />-DonavanSideonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00563675498159890372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-86468047851271002222007-01-26T16:07:00.000+05:302007-01-26T16:07:00.000+05:30I love the way you have used the page to lay out y...I love the way you have used the page to lay out your beautiful thoughts. BBrichard piercehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03648720482758520891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-65150396095871195082007-01-26T12:00:00.000+05:302007-01-26T12:00:00.000+05:30oooooh! makes me all tingley! love it.oooooh! makes me all tingley! love it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-39232362659539311602007-01-26T11:46:00.000+05:302007-01-26T11:46:00.000+05:30dnake1: thanks so much. It does not!
pat: Thanks....dnake1: thanks so much. It does not!<br /><br />pat: Thanks. I love to read you too.<br /><br />norma: welcome here. Thanks!gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-17257305128787022052007-01-26T11:45:00.000+05:302007-01-26T11:45:00.000+05:30Margie: I wrote how I really about poetry.
perciv...Margie: I wrote how I really about poetry.<br /><br />percival: Pause, gaze, stay. <br /><br />andrew: That comment is god send!<br /><br />floots: I appreciate that you consider it a success.gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-8330576783450997122007-01-25T19:15:00.000+05:302007-01-25T19:15:00.000+05:30I love how you shaped the poem with words and phra...I love how you shaped the poem with words and phrasing.Normahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11502895616873273470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-29706850199696986942007-01-25T17:33:00.000+05:302007-01-25T17:33:00.000+05:30Agree with the others "poetry is a sun in the nigh...Agree with the others "poetry is a sun in the night"! Very good Gautami!!Pat Paulkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03673667238840127360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-81661992891735982442007-01-25T17:25:00.000+05:302007-01-25T17:25:00.000+05:30"dreaming never dies", yes!
love this piece."dreaming never dies", yes!<br /><br />love this piece.dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-32780762831158480022007-01-25T13:22:00.000+05:302007-01-25T13:22:00.000+05:30consider this experiment a success :)
poetry is i...consider this experiment a success :)<br />poetry is indeed a sun in the night<br />(and this is a fine example of it)flootshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01530734765701940680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-81937859948848776312007-01-25T09:14:00.000+05:302007-01-25T09:14:00.000+05:30I love how you set this one up! When I was reading...I love how you set this one up! When I was reading it, the rhythm was strong, since my head moved back and forth. Nice!J. Andrew Lockharthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12567156257114496618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-91835573919859397052007-01-25T08:46:00.000+05:302007-01-25T08:46:00.000+05:30In turn, I trippingly wander this lane, pausing on...In turn, I trippingly wander this lane, pausing only to fetchingly salute this poeme and Poetess.<br /><br />Coyly,<br />PercyPaulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14770384445526387065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-92028646186549264282007-01-25T08:23:00.000+05:302007-01-25T08:23:00.000+05:30Gautami...this is very wonderful!
I especially lov...Gautami...this is very wonderful!<br />I especially love...<br /><i> Poerty-salute it as the sun in the night; illuminating the lane it walks. </i> Beautiful!<br /><br />You write some beautiful stuff!<br /><br />MargieMargiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14433759763753850718noreply@blogger.com