tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post3340329799901154591..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: that thin linegautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger40125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-39676323526063137232009-07-14T21:48:51.856+05:302009-07-14T21:48:51.856+05:30very deep! the last line was absolutely wonderful!...very deep! the last line was absolutely wonderful!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-79579822679522213912009-07-14T20:19:48.784+05:302009-07-14T20:19:48.784+05:30This fantasy feels so real. Wonderfully done.This fantasy feels so real. Wonderfully done.Patois42https://www.blogger.com/profile/07764936858778730692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-34853218918444783522009-07-14T19:45:50.699+05:302009-07-14T19:45:50.699+05:30Your close observation of the jade stone opens up ...Your close observation of the jade stone opens up worlds of possibility -- and a lovely poem which shifts and circles around the relationship. Another surprise!bluebethleyhttp://bethandwriting.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-873541797609933732009-07-14T19:42:26.719+05:302009-07-14T19:42:26.719+05:30beautiful words!beautiful words!ifhttp://www.wordiminuta.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-32938880626313118592009-07-14T08:54:50.184+05:302009-07-14T08:54:50.184+05:30Truly inspired, luminous, this one. The eternal c...Truly inspired, luminous, this one. The eternal circling. The cymbals of time rattle the bones.gabriellenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-47368644894804182412009-07-14T03:16:20.977+05:302009-07-14T03:16:20.977+05:30I liked the second stanza where 'you' are ...I liked the second stanza where 'you' are called out of your trance. But did it stop your thinking process?<br />Thanks for writing this, I enjoyed your transition and the mystic jade stone (I have one of those, in the raw).<br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-28274632218558751362009-07-14T02:28:23.344+05:302009-07-14T02:28:23.344+05:30I too, love the mystical tone of this poem.I too, love the mystical tone of this poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-37557826589251286942009-07-13T19:09:46.524+05:302009-07-13T19:09:46.524+05:30You put thinking into a whole new arena ... I love...You put thinking into a whole new arena ... I love the contrast, especially the "jade stone" .. it's magical.Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)https://www.blogger.com/profile/14722413697537828830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-3512810621099252102009-07-13T09:31:23.092+05:302009-07-13T09:31:23.092+05:30Love those opening lines ...
in those stones
bet...Love those opening lines ... <br /><br /><i>in those stones<br />between the cracks<br />I see history</i><br /><br />peace,<br />JP/debJP/debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16588554280207421724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-39702090017645169942009-07-13T02:36:57.307+05:302009-07-13T02:36:57.307+05:30I feel like I just stepped into an Escher painting...I feel like I just stepped into an Escher painting.Nara Malonehttp://narasnook.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-3388683386598264272009-07-13T01:16:16.245+05:302009-07-13T01:16:16.245+05:30Lovely, as always.Lovely, as always.Thom Gabrukiewiczhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-15415798584551690182009-07-12T22:19:30.865+05:302009-07-12T22:19:30.865+05:30Deep and mysterious, a flash revealed, out of time...Deep and mysterious, a flash revealed, out of time and place but still anchored. You've layed out these paradoxes masterfullly!Deborah Godinhttp://notesfromthecloudmessenger.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-84136118813159756072009-07-12T21:41:59.077+05:302009-07-12T21:41:59.077+05:30Love this one.The layers of history.Love this one.The layers of history.Jeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-5540209060373565032009-07-12T21:34:00.384+05:302009-07-12T21:34:00.384+05:30I like how you capture the history that can reside...I like how you capture the history that can residem wordless, in objects, can be conjured in the mind out of tactile impressions, and transport us out of time and space.sgreerpitthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07764262558160301061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-81303092682466242162009-07-12T21:00:23.828+05:302009-07-12T21:00:23.828+05:30I love the surrealism in this, The daydream becomi...I love the surrealism in this, The daydream becoming reality. Or is this the other way around?spacedlawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12462723005560128474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-46553183010011513322009-07-12T20:30:55.481+05:302009-07-12T20:30:55.481+05:30Indeed...I feel there is a fine line between time ...Indeed...I feel there is a fine line between time and mind.Maggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02023472067047797430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-50013816921213082882009-07-12T19:19:35.707+05:302009-07-12T19:19:35.707+05:30feel like a fantasy, like those stories where peop...feel like a fantasy, like those stories where people travel anywhere by their own thoughtslissahttp://www.justwritingwords.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-65285251400487079732009-07-12T18:07:26.907+05:302009-07-12T18:07:26.907+05:30This reminded me of my tours to historical places ...This reminded me of my tours to historical places ( i just love it)....very true that you get lost in such indulgences....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-44360049895218727262009-07-12T16:03:05.416+05:302009-07-12T16:03:05.416+05:30Jade ~ wealth on many levels. A dramatic image to ...Jade ~ wealth on many levels. A dramatic image to use linking what was and what is! <br />Lovely secondary illusions haunt this poem too! Cymbals may clash, but may simply be there for attention and importance! <br />A most ineresting poem!Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-51573497867191681582009-07-12T15:54:32.470+05:302009-07-12T15:54:32.470+05:30The look of surprise made my heart jump!The look of surprise made my heart jump!SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-22812822928001358142009-07-12T14:24:30.782+05:302009-07-12T14:24:30.782+05:30This reminds me of Freedom's PlaceThis reminds me of Freedom's PlaceWhitesnakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-6274200002903246072009-07-12T14:15:31.609+05:302009-07-12T14:15:31.609+05:30brilliant as ever !!brilliant as ever !!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-75020596375603060492009-07-12T12:58:52.304+05:302009-07-12T12:58:52.304+05:30Straight from the soul, that one.Straight from the soul, that one.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-9156247041854835202009-07-12T12:44:57.296+05:302009-07-12T12:44:57.296+05:30Sometimes something like a jade stone can help us ...Sometimes something like a jade stone can help us through a rough patch by being a sort of presence.<br />Excellent piece!Edward S Gaulthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06415140379858811855noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-6492168010354128842009-07-12T11:20:56.685+05:302009-07-12T11:20:56.685+05:30The jade really brought color to your words. And ...The jade really brought color to your words. And these lines especially stood out to me:<br /><br /><i>I am amazed to see myself<br />in a skyscrapper<br />staring out of the window<br />to a place that doesn't exist</i>Bonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10096591352278195759noreply@blogger.com