tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post3376253636000969388..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: about fish, chips and nothing else muchgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-7192018161935295082010-09-25T10:40:39.624+05:302010-09-25T10:40:39.624+05:30i like the sense of freedom u r writing with...i like the sense of freedom u r writing with...ms piehttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2010/09/23/inamorata/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-31551564569252742662010-09-24T06:46:23.733+05:302010-09-24T06:46:23.733+05:30Nicely done- I am so glad he got away! This was r...Nicely done- I am so glad he got away! This was really cute~Pattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04993186190720192589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-38181001170219201462010-09-23T21:51:41.723+05:302010-09-23T21:51:41.723+05:30I like fish 'n' chips a whole lot.
But I s...I like fish 'n' chips a whole lot.<br />But I suppose I should be glad this one got away. <br />It is a cute little poem. I love your idea.<br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-66770763482911109042010-09-20T22:55:41.616+05:302010-09-20T22:55:41.616+05:30they also can enjoy life!they also can enjoy life!Sandra.ifhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07861930312460679629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-14114928207941307932010-09-20T22:24:21.860+05:302010-09-20T22:24:21.860+05:30So in the end the fish wins freedom I loved the en...So in the end the fish wins freedom I loved the ending it was nice to see the world through the yeys of the fish that got away!Amanda Moorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11631827449933791507noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-12547263279414537932010-09-20T07:11:28.252+05:302010-09-20T07:11:28.252+05:30http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/09/poetry-po...http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/09/poetry-potluck-bedazzled.html<br /><br />potluck is open, if you have old poems to share, link in NOW,<br />you will benefit the best if you act and get in early.<br />Thanks for the participation!<br />Happy Sunday!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-42997924918776165272010-09-20T04:50:23.416+05:302010-09-20T04:50:23.416+05:30I always tend to root for the underdog, so I'm...I always tend to root for the underdog, so I'm glad the little fish escaped! Very clever poem.Sherri B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-72309203336402611922010-09-20T02:15:56.663+05:302010-09-20T02:15:56.663+05:30new look is awesome !! and i love your story form ...new look is awesome !! and i love your story form poetry :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-50166600250053567592010-09-19T23:42:01.029+05:302010-09-19T23:42:01.029+05:30I think I know what you mean, but there are some r...I think I know what you mean, but there are some really good bits in here. I really like the jump, jump stanza and the whole idea of the fish siblings.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07490035808297516510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-72263282559273519962010-09-19T23:24:53.658+05:302010-09-19T23:24:53.658+05:30Escape from jaws of death can bring real joie de v...Escape from jaws of death can bring real joie de vivre! Well written.Harshad Mehtahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10747054432059631577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-38593573742984337182010-09-19T20:47:14.344+05:302010-09-19T20:47:14.344+05:30Isn't it amazing how we can all look at the sa...Isn't it amazing how we can all look at the same painting and be inspired to go in so many different directions with our poems! Well done!Mariannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17734900426632493796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-60083931682498773632010-09-19T17:59:30.308+05:302010-09-19T17:59:30.308+05:30Even though I'm the wife of a fisherman, I'...Even though I'm the wife of a fisherman, I'm secretly cheering for the little guy!<br /><br />I've had major writer's block so haven't been around but I love the new look of your blog!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09156972661541133665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-34558252563218666072010-09-19T16:58:05.029+05:302010-09-19T16:58:05.029+05:30It was lovely they escaped but I really was expect...It was lovely they escaped but I really was expecting a meal somewhere in there!<br />It is, though, a reminder that the elation of freedom is not limited to us. Reading Northanger Abbey yesterday I was reminded that "the poor beetle, which we tread upon, in corporal sufferance feels a pang as great as when a giant dies." It has much the same sentiments as your poem.Aoife.Troxelhttp://twowritersdaily.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-80620585739106253522010-09-19T12:22:33.821+05:302010-09-19T12:22:33.821+05:30I can imagine the siblings singing and dancing and...I can imagine the siblings singing and dancing and laughing and the fish having real joy of living.. yes that's what freedom does.. A lovely write.. Gautami..<br /><br />http://rameshsood.blogspot.com/2010/09/my-100th-post-of-2010-for-osi-hh.htmlRamesh Soodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-69670717259301388112010-09-19T08:51:25.442+05:302010-09-19T08:51:25.442+05:30Nice Gautami!
PamelaNice Gautami!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-37483943868868166792010-09-19T04:41:29.110+05:302010-09-19T04:41:29.110+05:30I too, like the fact that the little one got away....I too, like the fact that the little one got away. But, I also agree with Viv, let it sit for a week, then go back and take another look. I do that often, sometimes find a line or two, sometimes only needs a tweak in a certain direction. And sometimes I just decide that maybe it needs to hibernate for a bit longer. Good luck, whatever you decide.<br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://1sojournal.wordpress.com/2010/09/18/fishing-lessons/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-83450489951582601802010-09-19T04:06:23.127+05:302010-09-19T04:06:23.127+05:30Nicely written! So much talk of fish is actually m...Nicely written! So much talk of fish is actually making me a bit hungry, LOL! Awesome post! =)<br /><br />-WeaselWeaselhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12467584502095433332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-44813513361360159822010-09-19T03:16:05.634+05:302010-09-19T03:16:05.634+05:30I am glad it got away! :-)I am glad it got away! :-)Susannahhttp://panopticulated.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-87473007684541032962010-09-19T02:39:41.092+05:302010-09-19T02:39:41.092+05:30Nice, and I now want fish for dinner!Nice, and I now want fish for dinner!sagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-39442664793950817452010-09-19T00:11:54.947+05:302010-09-19T00:11:54.947+05:30Viv, thanks. I took down what I wrote there on my ...Viv, thanks. I took down what I wrote there on my post. <br /><br />Let the reader decide, what he/she thinks of this poem.gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-50156075574944234722010-09-18T23:51:21.647+05:302010-09-18T23:51:21.647+05:30A fish that frees itself is to be celebrated. My ...A fish that frees itself is to be celebrated. My poem has that aspect in it also!!Diane Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15886778060199433214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-71529655778335819982010-09-18T22:57:28.822+05:302010-09-18T22:57:28.822+05:30Hurrah for the fish that got away. Cheering for t...Hurrah for the fish that got away. Cheering for the 'little guy' here.<br /><br />I agree with Viv.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-23190724497484878832010-09-18T22:51:06.213+05:302010-09-18T22:51:06.213+05:30I loved this and I'm glad the little fishes go...I loved this and I'm glad the little fishes got away!Deborahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06231195313149947101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-24980120723536873772010-09-18T22:22:45.188+05:302010-09-18T22:22:45.188+05:30Ah, fish and chips. I'm hungry now. nice one.Ah, fish and chips. I'm hungry now. nice one.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-40834508816935756692010-09-18T22:19:51.625+05:302010-09-18T22:19:51.625+05:30Leave it fallow for a week, and you'll be surp...Leave it fallow for a week, and you'll be surprised - either you'll love it to bits, or corrective action will present itself to you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com