tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post3539614606265019549..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: rosy maskgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-57035879377364366792010-04-25T06:56:08.836+05:302010-04-25T06:56:08.836+05:30Hi Tami, very nice!Hi Tami, very nice!Tammy Brierlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-38711885801538175532010-04-25T00:16:47.545+05:302010-04-25T00:16:47.545+05:30truly a paradox. such beauty wearing a crown of t...truly a paradox. such beauty wearing a crown of thornsgabriellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14488809730387509552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-16254497331143976732010-04-23T14:57:46.168+05:302010-04-23T14:57:46.168+05:30Very true. Nicely done.Very true. Nicely done.BlueMisthttp://everythingincoherrent.wordpress.com/2010/04/23/mask-3/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-52142691192920074972010-04-22T20:54:41.685+05:302010-04-22T20:54:41.685+05:30Life is very sad and fleeting. Love comes and goes...Life is very sad and fleeting. Love comes and goes before you realize it was the one true love<br />Beautiful.<br /><br /><br />MelanieCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-37250550484962405252010-04-22T16:18:50.698+05:302010-04-22T16:18:50.698+05:30beautiful one Gautami....:)
i like how u did the ...beautiful one Gautami....:)<br /><br />i like how u did the prompt..., it's just simply amazing!<br /><br />and some of your followers just made some more wonders, isn't it?<br /><br />thanks for supporting my prompt!<br /><br />AmityAmityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18222122594130598313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-85269947105850179042010-04-22T07:16:08.391+05:302010-04-22T07:16:08.391+05:30such a sweet melody to this poem. very beautiful i...such a sweet melody to this poem. very beautiful imagery, great use of alliteration. i like it :) also interesting to see how it reads backwards, very nice. reminds me of something silly i wrote once (a form of poetry that someone i knew made up):<br /><br />Baiser Immortel / Immortal Kiss<br /><br /><br />His rose lips wet, his heartbeat still<br />Absent regret, leans in to kill<br />A suck so tame, her skin so sweet<br />Love bite does claim, her life complete<br />As ivory seeks deeper lust<br />He hungrily devours thus<br />And penetrates, down to the soul<br />Reveals the fate, by moon-light stole <br />By moon-light stole, revealing fate<br />Down to her soul, he penetrates<br />Devouring, so hungrily<br />Seeks deeper lust, with ivory<br />Her life complete, love bite does claim<br />Her skin so sweet, a suck so tame<br />Leans in to kill, absent regret<br />His heartbeat still, his rose lips wetDorinnyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18287923169420830693noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-33496172645194285462010-04-22T06:41:56.320+05:302010-04-22T06:41:56.320+05:30This was lovely...something so beautiful and maske...This was lovely...something so beautiful and masked as well- perfetPattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04993186190720192589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-56784258744687926032010-04-21T20:51:14.642+05:302010-04-21T20:51:14.642+05:30lovely words
many have wondered at the rose behind...lovely words<br />many have wondered at the rose behind the thorns<br />perhaps so that we approach with presence and appreciation.Tammie Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09018402134070834516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-142833906102938442010-04-21T07:34:47.657+05:302010-04-21T07:34:47.657+05:30beautiful words that caught me in a twist. always...beautiful words that caught me in a twist. always wondered why those thorns were there.George S Battyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15407137341843413701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-68662875975741409642010-04-20T10:39:36.876+05:302010-04-20T10:39:36.876+05:30The rose is a bit of a paradox, isn't it?The rose is a bit of a paradox, isn't it?Ann (bunnygirl)http://www.ampino.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-84200063398121243972010-04-19T18:17:37.682+05:302010-04-19T18:17:37.682+05:30hm people do that dont they, hide their pain behin...hm people do that dont they, hide their pain behind thorns. <br /><br />love the poemUnderstanding Alicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05150753279967941766noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-2827218249706865832010-04-19T09:20:50.905+05:302010-04-19T09:20:50.905+05:30a mask....a way to protect......a mask....a way to protect......Sandra.ifhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07861930312460679629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-40944655626286790882010-04-19T08:08:18.393+05:302010-04-19T08:08:18.393+05:30Very nice, and I like that B pointed out it can be...Very nice, and I like that B pointed out it can be read in both directions. Doubly cool!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-62275688004004515212010-04-19T07:40:50.320+05:302010-04-19T07:40:50.320+05:30balance in everything. point and counterpoint. b...balance in everything. point and counterpoint. beautifully done.Dee Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-5423139244877759112010-04-19T05:09:22.079+05:302010-04-19T05:09:22.079+05:30A lovely poem about wonder and beauty, protection ...A lovely poem about wonder and beauty, protection and pain.Thomma Lynhttp://www.thommalyngrindstaff.com/stories/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-56214665237196081792010-04-19T02:52:33.477+05:302010-04-19T02:52:33.477+05:30Beautiful tale of what it feels like to be wearing...Beautiful tale of what it feels like to be wearing a mask. The mask doesn't change things but it gives us a place to hide from the rest. :)<br />..Jimhttp://jimmiehov6.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-23359201334014463382010-04-19T00:38:24.462+05:302010-04-19T00:38:24.462+05:30Now do it in reverse Quatami.
I wonder why
behind...Now do it in reverse Quatami.<br /><br />I wonder why<br />behind the mast of thorns<br />the rose hides its pain<br /><br />we sing paeans to it<br /><br />fires our love<br />its wholeness<br />touches our soul<br />the subtle scent<br /><br />into our being<br />tender gentleness<br />the delicate petal<br />velvety soft.<br /><br />It read beautifully either way. Thank you.<br /><br />bbhttp://www.retireinstyleblog.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-9264777696885342022010-04-19T00:12:54.264+05:302010-04-19T00:12:54.264+05:30is it rose season in Dehli? I like the images--th...is it rose season in Dehli? I like the images--the feel and smellsagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-42791466665863216782010-04-18T20:37:17.079+05:302010-04-18T20:37:17.079+05:30A wonderfully gentle, yet vivid, poem. The scent o...A wonderfully gentle, yet vivid, poem. The scent of roses wafted across my imagination while reading it.MissMelisshttp://www.missmeliss.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-67689361521111754532010-04-18T20:12:11.597+05:302010-04-18T20:12:11.597+05:30so much easier to share pleasure than pain? n'...so much easier to share pleasure than pain? n'est-ce pas ma chere?Lorrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-50704928513250034672010-04-18T18:45:13.943+05:302010-04-18T18:45:13.943+05:30Very beautiful and thought provoking.Very beautiful and thought provoking.Denise Moncriefhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06793221574604284282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-13158083074827313982010-04-18T18:20:42.047+05:302010-04-18T18:20:42.047+05:30A soft and delicate poem. The visual image and me...A soft and delicate poem. The visual image and metaphor of the rose and thorns is excellent.Loch Robhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10912194134878544461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-37750379582808373362010-04-18T17:57:35.353+05:302010-04-18T17:57:35.353+05:30You have me wondering why, too. Beautifully done.You have me wondering why, too. Beautifully done.SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-22649613144561322732010-04-18T17:43:33.181+05:302010-04-18T17:43:33.181+05:30It makes you think...and do a lot of human compari...It makes you think...and do a lot of human comparisons. Thanks for the lovely poem.Lilibethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04031218249072893776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-28690718950655267402010-04-18T14:26:11.047+05:302010-04-18T14:26:11.047+05:30lovely work.lovely work.Aayushi Mehtahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08360324719537614250noreply@blogger.com