tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post3981488531489683202..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: Somedaygautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-76652343692953958042008-10-10T07:38:00.000+05:302008-10-10T07:38:00.000+05:30I normally don't like rhyming poems, but this is n...I normally don't like rhyming poems, but this is nice and if it were spoken, it'd flow really well. <BR/><BR/>Good sites!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-72350227831863905272008-09-30T19:01:00.000+05:302008-09-30T19:01:00.000+05:30God I love this! You pull off internal rhyme well....God I love this! You pull off internal rhyme well. I choked back tears reading this. <BR/><BR/>Thank you for posting this.<BR/><BR/>-NicoleRaven's Wing Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08576438868694047958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-32945639588855429062008-09-27T20:09:00.000+05:302008-09-27T20:09:00.000+05:30This reminds me of Hamlet saying "tis an unweeded ...This reminds me of Hamlet saying "tis an unweeded garden that goes to seed."<BR/><BR/>I really like this side of you! You let your emotions hang out and that really makes the poem!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-15769841164939787472008-09-27T09:33:00.000+05:302008-09-27T09:33:00.000+05:30The poem goes so well with the image. I don't know...The poem goes so well with the image. I don't know whether you intended it or not, but I like to imagine the speaker looking into a mirror.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-49031525423770962992008-09-27T05:25:00.000+05:302008-09-27T05:25:00.000+05:30very poignant! and very true...very poignant! and very true...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-18441926959441167492008-09-27T03:16:00.000+05:302008-09-27T03:16:00.000+05:30Desire battles patience - nice piece! Love the ima...Desire battles patience - nice piece! Love the image too! Thanks for sharing...get zappedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07716557355765204155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-13385654995000859202008-09-27T02:34:00.000+05:302008-09-27T02:34:00.000+05:30Passion in both language and feelings. Pure gautam...Passion in both language and feelings. Pure gautami, with a rhyming twist.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-60381519204194096212008-09-26T20:38:00.000+05:302008-09-26T20:38:00.000+05:30i like the soulfulness found in your poem, very ni...i like the soulfulness found in your poem, very nice indeed. Thank you for sharing it.J. S. Clawsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18199974452998250456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-63677752660993370862008-09-26T20:09:00.000+05:302008-09-26T20:09:00.000+05:30You really get a sense of intense longing and I lo...You really get a sense of intense longing and I love the internal rhyme.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-19840130607357508542008-09-26T15:50:00.000+05:302008-09-26T15:50:00.000+05:30Keeps on waiting. Nice work. Have a great weekend....Keeps on waiting. Nice work. Have a great weekend.venuss66https://www.blogger.com/profile/17804023747114879683noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-65674925750996320812008-09-26T09:53:00.000+05:302008-09-26T09:53:00.000+05:30The voice you are writing in here seems to call ou...The voice you are writing in here seems to call out for someone you already created in your mind's eye.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-77227681072169499002008-09-26T04:25:00.000+05:302008-09-26T04:25:00.000+05:30The torment of knowing exactly what we want, but w...The torment of knowing exactly what we want, but will we ever have it?Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-78767889284578661662008-09-26T03:51:00.000+05:302008-09-26T03:51:00.000+05:30I enjpyed this...it has a natural rhythm that let ...I enjpyed this...it has a natural rhythm that let the words talkAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-53582566384059112082008-09-26T00:40:00.000+05:302008-09-26T00:40:00.000+05:30a lot of yearning and a beautiful rhythm. love ita lot of yearning and a beautiful rhythm. love itpolonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-9895288783854580172008-09-25T23:39:00.000+05:302008-09-25T23:39:00.000+05:30I agree with Carole that the rhyme gives this piec...I agree with Carole that the rhyme gives this piece a certain urgency. And, there's nothing wrong with waiting for that special someone to come along. We've all had to do that at one point or another in our lives. Well done. Have a nice day.poefusionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15157059633840032305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-2722332122518843202008-09-25T22:57:00.000+05:302008-09-25T22:57:00.000+05:30Yes!!Yes!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-2131617479492975762008-09-25T22:32:00.000+05:302008-09-25T22:32:00.000+05:30Almost a monologue to a loved one! Nice work--Almost a monologue to a loved one! Nice work--Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-20822184780765480302008-09-25T22:00:00.000+05:302008-09-25T22:00:00.000+05:30I understand but you can't get 'gun shy'. We all m...I understand but you can't get 'gun shy'. We all make mistakes when we first start out but we need to learn from them and move on.<BR/><BR/>We make our own luck in this world <BR/><BR/>it would be a mistake<BR/>don't hesitate <BR/>to find a mate<BR/>why sit back and wait for fate <BR/>they may arrive too little too late<BR/>and then you'll say<BR/>well that's just great<BR/><BR/>*closes Dr Seuss BookRomeo Morningwoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10826410608415260786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-60128510488557726842008-09-25T18:25:00.000+05:302008-09-25T18:25:00.000+05:30This is a cry from the soul!This is a cry from the soul!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-30058788780263359112008-09-25T17:18:00.000+05:302008-09-25T17:18:00.000+05:30"...dream-cluttered gutters of my brain" - this su..."...dream-cluttered gutters of my brain" - this sums up the conflict that goes on in my brain every day!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15334812243182354729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-35544706878139757612008-09-25T16:37:00.000+05:302008-09-25T16:37:00.000+05:30This is a very unusual one!This is a very unusual one!Art and Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01991284507367796696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-56404876995607631142008-09-25T14:59:00.000+05:302008-09-25T14:59:00.000+05:30I love the music that goes on and on Sweet I hope ...I love the music that goes on and on <BR/><BR/>Sweet <BR/><BR/>I hope you still recall who am I <BR/><BR/>Nasra Al AdawiAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-45450323891406164452008-09-25T14:43:00.000+05:302008-09-25T14:43:00.000+05:30The rhymes give it an immediacy, an urgency, so th...The rhymes give it an immediacy, an urgency, so that it becomes an entreaty to the loved one. I think you're a week ahead of me. I've been word fishing.<BR/><BR/><A HREF="http://watermaid.wordpress.com/2008/09/25/platos-cave-re-visited/" REL="nofollow">Plato's Cave Re-visited</A>carolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08020421002889991849noreply@blogger.com