tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post4111716093185253404..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: wrench my dreamsgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-28386608257836736152012-04-06T23:40:54.470+05:302012-04-06T23:40:54.470+05:30I think I know what you mean.I think I know what you mean.Paul Martinnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-55341092318810461972012-03-23T22:40:14.094+05:302012-03-23T22:40:14.094+05:30Cheers for gears! The ones that allow us to pump o...Cheers for gears! The ones that allow us to pump our blood, and hear our voices... Sing loud, long and often!Juleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00571987715911379165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-87564634941968769332012-03-21T05:24:35.103+05:302012-03-21T05:24:35.103+05:30Great poem...multiple potential meanings.Great poem...multiple potential meanings.Anthony Hopperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15708347177061466201noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-1410650418603302252012-03-20T22:57:05.381+05:302012-03-20T22:57:05.381+05:30Another gem. Delightful.Another gem. Delightful.keiths ramblingshttp://www.keithsramblings.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-89989557244942168602012-03-20T20:14:38.461+05:302012-03-20T20:14:38.461+05:30"naked, raw and so honest" - and your wo..."naked, raw and so honest" - and your wording, the composition you've made, is so imaginative. The combination of "wrenching" and "dreams" is so exact, in fact.<br />Best, M.Mariya Kolevahttp://www.phoenix-em.com/mariyakolevanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-43631725686816106872012-03-20T01:29:13.043+05:302012-03-20T01:29:13.043+05:30Beautiful.....:-)Beautiful.....:-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-66375493871903830202012-03-20T01:05:38.374+05:302012-03-20T01:05:38.374+05:30lovely poemlovely poemKristen Haskellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07481526316071592146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-65512144460668145312012-03-19T23:51:45.350+05:302012-03-19T23:51:45.350+05:30thanks for a wonderful read... the gears of my min...thanks for a wonderful read... the gears of my mind are still churning to come up with a suitable response to this weeks mag..Lady In Readhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13791002474933656220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-14395623165387901702012-03-19T09:57:07.909+05:302012-03-19T09:57:07.909+05:30This is beautiful - it's a powerful, yet wistf...This is beautiful - it's a powerful, yet wistful, piece.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-63053487394496184932012-03-19T04:35:35.365+05:302012-03-19T04:35:35.365+05:30I very much like the hopefulness in this one.I very much like the hopefulness in this one.christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-52684011350977946932012-03-19T03:24:56.725+05:302012-03-19T03:24:56.725+05:30Scenes from Jean-Luc Godard's film Alphaville ...Scenes from Jean-Luc Godard's film <i>Alphaville</i> run through my head as I read your anagogic, powerful poem.Bruce, Haiku Waterhttp://haikuwater.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-31075161975772255932012-03-19T03:14:41.449+05:302012-03-19T03:14:41.449+05:30I could not live without music and I see the passi...I could not live without music and I see the passion here in your writing.Reneehttp://reneejustturtleflight.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-42699615643924384582012-03-19T03:14:26.870+05:302012-03-19T03:14:26.870+05:30I could not live without music and I see the passi...I could not live without music and I see the passion here in your writing.Reneehttp://reneejustturtleflight.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-45395175489912594542012-03-19T02:59:31.991+05:302012-03-19T02:59:31.991+05:30To listen to one's own singing is so important...To listen to one's own singing is so important. I'm glad the speaker in your poem is learning that art.<br /><br /><a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2012/03/18/haiku-and-senryu-a-bakes-half-dozen/" rel="nofollow">Whirling Haiku</a>Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-11080699162824790562012-03-19T01:53:53.938+05:302012-03-19T01:53:53.938+05:30Now THAT was good!Now THAT was good!Whitesnakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-53050527377957917372012-03-19T00:34:50.202+05:302012-03-19T00:34:50.202+05:30Gorgeous writing. The ending is superb.Gorgeous writing. The ending is superb.brenda whttp://undercaws.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-25781627326587186372012-03-19T00:28:08.636+05:302012-03-19T00:28:08.636+05:30the gears sing too
angular acceleration
verifica...the gears sing too<br /><br /><a href="http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2012/03/18/angular-acceleration/" rel="nofollow">angular acceleration</a><br /><br />verification makes it really hard to comment. you'd get more comments if you turned it offzongrikhttp://zongrik.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-1291224191146015832012-03-19T00:10:14.840+05:302012-03-19T00:10:14.840+05:30It looks like the new found gears are metaphorical...It looks like the new found gears are metaphorical for finding your way, a release from the old past, a door to a new life that has released a such potential that was not possible before. No wonder you are singing.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-23637273501937422752012-03-19T00:05:43.966+05:302012-03-19T00:05:43.966+05:30I also like "the gears / a miracle", as ...I also like "the gears / a miracle", as they are, indeed.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-73831998485475668102012-03-18T23:58:30.463+05:302012-03-18T23:58:30.463+05:30Thank you for sharing this with us. I can hear the...Thank you for sharing this with us. I can hear the music you hear and I adore the sound of it. Keep on singing.<br /><br />NamasteChevrefeuillehttp://chevrefeuillespoetryblog.blogspot.com/2012/03/lenten-haiku-journey-day-17-24.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-39750113163261454922012-03-18T23:47:04.104+05:302012-03-18T23:47:04.104+05:30I love your gift. Thanks for sharing!I love your gift. Thanks for sharing!Jim Calcutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07187421735684874906noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-56805265552155626782012-03-18T23:27:44.309+05:302012-03-18T23:27:44.309+05:30The gears of a miracle...I love that...The gears of a miracle...I love that...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-66343015435867354372012-03-18T23:12:29.409+05:302012-03-18T23:12:29.409+05:30Having 'command' is music in the key of li...Having 'command' is music in the key of life.I enjoyed your response. Thanks for sharing, Gautami.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03241402645242821612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-37063264197342839512012-03-18T23:05:14.499+05:302012-03-18T23:05:14.499+05:30It is indeed a miracle to find those gears. One th...It is indeed a miracle to find those gears. One that comes with age or wisdom, I believe.<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-57242907652357075772012-03-18T23:02:25.071+05:302012-03-18T23:02:25.071+05:30I am glad there is singing inside these mechanical...I am glad there is singing inside these mechanical dreams..like oil to make the gears turn more easily..JaeJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.com