tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post4347099862788731304..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: rolled into a corner---[Fiction] Fridaygautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-64111617941668020242007-10-22T01:34:00.000+05:302007-10-22T01:34:00.000+05:30ohhhh... what an ending!ohhhh... what an ending!polonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-20803684517219685502007-10-20T17:49:00.000+05:302007-10-20T17:49:00.000+05:30Good. Sad.Good. Sad.Boricua in Texashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10408201125366918838noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-63214786942356507582007-10-20T17:42:00.000+05:302007-10-20T17:42:00.000+05:30I have tears welled up in my eyes. You move the r...I have tears welled up in my eyes. You move the reader quickly and beautifully to a place of vulnerability.Jodi Cleghornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00808676742258881407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-58307512732191063232007-10-20T05:33:00.000+05:302007-10-20T05:33:00.000+05:30You wallow in the same place a lot!You wallow in the same place a lot!Whitesnakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-34725486154673653432007-10-20T04:17:00.000+05:302007-10-20T04:17:00.000+05:30Oh wow! I've felt similar feelings of contention j...Oh wow! I've felt similar feelings of contention just in the context of moving throughout my marriage. How much worse would it be with that kind of a loss. Very well done! Hear wrenchingly beautiful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-53160303877637472032007-10-20T03:49:00.000+05:302007-10-20T03:49:00.000+05:30It amazes me how vivid a scene can be painted with...It amazes me how vivid a scene can be painted with such terse words. I could really see what was going on. Nicely done. Care to guess what's on "my" roll of film? ;-)~willow~https://www.blogger.com/profile/09458164850031755362noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-12001961500794886932007-10-20T03:43:00.000+05:302007-10-20T03:43:00.000+05:30this reminds me of another piece i believe you did...this reminds me of another piece i believe you did about someones child dying... excellently done.. your link on ff is not working,, if you care to fix it.....paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-26335725002501426842007-10-20T03:02:00.000+05:302007-10-20T03:02:00.000+05:30It's set up that they're petty and childish themse...It's set up that they're petty and childish themselves, but then the punch in the gut that makes it so real and serious and unrecoverable at the end. Devastating.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-76249266793886482712007-10-19T23:01:00.000+05:302007-10-19T23:01:00.000+05:30very good postvery good postComputer Whizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11104031666738799967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-25844677965095205312007-10-19T22:00:00.000+05:302007-10-19T22:00:00.000+05:30hello, Michele sent me!hello, Michele sent me!Joehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07219266585315583870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-91457165199336293732007-10-19T21:52:00.000+05:302007-10-19T21:52:00.000+05:30flows like a river. cascades like a waterfall. won...flows like a river. cascades like a waterfall. wonderful.Russell CJ Duffyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00519621428036481426noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-4452406715647053412007-10-19T21:34:00.000+05:302007-10-19T21:34:00.000+05:30You are so talented. Michele sent me over to read...You are so talented. <BR/><BR/>Michele sent me over to read your poem.Geggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15475008970798645858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-2794418928931413812007-10-19T20:55:00.000+05:302007-10-19T20:55:00.000+05:30Hey there, your link isn't working over on Write S...Hey there, your link isn't working over on Write Stuff. Just thought you'd like to know. Yes, this does have a sad ending.....Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15149139820474072721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-84816532585753488362007-10-19T20:47:00.000+05:302007-10-19T20:47:00.000+05:30So sad. Very nice flow. I agree with lissa... the ...So sad. Very nice flow. I agree with lissa... the emotions going back and forth were so vivid.Penhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14007835767017361390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-67534167167222661162007-10-19T19:52:00.000+05:302007-10-19T19:52:00.000+05:30I can feel the emotions going back and forth betwe...I can feel the emotions going back and forth between him, her and the roll of film. Kind of sad reading the end.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com