tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post445983263651100016..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: a statementgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-18611385968027451942011-06-28T04:57:48.575+05:302011-06-28T04:57:48.575+05:30another fantastic tic write.
share 1 to 3 poems ...another fantastic tic write.<br /><br /><br />share 1 to 3 poems with poetry potluck week 41 today.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-87592085137722736882011-06-26T14:06:01.172+05:302011-06-26T14:06:01.172+05:30Wow, an amazing poem.Wow, an amazing poem.Madeleine Begun Kanehttp://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-22435744382814933562011-06-25T03:59:51.079+05:302011-06-25T03:59:51.079+05:30Gautami, I love how you hint at things and let the...Gautami, I love how you hint at things and let the rest of us try to figure out the meanings. Someone used the word enigmatic and that is the best and closest we might come. Another well written piece that begs one to go back for more,<br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-26694515422848666072011-06-24T17:43:31.587+05:302011-06-24T17:43:31.587+05:30Incredible poem, just wow I loved itIncredible poem, just wow I loved itAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-67413807571025415882011-06-24T17:30:14.549+05:302011-06-24T17:30:14.549+05:30a powerful statement!
i loved the intensity!
plus ...a powerful statement!<br />i loved the intensity!<br />plus your vision is something to marvel at..tarunimahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00924642457573448209noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-19966891776563476692011-06-24T11:45:11.809+05:302011-06-24T11:45:11.809+05:30I had to keep going back and re-reading this. Com...I had to keep going back and re-reading this. Compact, powerful enigmatic: 'your eyes lie to me' hint at the story behind what seems like antagonism between poet and portrait subject.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-69904472213961246662011-06-24T09:40:44.062+05:302011-06-24T09:40:44.062+05:30the fire...her eyes...your insight...amazing.the fire...her eyes...your insight...amazing.Conniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06055245047864169568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-73890535676410975022011-06-24T01:24:55.448+05:302011-06-24T01:24:55.448+05:30I felt this one......nicely done GautamiI felt this one......nicely done GautamiWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-45361716728717540092011-06-24T01:24:32.735+05:302011-06-24T01:24:32.735+05:30love it - esp. that last two lines...wonderfullove it - esp. that last two lines...wonderfulClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-86344564371834233682011-06-23T23:50:59.542+05:302011-06-23T23:50:59.542+05:30What an interesting and terrific write. Definitely...What an interesting and terrific write. Definitely a lot of emotion in this. : )Maggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00903678715925613725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-67158738152993148202011-06-23T23:21:13.060+05:302011-06-23T23:21:13.060+05:30Wow! This poem is filled with so much intrigue. &q...Wow! This poem is filled with so much intrigue. "fire on your neck"...nice<br /><br />Beautifully written.The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-68654325334935197912011-06-23T22:54:13.949+05:302011-06-23T22:54:13.949+05:30I could feel the pain and betrayal in this.I could feel the pain and betrayal in this.jabbloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12176958811589489979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-60083655646521011432011-06-23T22:03:30.775+05:302011-06-23T22:03:30.775+05:30Interesting take on the Magpie. Nice OSWInteresting take on the Magpie. Nice OSWKatherine Krigehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00737873330498032718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-56041233059988560052011-06-23T19:14:58.155+05:302011-06-23T19:14:58.155+05:30If only a tapestry could cover the times we’ve bee...If only a tapestry could cover the times we’ve been burned. Covered and forgotten is a dream. Alas, the sting lives on and scars remain.Mike Patrickhttp://thepoetsquill.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-68336221975930537752011-06-23T19:10:22.803+05:302011-06-23T19:10:22.803+05:30Nice!
I really like the light in that picture, but...Nice!<br />I really like the light in that picture, but couldn't find a way to catch it. I gave up and wrote a trite poem. You got it perfectly. wowbarbarahttp://briarcat.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-34960492329181951222011-06-23T19:09:45.526+05:302011-06-23T19:09:45.526+05:30This poem is quite intense! I am curious who she ...This poem is quite intense! I am curious who she is...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-38296756869353076822011-06-23T18:44:28.424+05:302011-06-23T18:44:28.424+05:30This is strong. Every word counts.
I love the mar...This is strong. Every word counts. <br />I love the margins of paradise.brenda whttp://undercaws.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-4224378812395736742011-06-23T18:29:41.186+05:302011-06-23T18:29:41.186+05:30Guatami, I missed your writing, and this is well d...Guatami, I missed your writing, and this is well done. Compact and full.nanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03445777687088584603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-78798190749976731822011-06-23T14:47:51.053+05:302011-06-23T14:47:51.053+05:30Maybe the margins of paradise are as much as we ca...Maybe the margins of paradise are as much as we can reasonably hope for? <br />http://www.wonderandlight.com/portfolio/gallery/margins_of_paradise/Charlotte Mooneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18240371530362165049noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-27086660317206076972011-06-23T14:23:52.229+05:302011-06-23T14:23:52.229+05:30Precise. Simple. Touchable. A common translatio...Precise. Simple. Touchable. A common translation of transition here. Beautifully done poem.neil reidhttp://bearlyaudible.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-84111261246135088662011-06-23T08:30:46.207+05:302011-06-23T08:30:46.207+05:30'in the margins of paradise' - a fine piec...'in the margins of paradise' - a fine piece!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-51626970966674279502011-06-23T03:05:47.595+05:302011-06-23T03:05:47.595+05:30There's the same intensity in your words here ...There's the same intensity in your words here as there is in those eyes there... <br />A very fine write indeed!Kavitahttp://kavisionz.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-42557399978056845402011-06-23T02:14:47.515+05:302011-06-23T02:14:47.515+05:30Great poem! Your imagination is excellent. I'd...Great poem! Your imagination is excellent. I'd never have thought about the light along her upper neck looking like fire! Great.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-82672836365992220822011-06-23T01:00:33.109+05:302011-06-23T01:00:33.109+05:30You had me at her burning neck. Accurate and inter...You had me at her burning neck. Accurate and interesting way of describing the image.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-17092186790679331532011-06-22T23:51:40.010+05:302011-06-22T23:51:40.010+05:30Right and to the point, strong piece.Right and to the point, strong piece.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.com