tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post448697530999540950..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: the waitinggautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-72378347909095036432009-10-31T10:10:39.424+05:302009-10-31T10:10:39.424+05:30Wow....How do you pull this interesting ones every...Wow....How do you pull this interesting ones every timeJeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-2209429318307450982009-10-31T08:39:25.617+05:302009-10-31T08:39:25.617+05:30the sounds set the stage, then there was motion, a...the sounds set the stage, then there was motion, a pause and an explosion. Very good take on the prompt.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-25906065594850395762009-10-31T03:50:10.211+05:302009-10-31T03:50:10.211+05:30Verrrrry interesting. I love the pacing and voice...Verrrrry interesting. I love the pacing and voice in this. Anticipation and tentativeness, foreboding. And the boom at the end. Very clean; I like it a lot.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-39228882594559117102009-10-31T01:44:48.981+05:302009-10-31T01:44:48.981+05:30I like how you begin with the sounds. I often for...I like how you begin with the sounds. I often forget to include those. They really make the poem come alive!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-84465291980615847792009-10-29T23:55:51.800+05:302009-10-29T23:55:51.800+05:30A nightmare well supported by the dream-like atmos...A nightmare well supported by the dream-like atmosphere you have painted.when the musics overhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16266298848244629919noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-638520275977962842009-10-29T22:36:21.497+05:302009-10-29T22:36:21.497+05:30mysterious and haunting, like some mystery novelsmysterious and haunting, like some mystery novelslissahttp://www.justwritingwords.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-20735824353473605182009-10-29T10:34:07.315+05:302009-10-29T10:34:07.315+05:30Terrific imagery and buildup, and not at all the e...Terrific imagery and buildup, and not at all the ending I expected. You've been reading ThomG too much! ;)Ann (bunnygirl)http://www.maelstromrock.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-22128567856095635422009-10-29T09:24:03.085+05:302009-10-29T09:24:03.085+05:30heyy..nice read..!!! blend of spookiness..:)heyy..nice read..!!! blend of spookiness..:)Mads...https://www.blogger.com/profile/18396027114150900038noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-61758420860457658172009-10-29T09:21:21.176+05:302009-10-29T09:21:21.176+05:30Wow - strong twist. Nice.Wow - strong twist. Nice.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-8703638078764757302009-10-29T05:54:38.800+05:302009-10-29T05:54:38.800+05:30Ewwww! Didn't expect that ending. Great job!!Ewwww! Didn't expect that ending. Great job!!Zouxzouxhttp://www.zouxzoux.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-39883571277132763852009-10-29T01:05:37.863+05:302009-10-29T01:05:37.863+05:30vengence of the dead? spooky.vengence of the dead? spooky.Daily Panichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06179183072566661932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-52702558079631832492009-10-29T00:24:30.894+05:302009-10-29T00:24:30.894+05:30very haunting, definately a step out of the ordina...very haunting, definately a step out of the ordinary for you eh?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-42138888541202186152009-10-28T21:30:36.481+05:302009-10-28T21:30:36.481+05:30An explosive ending, there.An explosive ending, there.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-73512783071685206172009-10-28T21:04:14.177+05:302009-10-28T21:04:14.177+05:30hauntingly vibrant.
Luridhauntingly vibrant. <br /><br /><a href="http://thomg.blogspot.com/2009/10/wednesdays-three-word-wednesday_28.html" rel="nofollow">Lurid</a>Thom Gabrukiewiczhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.com