tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post4504801622708357838..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: shaking it out, I dance to lifegautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-36627127107294097842013-08-20T15:18:05.897+05:302013-08-20T15:18:05.897+05:30I found your take on the prompt intriguing. Full ...I found your take on the prompt intriguing. Full of life and dance. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-5369179034373823422013-08-17T15:38:16.628+05:302013-08-17T15:38:16.628+05:30Pearls of wisdom in your poem. But the one that ju...Pearls of wisdom in your poem. But the one that jumped out the most was "I cannot wallow in self pity". Self pity usually takes us on a downward spiral. Nicely penned.<br /><br />Dropping by from OSI<br />Suzy at <a href="http://ilasoulpoems.blogspot.co.nz/2013/08/the-paper-and-tree.html" rel="nofollow">Reflections of my soul</a>Suzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05337531041006701719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-9801655798412552252013-08-14T11:22:17.117+05:302013-08-14T11:22:17.117+05:30may of taken me a while to get here but i am glad ...may of taken me a while to get here but i am glad i did a piece that makes you thinkChris Lawrencehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12082462583986448559noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-89093615722196807622013-08-13T16:09:27.348+05:302013-08-13T16:09:27.348+05:30A "tapestry of thoughts" we all have...A "tapestry of thoughts" we all have...Trellissimohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02283663872471564907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-45287092802528979662013-08-13T13:18:11.232+05:302013-08-13T13:18:11.232+05:30One should not dance to another's tune, It has...One should not dance to another's tune, It has to be our own way!! Lovely!!Nankahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05428694673909046094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-66423500243105350902013-08-13T02:19:28.352+05:302013-08-13T02:19:28.352+05:30let me scatter my thoughts on the pavement
I espe...<i>let me scatter my thoughts on the pavement</i><br /><br />I especially liked that. Love how your words seem to tell the tale of the painting.Bonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10096591352278195759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-31006210498286868682013-08-13T01:29:34.595+05:302013-08-13T01:29:34.595+05:30We all need someone who believes in us...We all need someone who believes in us...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-29049404965652307492013-08-12T19:24:42.239+05:302013-08-12T19:24:42.239+05:30Your poem has the feel of true flamenco:)
Tigerbri...Your poem has the feel of true flamenco:)<br />TigerbriteAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-41430655821480493712013-08-12T16:44:16.056+05:302013-08-12T16:44:16.056+05:30and it swirls to eternity.
lovely words hereand it swirls to eternity. <br /><br />lovely words heretotomaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01805083472267649276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-335185328729430672013-08-12T15:01:06.988+05:302013-08-12T15:01:06.988+05:30"a huge gathering may prevail
but I will do w..."a huge gathering may prevail<br />but I will do what is right"<br /><br />so strong words. The dancer has a strong will and will leave a mark with her tapping. nice poem.kalpana solsihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05459797629127380780noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-16449647905458877072013-08-12T13:44:59.240+05:302013-08-12T13:44:59.240+05:30It is important to find your own dance moves, but ...It is important to find your own dance moves, but also to find your own rhythms, your own beats. Love this. Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-29927167091594135222013-08-12T07:17:22.606+05:302013-08-12T07:17:22.606+05:30I dance to life ~~~ I love that statement!!I dance to life ~~~ I love that statement!!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-3666310455003071342013-08-12T07:04:01.737+05:302013-08-12T07:04:01.737+05:30Isn't it curious that so many cannot see what ...Isn't it curious that so many cannot see what is right? Love, laughter and commitment (plus some dancing) are a great way to go.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-20835711237478310992013-08-12T04:49:12.053+05:302013-08-12T04:49:12.053+05:30Yes, we must dance our way through life, Gautami. ...Yes, we must dance our way through life, Gautami. Nice poem.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-18517414626448846612013-08-12T02:07:23.471+05:302013-08-12T02:07:23.471+05:30I agree, the best way to live is to "dance to...I agree, the best way to live is to "dance to life" Very nice poem!Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-22799640467207112142013-08-12T00:33:29.734+05:302013-08-12T00:33:29.734+05:30 we will miss our Sunday OSI; have a good Sunday
... we will miss our Sunday OSI; have a good Sunday<br /><br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-50237246981163795712013-08-12T00:05:04.932+05:302013-08-12T00:05:04.932+05:30I love "I dance to life" and, especially...I love "I dance to life" and, especially, your closing lines: "one who believes in me will not let me fall."Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-8968948804628858892013-08-11T23:52:03.184+05:302013-08-11T23:52:03.184+05:30keep the dance alivekeep the dance aliveAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-23258891696799731672013-08-11T23:08:36.776+05:302013-08-11T23:08:36.776+05:30
nicely put...<br /><br />nicely put...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-51671025242429101392013-08-11T22:50:39.039+05:302013-08-11T22:50:39.039+05:30Wonderful poem!Wonderful poem!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-1355545483429574702013-08-11T22:35:00.362+05:302013-08-11T22:35:00.362+05:30A story with an intersting reminder. (Actually, i...A story with an intersting reminder. (Actually, it sounds like you & I are both saying the same thing!)Marian Veverkanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-40200829685382542862013-08-11T21:55:09.145+05:302013-08-11T21:55:09.145+05:30I have a feeling that this speaker will dance thro...I have a feeling that this speaker will dance through life, leaving a mark with each step... there is so much conviction in these few words; so much life.Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-66163095580487877212013-08-11T21:26:28.909+05:302013-08-11T21:26:28.909+05:30The must" of this poem, it's urgency, is ...The must" of this poem, it's urgency, is unparalleled and vital. Over the pavement and through the walls if must be, this defines drive nd the urge to be free. I remember that Thoreau said (and many have proven) that walls can not contain a free mind. Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.com