tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post4703763748398746804..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: swirling with eggshells and applesgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-60077641854676943572009-04-20T01:21:00.000+05:302009-04-20T01:21:00.000+05:30I love spooky poetry like this, and you do it very...I love spooky poetry like this, and you do it very well.sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03818420999930644450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-68018029400706966222009-04-19T14:13:00.000+05:302009-04-19T14:13:00.000+05:30Well done again!! Gautami. You set the bar very hi...Well done again!! Gautami. You set the bar very high.Jacqueline Dovehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18173286368386721724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-83058031084790357412009-04-19T00:29:00.000+05:302009-04-19T00:29:00.000+05:30I loved the imagery. Haunting.I loved the imagery. Haunting.<br /><BR>Philip Thrifthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03021615111948806998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-13780563057911444022009-04-18T21:06:00.000+05:302009-04-18T21:06:00.000+05:30Absolutely love this line:"...your bones dance wit...Absolutely love this line:"...<I>your bones dance with your liver</I>..." - what an image!<br />Fantastic ending to this captivating piece.Janice Thomsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02506920585319893814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-14948610888147957212009-04-18T17:59:00.000+05:302009-04-18T17:59:00.000+05:30Very dark indeed. The character is alluring and y...Very dark indeed. The character is alluring and you can see why someone would fall into her trap.Pamhttp://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/04/17/missing-2/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-32865162880939123682009-04-18T06:58:00.000+05:302009-04-18T06:58:00.000+05:30a chilling tale
well done!a chilling tale <br />well done!Christine Gailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14605702499635622573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-9189934180618918092009-04-18T06:22:00.000+05:302009-04-18T06:22:00.000+05:30Intriguing and chilling!Intriguing and chilling!Erin Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03428693832930474044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-22992091775753136562009-04-18T06:16:00.000+05:302009-04-18T06:16:00.000+05:30Very striking. Dark. But wonderful! Thank you for ...Very striking. Dark. But wonderful! Thank you for sharing and stopping by my blog!Bsquared86https://www.blogger.com/profile/00502834142392912270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-69812214656561167072009-04-18T02:30:00.000+05:302009-04-18T02:30:00.000+05:30I get a picture of a beautiful woman luring a man ...I get a picture of a beautiful woman luring a man to enticement. When he's completely bewitched is when he "sees" the real her for the first time. Turns out she's a horrid witch in disguise just out of another "beauty treatment." LOL<br /><br />GREAT post!<br /><br />http://lori102870.blogspot.com/2009/04/in-your-absencenapowrimo-17-part-2by-me.htmlAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-81886519873423902832009-04-18T01:23:00.000+05:302009-04-18T01:23:00.000+05:30So that's how you're going to trap me?
Scary!So that's how you're going to trap me?<br /><br />Scary!Sweet Talking Guy..http://sewina.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-89336346423711256142009-04-18T01:09:00.000+05:302009-04-18T01:09:00.000+05:30I'm with Watermaid; this is a great line: "swirlin...I'm with Watermaid; this is a great line: "swirling with eggshells and apples." I'm not sure, either, exactly what it means but the words make a great image.<br /><br />I also like the 'fence of deceit." Cool way of writing it!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-89258269816187514652009-04-18T00:32:00.000+05:302009-04-18T00:32:00.000+05:30Great poem Gautami! I didn't realize until the en...Great poem Gautami! I didn't realize until the end that it was a Witches Cauldron or something similar.Jeremiah's Househttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14794851177961398653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-42880737545747108902009-04-17T23:37:00.000+05:302009-04-17T23:37:00.000+05:30dark...
"missing it not..."
i enjoyed reading th...dark...<br /><br />"missing it not..."<br /><br />i enjoyed reading this..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-38832600276306085182009-04-17T23:08:00.000+05:302009-04-17T23:08:00.000+05:30'Swirling with eggshells and apples' is a terrific...'Swirling with eggshells and apples' is a terrific line even if I don't know what it means.<br /><br />I didn't trust her from the outset.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-71892930039603001992009-04-17T23:02:00.000+05:302009-04-17T23:02:00.000+05:30horror at its besthorror at its bestpolonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-46649196329384199672009-04-17T22:29:00.000+05:302009-04-17T22:29:00.000+05:30Desert Rat: Right after I put that title, I have ...Desert Rat: Right after I put that title, I have been thinking of changing it. Just haven't come up with good one. Maybe I should leave it untitled..gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-89466720335688371092009-04-17T22:23:00.000+05:302009-04-17T22:23:00.000+05:30Enticing and creepy. If the title hadn't acted as...Enticing and creepy. If the title hadn't acted as a warning, I would have been totally taken in by the cosy corners and lopsided smile, and never seen that last bit coming.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-29287758962883949622009-04-17T22:10:00.000+05:302009-04-17T22:10:00.000+05:30Gautami -
I was quite taken by this piece. Dark...Gautami - <br /><br />I was quite taken by this piece. Dark and captivating -- well done…<br /><br />Come discover what’s <A HREF="http://www.image-verse.com/gone" REL="nofollow">Gone</A>.rob kistnerhttp://image-verse.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-74325422813892987842009-04-17T21:44:00.000+05:302009-04-17T21:44:00.000+05:30Deliciously horrific - I enjoyed this with shivers...Deliciously horrific - I enjoyed this with shivers down my spine!BooksPleasehttp://www.booksplease.orgnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-9388037537329503762009-04-17T17:40:00.000+05:302009-04-17T17:40:00.000+05:30Reading this, I had the sensation I was being lure...Reading this, I had the sensation I was being lured into a black widow's web... nicely donesagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.com