tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post473867596323268382..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: loadsgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-81067664876851083992011-08-02T19:07:35.965+05:302011-08-02T19:07:35.965+05:30Hello Gautami:
I'm just now getting around t...Hello Gautami: <br /><br />I'm just now getting around to reading people's poems for last week, since I've been ill and offline the last few days. <br /><br />I like how you contrast the immediate scene in the middle three lines (the feel of the cold, the boy picking a nickel) with the last, "only then I start counting galaxies". It's almost the effect of a camera panning out, from the little scene before us to the larger.<br /><br />I know what you mean by being in writing limbo -- I've been experiencing that on and off due to job responsibilities, personal issues, and illness taking away my time. May the muse visit you soon with a blessing of inspiration and direction.<br /><br />-NicoleRaven's Wing Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08576438868694047958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-52174894263130624632011-07-31T23:16:09.554+05:302011-07-31T23:16:09.554+05:30Interesting take!
hugs xoxInteresting take!<br /><br />hugs xoxOliviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11755748082674775369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-41840944070353512162011-07-27T18:43:55.136+05:302011-07-27T18:43:55.136+05:30reminds me of a rubic's cube...
and I guess th...reminds me of a rubic's cube...<br />and I guess that is what life is<br />sometimes.Shaunahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15279846999053851468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-37148230219119331652011-07-26T17:10:18.129+05:302011-07-26T17:10:18.129+05:30Lovely!Lovely!Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-37667397354787373912011-07-26T13:05:57.845+05:302011-07-26T13:05:57.845+05:30Wow. The last line is very poignant.
You're su...Wow. The last line is very poignant.<br />You're such a talent!<br />xoRobynRawknrobyn.blogspot.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15997241410192066577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-50546677052938205912011-07-26T06:07:48.131+05:302011-07-26T06:07:48.131+05:30ahhh...life in six sentences-
brava!ahhh...life in six sentences-<br />brava!Cynthiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10256391836026637655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-18499705157541720012011-07-25T23:15:10.102+05:302011-07-25T23:15:10.102+05:30You took me far out there with this one.You took me far out there with this one.Alice Audreyhttp://www.aliceaudrey.com/?page_id=4029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-19704735437559142822011-07-25T21:49:37.791+05:302011-07-25T21:49:37.791+05:30Maybe everyone should count galaxies more often. B...Maybe everyone should count galaxies more often. But we also need to see the details.MorningAJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04719744167307369768noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-11595166470064683342011-07-25T17:31:59.437+05:302011-07-25T17:31:59.437+05:30I like this. A srprise at the end, when the boy pi...I like this. A srprise at the end, when the boy picks the nickle. Nicely done.Marbles in My Pockethttp://Melancholly, yet celabratorynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-58855370375271341242011-07-25T17:31:30.013+05:302011-07-25T17:31:30.013+05:30I like this. A srprise at the end, when the boy pi...I like this. A srprise at the end, when the boy picks the nickle. Nicely done.Marbles in My Pockethttp://Melancholly, yet celabratorynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-2837375027243790972011-07-25T16:43:55.074+05:302011-07-25T16:43:55.074+05:30Wonderful :)Wonderful :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-46307337084208865892011-07-25T06:45:01.289+05:302011-07-25T06:45:01.289+05:30The lens often narrows the focus and the intensity...The lens often narrows the focus and the intensity brings brilliance.Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14843459906469325667noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-44418079612862758952011-07-25T05:33:56.749+05:302011-07-25T05:33:56.749+05:30cute, one can never under estimate one's poten...cute, one can never under estimate one's potentials.<br />cheers.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-42753187358675476642011-07-24T23:15:07.954+05:302011-07-24T23:15:07.954+05:30So many times we are too busy to really see throug...So many times we are too busy to really see through the lens. Thanks for being a part of the Sunday 160.Monkey Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06741294113777908130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-40059389052846250742011-07-24T22:27:18.247+05:302011-07-24T22:27:18.247+05:30infinite possibilities in infinite realities...or ...infinite possibilities in infinite realities...or maybe galaxies...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-55221712387563709752011-07-24T22:00:43.387+05:302011-07-24T22:00:43.387+05:30the things you see through the camera of life - be...the things you see through the camera of life - beautifulmoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.com