tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post4834409824844030615..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: piece of charcoal split into splintersgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-84238544938657348492008-07-09T18:51:00.000+05:302008-07-09T18:51:00.000+05:30I love your interpretation of the sketch. I think ...I love your interpretation of the sketch. I think dark poetry becomes you.<BR/><BR/>-NicoleRaven's Wing Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08576438868694047958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-36859157915626004952008-07-09T06:00:00.000+05:302008-07-09T06:00:00.000+05:30Short, complex, and a lot left to interpretation. ...Short, complex, and a lot left to interpretation. It does leave you thinking...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-80881264735520214302008-07-08T22:35:00.000+05:302008-07-08T22:35:00.000+05:30I love this poem. Your words have turned what app...I love this poem. Your words have turned what appears to be a classroom sketch into something spooky to look at. Really creative interpretation of the picture.Jenn:https://www.blogger.com/profile/16186913821204935058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-11289112457932496842008-07-08T16:08:00.000+05:302008-07-08T16:08:00.000+05:30Powerful imagery that throws out a confronting cha...Powerful imagery that throws out a confronting challenge!Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-2791760242851670762008-07-08T12:43:00.000+05:302008-07-08T12:43:00.000+05:30write that which ignites your passion. wonderful ...write that which ignites your passion. wonderful work. peace, jp/debJP/debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16588554280207421724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-1852404316210952392008-07-08T05:17:00.000+05:302008-07-08T05:17:00.000+05:30Once again you've produced a wonderful pieceOnce again you've produced a wonderful pieceAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-13158957196792435752008-07-08T02:38:00.000+05:302008-07-08T02:38:00.000+05:30it is a dark shining beauty...it is a dark shining beauty...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-58464299893549274612008-07-07T23:52:00.000+05:302008-07-07T23:52:00.000+05:30Darkness is good and the way you write is even bet...Darkness is good and the way you write is even better.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-34455647245328246792008-07-07T22:28:00.000+05:302008-07-07T22:28:00.000+05:30wow, a powerful piece of writing.wow, a powerful piece of writing.polonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-83469701940775907642008-07-07T22:14:00.000+05:302008-07-07T22:14:00.000+05:30very visual poemvery visual poemCrafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-20646102666727033662008-07-07T20:24:00.000+05:302008-07-07T20:24:00.000+05:30Powerful poem. A narrator writing from a place so ...Powerful poem. A narrator writing from a place so burned she's an etching on a wall. Great metaphor.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-36662334032541974952008-07-07T19:21:00.000+05:302008-07-07T19:21:00.000+05:30This makes me think of the scene toward the end of...This makes me think of the scene toward the end of 'The Fountain' - won't go further if you haven't seen it. But now I have the music from the soundtrack going through my head, from that scene. Very evocative!Julia Phillips Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-46646857090699312592008-07-07T19:11:00.000+05:302008-07-07T19:11:00.000+05:30Love this: "I had been sketched into the walls."Love this: "I had been sketched into the walls."mareymercyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03407666873261385487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-39440401213590971172008-07-07T18:59:00.000+05:302008-07-07T18:59:00.000+05:30wow! it's perfect for Monday Mural, you've capture...wow! it's perfect for Monday Mural, you've captured just the right wordsAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-4862962950737963812008-07-07T18:21:00.000+05:302008-07-07T18:21:00.000+05:30Drawing with dim light...wiith the model not real...Drawing with dim light...wiith the model not really wanting it!Greatly done, Gautami!Jillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12871047592501542942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-19351728826295485712008-07-07T17:48:00.000+05:302008-07-07T17:48:00.000+05:30Great images. I really like the link between the c...Great images. I really like the link between the captured image and death.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-65272498970032564592008-07-07T17:18:00.000+05:302008-07-07T17:18:00.000+05:30Ooh, this is a great poem. That last line is an e...Ooh, this is a great poem. That last line is an excellent fit to the rest of your story. I'm glad to see you are writing what you are comfortable with again. Whitesnake was right, we always come back to what we know. Nice job. Have a nice day.poefusionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15157059633840032305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-59551972614472402272008-07-07T16:08:00.000+05:302008-07-07T16:08:00.000+05:30Very dark! I really like the visual I'm getting fr...Very dark! I really like the visual I'm getting from "burning ones did cartwheels."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-89334715653175986152008-07-07T15:45:00.000+05:302008-07-07T15:45:00.000+05:30Always such stark images, and your last lines are ...Always such stark images, and your last lines are excellent. Never fail.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-4090406269716158812008-07-07T14:41:00.000+05:302008-07-07T14:41:00.000+05:30Absolutely wonderful! I loved this one!Absolutely wonderful! I loved this one!Jane Doehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11087464056692451751noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-6616588160659001422008-07-07T14:32:00.000+05:302008-07-07T14:32:00.000+05:30That's a powerful poemThat's a powerful poemCatherinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08236329216260906624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-79089561046914186142008-07-07T12:26:00.000+05:302008-07-07T12:26:00.000+05:30love this!love this!magiceyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17848851692951192508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-58033043838302696522008-07-07T09:32:00.000+05:302008-07-07T09:32:00.000+05:30oh, that's seductive. I really like those last few...oh, that's seductive. I really like those last few lines and the final one is a great bang.Angelica Chuahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07561622934124649565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-53503025832460620502008-07-07T06:34:00.000+05:302008-07-07T06:34:00.000+05:30brilliant as usual.....maybe I should get out that...brilliant as usual.....<BR/>maybe I should get out that thesaurus.<BR/><BR/>write what ya comfortable with, it is always hard to drift else where, one always comes back to where one is safe.Whitesnakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-65503026766410253462008-07-07T02:29:00.000+05:302008-07-07T02:29:00.000+05:30Ooh, the last line is perfect!Ooh, the last line is perfect!Noah the Greathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11777681562599472033noreply@blogger.com