tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post5557914856691567073..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: Feeding Pessimism-----Sonnetgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-91782427035935768492007-07-11T14:01:00.000+05:302007-07-11T14:01:00.000+05:30you have a wonderful way with words.glimpsing on d...you have a wonderful way with words.<BR/><BR/>glimpsing on dimness which blind do see<BR/>and ominously mocking their own presage<BR/><BR/>Have a wonderful day :o)trinitystarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18134309193793933391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-35784519654226406922007-07-11T10:53:00.000+05:302007-07-11T10:53:00.000+05:30polona has said it for methank you for this onepolona has said it for me<BR/>thank you for this oneflootshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01530734765701940680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-21268142864354415192007-07-11T10:30:00.000+05:302007-07-11T10:30:00.000+05:30sad but well written. :)sad but well written. :)J. Andrew Lockharthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12567156257114496618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-19892166623255400282007-07-11T09:59:00.000+05:302007-07-11T09:59:00.000+05:30Perhaps i good night of meditation would help or m...Perhaps i good night of meditation would help or maybe a song that makes your heart sing. If not, I say find a rain storm and scream into it your feelings and as it passes let it take your words and burn them away so you may breathe without thought of them again.Inside our hands, outside our heartshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04135186996993725893noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-54396489021942761562007-07-11T08:06:00.000+05:302007-07-11T08:06:00.000+05:30the best way to fight a depressing mood is to writ...the best way to fight a depressing mood is to write abt it...and u hv done it brilliantly!<BR/><BR/>And ty for that very touching comment in my last post Gautami. U r 100% right! HUGGGGGGGGGGGGGZ!<BR/><BR/>Keshi.Keshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17147250771662427208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-44553700167385968742007-07-11T00:08:00.000+05:302007-07-11T00:08:00.000+05:30many times i see the reflection of myself in your ...many times i see the reflection of myself in your poems.gPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07439371766182405053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-60193916977831971522007-07-10T18:36:00.000+05:302007-07-10T18:36:00.000+05:30You sometimes excel........Even your own expectati...You sometimes excel........<BR/>Even your own expectations.....<BR/>Even in the sadness there is still a glint!Stevehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16715829842292110540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-23569247313860008952007-07-10T17:42:00.000+05:302007-07-10T17:42:00.000+05:30You can't beat a good depressing poem sometimes. ;...You can't beat a good depressing poem sometimes. ;)Beamanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10516397458228874124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-25737159381486678612007-07-10T13:05:00.000+05:302007-07-10T13:05:00.000+05:30Hi Gautami! Salman Rushdie is one of my all-time f...Hi Gautami! Salman Rushdie is one of my all-time favorite writers. And I love this sonnet you wrote -- I think it is brilliant. I actually love the feeling in it -- you did a great job and created some really powerful lines that I adore: "glimpsing on dimness which blind do see", and "angst would rather take a life". Very cool!<BR/>:)Clarehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11746014771712020963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-80664762827743660442007-07-10T01:25:00.000+05:302007-07-10T01:25:00.000+05:30I like the alliteration, especially in the first s...I like the alliteration, especially in the first stanza. <BR/><BR/>You won a book in my BAFAB drawing!Deweyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00395712971920800717noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-20447531254263393292007-07-10T01:11:00.000+05:302007-07-10T01:11:00.000+05:30Perhaps I should partially nod my head in agreemen...Perhaps I should partially nod my head in agreement with Polona, it is indeed depressing but well done. However, my nod is only partial because I am not depressed and instead I am in a gloriously upbeat mood. No, your poem cannot change that. <BR/><BR/>However, it is indeed well done.Michelehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18052534623925640813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-43209980108625805392007-07-10T00:44:00.000+05:302007-07-10T00:44:00.000+05:30this is kind of depressing thus complementing my c...this is kind of depressing thus complementing my current mood<BR/>but well done again!polonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.com