tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post6054466051972222509..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: Illusion/delusiongautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-86389307147756972592007-03-01T21:36:00.000+05:302007-03-01T21:36:00.000+05:30lotus: methinks you are biased!lotus: methinks you are biased!gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-34136961592634567362007-03-01T01:21:00.000+05:302007-03-01T01:21:00.000+05:30I really like your experiments with twisted ending...I really like your experiments with twisted endings - this verse for instance is very witty and defintely clever!Lotus Readshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02081192215823615529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-22507696666554821302007-02-28T16:32:00.000+05:302007-02-28T16:32:00.000+05:30don, ascenderrisesabove, polona and margie: thanks...don, ascenderrisesabove, polona and margie: thanks. <BR/><BR/>h.e./donn: It does seem that way, the CHIP is heavier than the cataract!<BR/><BR/>dewyknickers: you version stands alone too. Thanks.<BR/><BR/><BR/>andrew: I am not so sure but if nothing comes within a day or two, I will live is as it is.<BR/><BR/>rethabile: You know how the mind of a poet works. The bug is not letting me rest easy. I still can't get it right.gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-76539337633213514802007-02-28T12:44:00.000+05:302007-02-28T12:44:00.000+05:30I like it Gautami!It's funny!Good job!I like it Gautami!<BR/>It's funny!<BR/>Good job!Margiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14433759763753850718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-18122137849202360132007-02-28T05:28:00.000+05:302007-02-28T05:28:00.000+05:30The music's there. But if you feel it's not right,...The music's there. But if you feel it's not right, tweak some more until it becomes "untweakable."Rethabilehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03523368313680103826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-74731679494305442812007-02-28T05:11:00.000+05:302007-02-28T05:11:00.000+05:30very interesting --- I would leave it as it isvery interesting --- I would leave it as it isJ. Andrew Lockharthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12567156257114496618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-89714755558041989472007-02-28T04:11:00.000+05:302007-02-28T04:11:00.000+05:30Misted eyes reflecting,marriage contract signedsig...Misted eyes reflecting,<BR/>marriage contract signed<BR/>sighing now, softly she wonders,<BR/>what if the mote, <BR/>is actually a cataract? <BR/><BR/>Hope you don't mind, I couldn't resist playing a bit.<BR/><BR/>Rose<BR/><BR/>xoAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-48444517264254661232007-02-28T00:53:00.000+05:302007-02-28T00:53:00.000+05:30gautami, i like it.i find it clever and amusing ;)...gautami, i like it.<BR/>i find it clever and amusing ;)polonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-82239115432397169352007-02-28T00:14:00.000+05:302007-02-28T00:14:00.000+05:30The 5 CARAT ring on her finger helped to COUNTERAC...The 5 CARAT ring on her finger helped to COUNTERACT the involuntary CONTRACTION in her digestive TRACT.Romeo Morningwoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10826410608415260786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-34230088370668544802007-02-27T20:59:00.000+05:302007-02-27T20:59:00.000+05:30very cleververy cleverAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-44841617783308196562007-02-27T19:13:00.000+05:302007-02-27T19:13:00.000+05:30What if he does? Funny. Good one!What if he does? Funny. Good one!Don Iannone, D.Div., Ph.D.https://www.blogger.com/profile/01922412641433868679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-39575612996504776902007-02-27T18:41:00.000+05:302007-02-27T18:41:00.000+05:30buffalo: Thanks!ghosty: The point is what is missi...buffalo: Thanks!<BR/><BR/>ghosty: The point is what is missing? Any clue?<BR/><BR/>paul: I wanted to conveyexactly that. The cataract is in her eyes. I didn't think it has come across that well. From your comments it seems it has..<BR/><BR/>kai: How deep, sweety?<BR/><BR/>whitesnake: try me!<BR/><BR/>trinitystar: Thanks.<BR/><BR/>dsnake1: As I still can't decide what is missing, I will leave it as it is for now.gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-27071378521994521942007-02-27T18:31:00.000+05:302007-02-27T18:31:00.000+05:30leave it as it is, raw and honest.leave it as it is, raw and honest.dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-85118230661243820252007-02-27T15:39:00.000+05:302007-02-27T15:39:00.000+05:30Extremely funny ... blind delusion heh! Have a wo...Extremely funny ... blind delusion heh! <BR/>Have a wonderful day.trinitystarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18134309193793933391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-6585965260002562842007-02-27T10:24:00.000+05:302007-02-27T10:24:00.000+05:30You really do not want to know!You really do not want to know!Whitesnakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-10420708982719963272007-02-27T02:51:00.000+05:302007-02-27T02:51:00.000+05:30VEY DEEPVEY DEEPKaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03525571908541394623noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-72877421034895828042007-02-27T02:48:00.000+05:302007-02-27T02:48:00.000+05:30But her eyes are the ones that are "misted." So I ...But her eyes are the ones that are "misted." So I think maybe the cataract is actually in her eye and she only thinks it's in his.<BR/><BR/>Star crossed lovers I guess. Maybe eye crossed if they keep inspecting each other for cataracts so much I guess...Paulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14770384445526387065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-68731306719175096592007-02-27T00:52:00.000+05:302007-02-27T00:52:00.000+05:30yeh yeh feels like something is missin...but i tin...yeh yeh feels like something is missin...but i tink this one is candid and funny.gPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07439371766182405053noreply@blogger.com