tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post6219627329322312688..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: afterthought---Monday Poetry Traingautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-53000231658314283962007-09-19T03:30:00.000+05:302007-09-19T03:30:00.000+05:30Very descriptive I could see it very clearly in my...Very descriptive I could see it very clearly in my head. Well done.Amy Ruttanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02212879406999128140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-38880072123393449502007-09-18T08:23:00.000+05:302007-09-18T08:23:00.000+05:30I found it sad that there is afterthought about th...I found it sad that there is afterthought about that simple thing.Jillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12871047592501542942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-79436911974341821992007-09-18T07:18:00.000+05:302007-09-18T07:18:00.000+05:30Awesome poem. Love the ending.Awesome poem. Love the ending.Annhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17968479919482739686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-83200592204474202442007-09-18T06:18:00.000+05:302007-09-18T06:18:00.000+05:30I love the ending, of course. I so get it; that's ...I love the ending, of course. I so get it; that's how I felt about so many of the guys I dated. Always yearning for bigger and better and then coming back to Earth and stopping and ... yeah. That was the end of things, all right.Susan Helene Gottfriedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12778191943289129869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-47243473746632020122007-09-18T03:52:00.000+05:302007-09-18T03:52:00.000+05:30I wondered if maybe you meant bored with blogging,...I wondered if maybe you meant bored with blogging, since you mention anonymity, which sounds like the internet.Deweyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00395712971920800717noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-61927291363099308352007-09-18T03:39:00.000+05:302007-09-18T03:39:00.000+05:30it is my experience too that return to the mundane...it is my experience too that return to the mundane after a cosmic consciousness experienceJoy Reneehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04976987581528470589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-39462785615988118832007-09-18T01:07:00.000+05:302007-09-18T01:07:00.000+05:30Going to sound like a broken record here, but I'm ...Going to sound like a broken record here, but I'm with the rest. The ending is my favorite part of this poem.Lisa Andelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15179973783013139285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-23265441096087514682007-09-18T00:11:00.000+05:302007-09-18T00:11:00.000+05:30I'm with the rest of them, GREAT ending. Really en...I'm with the rest of them, GREAT ending. Really enjoyed it.<BR/><BR/>Anna J. EvansAnna J. Evanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01397240894645783388noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-50955051563668870192007-09-17T23:36:00.000+05:302007-09-17T23:36:00.000+05:30Yes, a biting ending. Seeing the vast nothingness ...Yes, a biting ending. Seeing the vast nothingness tends to do that.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-58623279433856343792007-09-17T22:59:00.000+05:302007-09-17T22:59:00.000+05:30Oops! This one has a sting in its tail.Oops! This one has a sting in its tail.Billhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10717622168200846486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-21620744083211576632007-09-17T22:57:00.000+05:302007-09-17T22:57:00.000+05:30"as an afterthoughtthat reminds me, ennui setting ..."as an afterthought<BR/>that reminds me, ennui setting in,<BR/>apparently, for no reason, I have been bored<BR/>with you of late."<BR/><BR/>Great ending! I also loved:<BR/>"staring at the sky-<BR/>longing to submerge myself"<BR/><BR/>I've never thought of the sky and 'submerge' together, which makes your image so original.Julia Phillips Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.com