tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post6273665417557461126..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: words of music glued to megautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-7519794900554339252012-05-02T23:39:28.971+05:302012-05-02T23:39:28.971+05:30I can feel the grief here. Your words speak to us...I can feel the grief here. Your words speak to us clearly.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-56740617575012206992012-05-02T21:13:25.942+05:302012-05-02T21:13:25.942+05:30Gautami,
Welcome back. Both poems show a lot of e...Gautami,<br /><br />Welcome back. Both poems show a lot of emotion, particularly in this one which shows how one feels on being betrayed. <br /><br />Take care<br /><br />PS : You may click on my name for my profile and then navigate to my blogs.Jackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15896075408610203350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-36786730482181712382012-05-02T20:39:37.570+05:302012-05-02T20:39:37.570+05:30These are the lines that resonated most for me:
&q...These are the lines that resonated most for me:<br />"I am wearing the words of music"<br />and <br />"screen doors watch silently"<br /><br />I got lost a bit in the poem, though, and wonder how it would read with stanza breaks.<br /><br />Good work. Keep writing.Okellehttp://okelle.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-55919932767246994512012-05-02T16:22:23.112+05:302012-05-02T16:22:23.112+05:30Wearing music... and the song is sad, I take it. ...Wearing music... and the song is sad, I take it. Love the imagery of the quilt no longer exuding warmth...Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-40554939480520040002012-05-02T11:16:10.387+05:302012-05-02T11:16:10.387+05:30Lovely a bit sad. your creativity t is great.
http...Lovely a bit sad. your creativity t is great.<br />http://leah-jamielynn.typepad.com/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-62456525008144548542012-05-02T10:09:18.658+05:302012-05-02T10:09:18.658+05:30Wonderful poem. And I say that as someone who wor...Wonderful poem. And I say that as someone who worked as an oboist for years.Madeleine Begun Kanehttp://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-47132213102865479672012-05-02T07:01:58.033+05:302012-05-02T07:01:58.033+05:30Lovely images, Gautami. You've chosen some inc...Lovely images, Gautami. You've chosen some incredible metaphors for this. Nice to see you here.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-47685649534694391422012-05-01T08:58:26.732+05:302012-05-01T08:58:26.732+05:30Perfection! Your stanzas are threaded together so ...Perfection! Your stanzas are threaded together so beautifully that it tells a story.The Write Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-45255751303586047082012-04-30T19:17:52.438+05:302012-04-30T19:17:52.438+05:30Enjoyed it...wonderful writing...Enjoyed it...wonderful writing...Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-19593704248829003742012-04-30T18:08:34.987+05:302012-04-30T18:08:34.987+05:30Such a fantastic title..I could hear the sounds..i...Such a fantastic title..I could hear the sounds..in the words..JaeJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-41537188696241795772012-04-30T06:20:40.672+05:302012-04-30T06:20:40.672+05:30Sad yet beautiful.Sad yet beautiful.Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05250682060195274022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-38006272946458140302012-04-30T05:26:51.880+05:302012-04-30T05:26:51.880+05:30Wonderful writing as ever, my friend!!
<3Wonderful writing as ever, my friend!!<br /><br /><3Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-83159324447758453532012-04-30T02:45:26.470+05:302012-04-30T02:45:26.470+05:30A lovely write!A lovely write!ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-37250597224823702742012-04-30T02:26:07.733+05:302012-04-30T02:26:07.733+05:30Oh, the sad words of loss when all the hopes of lo...Oh, the sad words of loss when all the hopes of love are shattered as if by a storm. The warmth of the others presence...yes that is sorely missed. I really liked this piece.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-62471842261336908102012-04-29T23:09:41.362+05:302012-04-29T23:09:41.362+05:30I like a lot of this, some very effective lines; a...I like a lot of this, some very effective lines; assailed by scents, quilts that give not warmth... very nice.Mark Windhamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01662876682127886074noreply@blogger.com