tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post6364926253285580300..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: swaying dandelions---[Fiction] Friday/Friday 5gautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-1237309557218222262008-01-30T01:54:00.000+05:302008-01-30T01:54:00.000+05:30absolutely loved it ... too late should be banned,...absolutely loved it ... too late should be banned, declared passé... that was very good... all in the day of the life....little wing writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16010376737431344381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-16089061003130551352008-01-27T03:55:00.000+05:302008-01-27T03:55:00.000+05:30There is also the reverse - that mental anguish wi...There is also the reverse - that mental anguish will have a physical manifestation, especially if that anguish is continually repressed or denied?<BR/><BR/>I shall be ever so careful now on with my blue rimmed specs!!Jodi Cleghornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00808676742258881407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-66834443095586516852008-01-26T07:14:00.000+05:302008-01-26T07:14:00.000+05:30i love this. very effective.i love this. very effective.Kaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03525571908541394623noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-3483044922905731742008-01-26T05:21:00.000+05:302008-01-26T05:21:00.000+05:30You did it again! Fantastic writing. You leave me ...You did it again! Fantastic writing. You leave me awestruck.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-53486969962410506682008-01-26T01:46:00.000+05:302008-01-26T01:46:00.000+05:30Your writer is a passionate soul. I liked this lin...Your writer is a passionate soul. I liked this line best:<BR/>Stinging antiseptic soothed her cut with sweetest of pain<BR/><BR/>It underscores her masochistic tendencies.<BR/><BR/>Great narrative verse.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-59135268243234968872008-01-26T00:53:00.000+05:302008-01-26T00:53:00.000+05:30very possibly because without the mind,, the body ...very possibly because without the mind,, the body is nothing...paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-10732599420533728792008-01-25T23:34:00.000+05:302008-01-25T23:34:00.000+05:30I enjoyed your morning cup of exsanguinated coffee...I enjoyed your morning cup of exsanguinated coffee. <BR/><BR/>It is a slippery slope we tread on blaming Eve for all of our problems. I suppose that the Ssssserpent had to talk to her because Adam was still a vegetarian and didn't have enough energy to make it to the Tree of Knowledge...oh c'mon...just having a little fun. Eden was in Iraq..can you say irony? <BR/><BR/>Your Brain burns calories and mental anguish wears out your hard drive...find your happy place.<BR/>Are you absolutely certain that every Queen has a sense of detachment from their subjects? I rather fancy Elizabeth..I just wish that she was my Grandmother instead of the Queen.<BR/>That would be suh-weet!Romeo Morningwoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10826410608415260786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-46070966943869091532008-01-25T23:28:00.000+05:302008-01-25T23:28:00.000+05:30Way to go, Gautami! Nice use of both prompts!Way to go, Gautami! Nice use of both prompts!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-38218732290150998042008-01-25T22:21:00.000+05:302008-01-25T22:21:00.000+05:30Hi Gautami, This was a great read and very nicely...Hi Gautami,<BR/><BR/> This was a great read and very nicely written. I look forward to doing this again and reading more of your work.Head Cookiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15878795387580544093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-79429889826516457282008-01-25T22:16:00.000+05:302008-01-25T22:16:00.000+05:30This was a clever use of the words. I like the ima...This was a clever use of the words. I like the image of the dandelions withering with her mood and 'The stinging antiseptic soothed her cut with sweetest pain'. <BR/><BR/>I'm afraid I have yet to write mine and you are probably in bed!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-53673455595899067292008-01-25T22:08:00.000+05:302008-01-25T22:08:00.000+05:30Poor girl. My favorite image from this: wiping h...Poor girl. My favorite image from this: wiping her dry eyes. Second-favorite: dandelions in a glass wilting because of her mood.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-33419204569306250422008-01-25T21:36:00.000+05:302008-01-25T21:36:00.000+05:30hey, this is beautifully written.Michele sent me t...hey, this is beautifully written.<BR/><BR/>Michele sent me to tell you so.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-15779607322327425972008-01-25T20:56:00.000+05:302008-01-25T20:56:00.000+05:30That is a question I ask myself all of the time. S...That is a question I ask myself all of the time. Superbly written as usual.Square1https://www.blogger.com/profile/13559171378908608414noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-64118879273116060492008-01-25T19:11:00.000+05:302008-01-25T19:11:00.000+05:30that final question is a real poser - medics/sci...that final question is a real poser - medics/scientists may tell us it's a chemical reaction but (like you i suspect) it is far more than that<BR/>thank youflootshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01530734765701940680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-13377492771172912152008-01-25T18:51:00.000+05:302008-01-25T18:51:00.000+05:30Matter as a state of mind!?:)Matter as a state of mind!?:)Boruthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13990298332042076231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-68401390052207278942008-01-25T18:21:00.000+05:302008-01-25T18:21:00.000+05:30It never escapes me what a good writer you are. Y...It never escapes me what a good writer you are. You managed to put those five words into a very descriptive poem. I followed her mental anguish throughout. Have a nice day.poefusionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15157059633840032305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-37470288342259748022008-01-25T17:52:00.000+05:302008-01-25T17:52:00.000+05:30Hi Gautami, I didn't think that these five words c...Hi Gautami, I didn't think that these five words could be worked into poem. Should have known better, it's you after all.<BR/><BR/>Many visions here. Starting with the Garden of Eden. Then a bad review at work. Then maybe a boyfriend gone bad. Love the last question.<BR/><BR/>Have a great weekend my friend.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com