tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post656218441062930411..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: where did you hide my parachute?gautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-85459155795556842832010-03-21T08:03:20.755+05:302010-03-21T08:03:20.755+05:30I like the way you moved the story forward in this...I like the way you moved the story forward in this one. Absentmindedly is a good word to use with a heart that used to be.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-39758938499631107272010-03-20T23:21:11.989+05:302010-03-20T23:21:11.989+05:30the last paragraph! disassociated from the hole b...the last paragraph! disassociated from the hole because after all, how can one feel if there is no heart left? Sad.Dee Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-83229025597012081312010-03-20T20:46:43.408+05:302010-03-20T20:46:43.408+05:30Reminds me of the saying, "What won't kil...Reminds me of the saying, "What won't kill us, will only make us stronger."<br /><br />You captured the emotion of a painful heartbreak quite well! Good work!Jay R. Thurstonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12369000584179598973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-57941417701674907822010-03-20T17:07:22.074+05:302010-03-20T17:07:22.074+05:30One can rest or take a leap;
for all of us;
have...One can rest or take a leap; <br />for all of us; <br />have promises to keep.<br />to dream to soar; <br />to achieve ever more.<br />there we are; <br />your partners in flight, <br />making hold on the reins tight.<br />blowing melodies on the life’s flute; <br />so chose your colors<br />mind’s is your parachute…..Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14317831523155115391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-73737413766202648332010-03-18T14:39:11.984+05:302010-03-18T14:39:11.984+05:30And your heart still beats?
<3And your heart still beats?<br /><br /><3Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14765633868539628820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-17834000999882833652010-03-18T11:32:45.103+05:302010-03-18T11:32:45.103+05:30I love the last paragraph and the quiet sense of p...I love the last paragraph and the quiet sense of practical wonder at emotional devastation. Nice job.Ann (bunnygirl)http://ampfiction2.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-16656321573926432062010-03-18T11:32:15.642+05:302010-03-18T11:32:15.642+05:30Powerful metaphors in this piece -- great job! :)Powerful metaphors in this piece -- great job! :)Thomma Lynhttp://www.thommalyngrindstaff.com/storiesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-70045471390345211532010-03-18T07:09:25.456+05:302010-03-18T07:09:25.456+05:30Anything that pierces us, is painful, much more wh...Anything that pierces us, is painful, much more when the heart is pierced...I could even feel it more painful than literal cuts or bruises!<br /><br />Wonderful take Gautami...<br /><br />Please drop by...this is my 2nd week at 3WW and I am enjoying it!Amityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18222122594130598313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-80889617792780450132010-03-18T05:23:06.097+05:302010-03-18T05:23:06.097+05:30Pride comes before a fall - we pick ourselves up a...Pride comes before a fall - we pick ourselves up and fein indifference.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-22175486715028846242010-03-18T04:36:17.836+05:302010-03-18T04:36:17.836+05:30I really liked this one, in a melancholy kind of w...I really liked this one, in a melancholy kind of way.Thom Gabrukiewiczhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-7652675224524946222010-03-17T23:25:58.205+05:302010-03-17T23:25:58.205+05:30"absentmindedly" is very good, especiall..."absentmindedly" is very good, especially in relation to the absence of the heart.Billhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10717622168200846486noreply@blogger.com