tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post6689661503592673179..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: dust motes in the heartgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger38125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-56988860853835210482009-12-06T01:43:12.642+05:302009-12-06T01:43:12.642+05:30I am hypnotized by your flying dust motes. Wonder...I am hypnotized by your flying dust motes. Wonderful.Erin Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03428693832930474044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-85524660379915648062009-12-05T05:47:13.616+05:302009-12-05T05:47:13.616+05:30the cut in my bangle
reflecting the light
How eff...the cut in my bangle<br />reflecting the light<br /><br />How effortlessly you dislodge emotional weight.gabriellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14488809730387509552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-32402508978723220432009-12-04T20:53:53.438+05:302009-12-04T20:53:53.438+05:30Dust motes and pomegranate seeds as binding memo...Dust motes and pomegranate seeds as binding memories, quite original and interesting.Anahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06611955404994410354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-65028916353175249482009-12-04T09:37:24.706+05:302009-12-04T09:37:24.706+05:30As usual, you have such a way with poetry about re...As usual, you have such a way with poetry about relationships and love. Beautifully rendered.Cynthia Shorthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12386358503730817278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-26793299133377141002009-12-04T03:31:46.588+05:302009-12-04T03:31:46.588+05:30Your expression and imagery are so honestly stated...Your expression and imagery are so honestly stated. I love that you included the sunshine and movements of dust. Thank you for adding delight to my day, Gautami.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03241402645242821612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-76531656344046668992009-12-04T01:53:36.506+05:302009-12-04T01:53:36.506+05:30I like the repeating image of the dust motes and t...I like the repeating image of the dust motes and the way they randomly settle.Jameshttp://coyotemercury.com/blog1noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-15080623591826601822009-12-04T01:40:11.327+05:302009-12-04T01:40:11.327+05:30A beautiful Advent poem, Gautami, from whichever a...A beautiful Advent poem, Gautami, from whichever angle you come at it. Very nice!Paul Oakleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17426789386840488470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-84698618337171864472009-12-03T23:34:05.137+05:302009-12-03T23:34:05.137+05:30simply....a great journey.....thanks for sharing ...simply....a great journey.....thanks for sharing this GautamiWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-75041402346909661412009-12-03T23:12:25.100+05:302009-12-03T23:12:25.100+05:30Hi Gautami,
Very simple words, gently expressed a...Hi Gautami,<br /><br />Very simple words, gently expressed and full of meaning.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00861397533660827678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-51301565658323331212009-12-03T22:31:46.184+05:302009-12-03T22:31:46.184+05:30I was floating in the particles of dust, taking in...I was floating in the particles of dust, taking in all the refreshing rays of light from your mind. Thank you!Jerryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00805189421465266548noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-87715613618092611862009-12-03T22:27:08.418+05:302009-12-03T22:27:08.418+05:30I really like the meditative quality to this, how ...I really like the meditative quality to this, how it examines the tiniest almost atomic trifles (dust motes) so calmly then turns with the same patience to integration with the "you."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-40251842666892808482009-12-03T21:44:08.765+05:302009-12-03T21:44:08.765+05:30My first post was linkless. SO sorry to be posting...My first post was linkless. SO sorry to be posting again, but I couldn't figure out how to edit my first one. :-(<br /><br />Sorry.Julie Jordan Scott, againhttp://juliejordanscott.typepad.com/jjspoetry/2009/12/sweet-pomegranate-clackety-clack-get-your-poem-on-102.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-21843538215118171292009-12-03T21:42:35.208+05:302009-12-03T21:42:35.208+05:30so sensual and romantic. "That indescribable ...so sensual and romantic. "That indescribable something" made my heart heat up... like scooping some of itself out and offering it up, thinking...<br /><br />"this someone gets it..."Julie Jordan Scottnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-9059865337423616192009-12-03T11:15:50.234+05:302009-12-03T11:15:50.234+05:30this is an interesting and unique piece. you make ...this is an interesting and unique piece. you make me want to get to know dust motes better. and I love that you don't loose a moment...Tammie Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09018402134070834516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-59512073589902955132009-12-03T08:12:19.812+05:302009-12-03T08:12:19.812+05:30this made me catch my breath. I love it.this made me catch my breath. I love it.Dee Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-62104984617252031222009-12-03T04:04:41.441+05:302009-12-03T04:04:41.441+05:30Love the strong images in this poem. I could see ...Love the strong images in this poem. I could see the golden light and the dust motes dancing.Pamhttp://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/11/30/migration/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-21964344223381148832009-12-01T20:04:53.528+05:302009-12-01T20:04:53.528+05:30I keep meaning to ask you - do you have a book out...I keep meaning to ask you - do you have a book out? Are you writing one? If not, you should be! <br /><br />Sassy Brit :))<br />Alternative-Read.com<br />*<a href="http://tjbook-list.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Giveaways</a>*Sassy Brit @ Alternative-Read.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05035224672516442455noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-45239672362147209262009-12-01T02:32:03.328+05:302009-12-01T02:32:03.328+05:30it is hard to separate oneself from another... and...it is hard to separate oneself from another... and that a scratch in a bangle could so exquisitely bring it pass is lovely...one more believerhttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2009/11/30/acquiesce/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-85128115720260626252009-12-01T00:48:34.235+05:302009-12-01T00:48:34.235+05:30Like a jay, the golden bangle caught my mind's...Like a jay, the golden bangle caught my mind's eye.<br /><br />I love this idea.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-1919665660228224552009-12-01T00:47:21.216+05:302009-12-01T00:47:21.216+05:30Like a jay, the golden bangle caught my mind's...Like a jay, the golden bangle caught my mind's eye.<br /><br />I love this idea.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-38162305123775491492009-11-30T08:55:36.319+05:302009-11-30T08:55:36.319+05:30Lovely post, Gautami.Lovely post, Gautami.Carlos Gesmundohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09916179663956556302noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-43909825197431713242009-11-30T08:36:38.761+05:302009-11-30T08:36:38.761+05:30You have poetic talent, for sure. Thanks for shar...You have poetic talent, for sure. Thanks for sharing your writing with the world.Forgetfulonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07895803172098820967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-44063462877164275312009-11-30T08:34:45.740+05:302009-11-30T08:34:45.740+05:30Wonderful use of the prompt word - the poem is ten...Wonderful use of the prompt word - the poem is tender and powerful, too!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-11216603071805810982009-11-30T07:56:14.766+05:302009-11-30T07:56:14.766+05:30dust motes playing games...I love it. Your visuals...dust motes playing games...I love it. Your visuals are so strong and powerful!Jennifer Hickshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18351458993630972607noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-72701001431416388982009-11-30T07:16:09.799+05:302009-11-30T07:16:09.799+05:30Tami, ditto on the "how romantic!!"
Now...Tami, ditto on the "how romantic!!"<br /><br />Now I will be looking for dust motes at play. I think my flashlight will work as did your bangle reflector.<br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.com