tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post6767937282624584166..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: now close, now opengautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-21914892488373218882010-03-24T00:32:21.981+05:302010-03-24T00:32:21.981+05:30a lot of different emotions in this...I enjoyed it...a lot of different emotions in this...I enjoyed itAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-23824125308072914612010-03-23T18:21:54.988+05:302010-03-23T18:21:54.988+05:30Hi Gautami,
I really like the lines:
'mists ...Hi Gautami,<br /><br />I really like the lines:<br /><br />'mists of sleep/block me out'<br />and<br />'magenta turns maroon gold'Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00861397533660827678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-26499196795121528132010-03-22T00:40:41.916+05:302010-03-22T00:40:41.916+05:30I like the trip in this one...I like the trip in this one...Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-47216009043648219292010-03-21T02:28:08.069+05:302010-03-21T02:28:08.069+05:30I love the question at the end, opening up all sor...I love the question at the end, opening up all sorts of speculation.Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-88224062670479663622010-03-20T23:41:16.922+05:302010-03-20T23:41:16.922+05:30I agree with Raven- great emotion and description ...I agree with Raven- great emotion and description of frustration. I have written one with the same tone years ago when my children were young, and the weather was grey...<br /><br />India! I love cooking the foods of your country- I had personal lessonsChef Ehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11198603107302675448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-17355510590389320662010-03-20T21:16:35.842+05:302010-03-20T21:16:35.842+05:30I like how the clashing colors in the first lines ...I like how the clashing colors in the first lines set the tone for the rest of the piece.Elizabethhttp://www.poems.elizabethenslin.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-71246543971235853452010-03-20T17:10:27.211+05:302010-03-20T17:10:27.211+05:30open up to the air
let your heart pound
breath all...open up to the air<br />let your heart pound<br />breath all the sounds<br />feel the wind around<br />can you hear silence <br />when all you need is sound<br />feel the wild wind<br />let go to the howl<br />its gonna be peace day aheadAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14317831523155115391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-52309310126713161532010-03-20T08:57:26.070+05:302010-03-20T08:57:26.070+05:30I love the last stanza! Wow!
PamelaI love the last stanza! Wow!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-10525964828322399942010-03-20T01:38:29.132+05:302010-03-20T01:38:29.132+05:30Great description and an emotional quality, a frus...Great description and an emotional quality, a frustration, in both stanzas.<br /><br />-NicoleRaven's Wing Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08576438868694047958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-40205860114002462372010-03-19T15:18:54.230+05:302010-03-19T15:18:54.230+05:30Nice, simple, direct, compact, all good qualities....Nice, simple, direct, compact, all good qualities. And it all rides so well into the equally condensed ending lines which really add to the momentum of the poem. Nice job, very nice!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-8469797244559978292010-03-19T07:58:50.126+05:302010-03-19T07:58:50.126+05:30Plans open anew, the always do...
...rob
Image &am...Plans open anew, the always do...<br />...rob<br /><a href="http://www.image-verse.com/magenta-lace" rel="nofollow"><i>Image & Verse</i></a>robkistnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08166835029205143266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-30008659922016994572010-03-19T07:15:56.301+05:302010-03-19T07:15:56.301+05:30interesting!interesting!sagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-32205124567557814212010-03-19T03:26:24.722+05:302010-03-19T03:26:24.722+05:30Love the last two lines.Love the last two lines.spiritsoflenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09663418154339084941noreply@blogger.com