tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post7061472872244046976..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: pit of your spit-----One Single Impressiongautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-50546531793199523782008-04-25T05:08:00.000+05:302008-04-25T05:08:00.000+05:30"Glory of self-pity", had not thought of it that w..."Glory of self-pity", had not thought of it that way, Gautami.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-1609997675385989652008-04-23T08:48:00.000+05:302008-04-23T08:48:00.000+05:30Congratulations on your nomination for Poet Laurea...Congratulations on your nomination for Poet Laureate of the blogosphere.writerwomanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07645753712657412094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-62825512072149862952008-04-18T05:58:00.000+05:302008-04-18T05:58:00.000+05:30wow!!! how did i miss this??? this is marvelous......wow!!! how did i miss this??? this is marvelous... and i must say describes a portion of me to a tee... <BR/><BR/>i must go back for yet another read!!!!paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-89784622630442918412008-04-18T02:31:00.000+05:302008-04-18T02:31:00.000+05:30This might be one of my favorite poems of yours. I...This might be one of my favorite poems of yours. I don't see it as a rant, but rather the observations of an astute narrator. I will never look at self-pity the same way again.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-67521728687866337932008-04-18T02:28:00.000+05:302008-04-18T02:28:00.000+05:30interesting post to the prompt!!!.. never really t...interesting post to the prompt!!!.. never really thought of this aspect of glory... that sane voice lost forever... last sentence rocked my thoughts... strange companion self-pityAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-54055395569790027442008-04-17T17:01:00.000+05:302008-04-17T17:01:00.000+05:30What an arresting opening line!And yes, self pity ...What an arresting opening line!<BR/><BR/>And yes, self pity is a bit like a morning glory. Any self realised beauty is very short-lived.<BR/><BR/>GemmaGemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-20442397530868282212008-04-15T20:33:00.000+05:302008-04-15T20:33:00.000+05:30Good morning!I often think that obsession is a sym...Good morning!<BR/><BR/>I often think that obsession is a symptom of feeling so poorly about oneself that it becomes self-loathing. I feel bad for people like that because it is no way to live. I wish happiness for them. This was a powerful poem and I feel it comes from personal experience with somebody.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-57826656096988078422008-04-15T02:13:00.000+05:302008-04-15T02:13:00.000+05:30Your writing, as usual, impresses me. You are so d...Your writing, as usual, impresses me. You are so diverse. I hope you are having a wonderful Monday!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-82728830361921783592008-04-15T01:54:00.000+05:302008-04-15T01:54:00.000+05:30A different take on the prompt you offered this we...A different take on the prompt you offered this week. Enjoyed it and surely know the truth is at its heart!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-14617295130230159522008-04-14T21:10:00.000+05:302008-04-14T21:10:00.000+05:30excellent glory, well done.excellent glory, well done.Daniel J Santoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08284404430321001323noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-17101185803691169602008-04-14T11:03:00.000+05:302008-04-14T11:03:00.000+05:30"abused your inner wisdom" - that's my key phrase ..."abused your inner wisdom" - that's my key phrase in this strong piece. That's what one must stop doing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-67313248679148562772008-04-14T06:45:00.000+05:302008-04-14T06:45:00.000+05:30Like Willthink4wine and Sandy, I love "wearingcyni...Like Willthink4wine and Sandy, I love "wearing<BR/>cynicism up your sleeve, you pretend<BR/>ignorance."<BR/><BR/>And "dipped in spit of your self-loathing<BR/>you idolise it" is a really strong opener - wonderful poem.Julia Phillips Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-81303263521718818532008-04-14T05:58:00.000+05:302008-04-14T05:58:00.000+05:30wow the words are strong in this one. I feel that...wow the words are strong in this one. I feel that everyone is like this at one or more times in their lives. It comes with growing up.Angelica Chuahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07561622934124649565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-73449867022926380372008-04-14T03:41:00.000+05:302008-04-14T03:41:00.000+05:30.."your glory of self-pity"..'your' here,in my opi....."your glory of self-pity"..'your' here,in my opinion, stands for a 'masochist' ie any <BR/><BR/>person who revels in the morbid acts of self-punishment'/self-injury etc,"dipped in (the) spit" of "self-loathing".-'God would punish the masochist he would be stranded in 'happiness'!( a masochist by definition hates to be happy)That is how i phrased one of my comments wrt the previous prompt}.Apropos this submissionon 'Glory'- comment revised to <BR/>-'God should punish the masochist he should be stranded in 'happiness'.After all why must the masochist escape justice?Congrats on the imaginative post and the thought-provoking 'rant'..and for suggesting a glorious prompt!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-69279556417118179892008-04-14T02:23:00.000+05:302008-04-14T02:23:00.000+05:30Powerful verse ... I love the style of the rant.Powerful verse ... I love the style of the rant.trinitystarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18134309193793933391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-30128817859762804772008-04-13T23:42:00.000+05:302008-04-13T23:42:00.000+05:30I needed to go back and reread some of these great...I needed to go back and reread some of these great phrases!Terihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16029722057577018059noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-10808370449441649662008-04-13T23:36:00.000+05:302008-04-13T23:36:00.000+05:30Very innovative form here, guatamai. I like it ve...Very innovative form here, guatamai. I like it very well. Like Sandy said, there's much to be learned here.WHhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14815646433314236886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-37823884294600228482008-04-13T22:16:00.000+05:302008-04-13T22:16:00.000+05:30I like this, but I like the words you write about ...I like this, but I like the words you write about it just as much. It sounds like people I know, people I can't help not matter how I try, because they just CAN NOT let go of their own self-loathing. It is sad, and it hurts the people who love them...and sometimes it means letting them go.:(<BR/><BR/>;)Amberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04680903854519503303noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-84273932134126621432008-04-13T20:48:00.000+05:302008-04-13T20:48:00.000+05:30Wonderful rant in verse. Did you know, gautami, th...Wonderful rant in verse. Did you know, gautami, the only thing that distinguishes prose from poetry is the length of the line. The prose line goes all the way to the right side of the page... :)<BR/><BR/>Mine is up for your pleasure!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-32422620563736242622008-04-13T20:25:00.000+05:302008-04-13T20:25:00.000+05:30Vituperous, my friend. (Did I spell that right?)Di...Vituperous, my friend. (Did I spell that right?)<BR/><BR/>Did you ever see Trevor's first poem, where he shreds the whole concept of angst? Let me know if you need help finding it. It would go well with this piece, I think.Susan Helene Gottfriedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12778191943289129869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-2503268992173583282008-04-13T20:22:00.000+05:302008-04-13T20:22:00.000+05:30powerful rant poem - full of truth... I like the ...powerful rant poem - full of truth... I like the last line - glory of your self pity. I have known people (my brother, actually) like that - and have, I'm afraid to say, waded in that pool on more than one occasion.Ravenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04996538460071167819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-74551102341294731342008-04-13T20:06:00.000+05:302008-04-13T20:06:00.000+05:30This is very powerful writing--I see others in it,...This is very powerful writing--I see others in it, and in all honesty, I see myself in it, too. I need to go away and think about this.<BR/><BR/>Wonderful entry!Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09182248478422009913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-90318142717720897092008-04-13T19:38:00.000+05:302008-04-13T19:38:00.000+05:30Neat rant, but the sad thing is, most people like ...Neat rant, but the sad thing is, most people like this don't realize it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-41331571868345345712008-04-13T19:11:00.000+05:302008-04-13T19:11:00.000+05:30Great take on your prompt! I know a few people th...Great take on your prompt! <BR/><BR/>I know a few people that I thought of while reading this! They are very close to me. And two things i've learned in life are, you can't tell someone how to feel, and you'll never change who they are! <BR/><BR/>I loved the way you used glory here!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-61874512201043411682008-04-13T18:18:00.000+05:302008-04-13T18:18:00.000+05:30Having read your poems on the one single impressio...Having read your poems on the one single impression site, I wondered what this one had to do with glory...until I got to the end.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com