tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post7195551274438000721..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: I want to get over the border tonightgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-47539294378008740362009-04-30T00:13:00.000+05:302009-04-30T00:13:00.000+05:30Hrm. I want to pry this open a little but I'm afra...Hrm. I want to pry this open a little but I'm afraid I'll destroy it. Intriguing.Raven's Wing Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08576438868694047958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-85875119222836951622009-04-28T20:19:00.000+05:302009-04-28T20:19:00.000+05:30I think I'm taking this either WAY too literally o...I think I'm taking this either WAY too literally or else way too ... uhh, romantically. Either way, I doubt it's what you intended!Susan Helene Gottfriedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12778191943289129869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-13958940969276218082009-04-28T18:15:00.000+05:302009-04-28T18:15:00.000+05:30i like this.
playful. nice.i like this.<br />playful. nice.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-82949394031985162442009-04-28T14:10:00.000+05:302009-04-28T14:10:00.000+05:30I think I know what this means - but I could be wr...I think I know what this means - but I could be wrong :)<br />You do a great job with rhyme and meterCatherinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08236329216260906624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-55197370859105125122009-04-28T10:30:00.000+05:302009-04-28T10:30:00.000+05:30very playful and mysterious!very playful and mysterious!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-61244541827493681252009-04-28T09:57:00.000+05:302009-04-28T09:57:00.000+05:30But?
Do you really?But?<br />Do you really?Whitesnakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-78692641536354830112009-04-28T08:57:00.000+05:302009-04-28T08:57:00.000+05:30Hi, Gautami! I'm familiar with some of your bloggi...Hi, Gautami! I'm familiar with some of your blogging/reviewing and many of your comments from other "booky" sites, but this is the first time I've really read your poetry. Very interesting stuff. Thank you!dshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07616750784052488695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-45630217642967919272009-04-28T04:34:00.001+05:302009-04-28T04:34:00.001+05:30Mysterious for sure leaving all kinds of questions...Mysterious for sure leaving all kinds of questions the reader can ask themselvesUnknownwriter49https://www.blogger.com/profile/08591304033835586907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-67046896619928280112009-04-28T04:34:00.000+05:302009-04-28T04:34:00.000+05:30Ooh, that "sumptuous bite"! A little double meani...Ooh, that "sumptuous bite"! A little double meaning here? Love it!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-52230521789052050802009-04-28T03:31:00.000+05:302009-04-28T03:31:00.000+05:30Ooh... I very much like this Guatami and the subtl...Ooh... I very much like this Guatami and the subtle play on the words 'over the border'. Lovely!Janice Thomsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02506920585319893814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-18851007362710853602009-04-28T01:23:00.000+05:302009-04-28T01:23:00.000+05:30I like how you play with the meaning of border in ...I like how you play with the meaning of border in this. The rhyming scheme enhances the meaning very effectively.Liz at Yips and Howlshttp://www.blog.elizabethenslin.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-14058898983885184872009-04-28T00:21:00.000+05:302009-04-28T00:21:00.000+05:30I like this poem and I like the rhyme scheme.I like this poem and I like the rhyme scheme.Jeremiah's Househttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14794851177961398653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-47214971168179484462009-04-27T20:22:00.000+05:302009-04-27T20:22:00.000+05:30Hi Gautami, I wonder what border you want to get o...Hi Gautami, I wonder what border you want to get over? <br /><br />Line 12 <br />leaning closer to my intended. (perhaps?)Sweet Talking Guy..http://sewina.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-38634020715637478232009-04-27T20:13:00.000+05:302009-04-27T20:13:00.000+05:30Yes, it is mysterious. Well done!Yes, it is mysterious. Well done!sagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-48960532274995882822009-04-27T19:01:00.000+05:302009-04-27T19:01:00.000+05:30There's something deeply mysterious about this one...There's something deeply mysterious about this one. Marvellous.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.com