tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post7702078038827232189..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: Short Story---Normal---3WWgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-81893605525972635322007-07-21T06:34:00.000+05:302007-07-21T06:34:00.000+05:30Gautami --- again, I managed to cause you to be sk...Gautami --- again, I managed to cause you to be skipped --- and so I visit you instead!<BR/><BR/>I'd be interested to see some of your mathematical poems sometime!<BR/><BR/>N.BreadBoxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14551973313066578118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-44642510820992064992007-07-21T01:09:00.000+05:302007-07-21T01:09:00.000+05:30ok so I totally didnt see that coming! This was a ...ok so I totally didnt see that coming! This was a plesent change from you. Nice job. It was a great way to weave in bits of life advice into a great story!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-58664163873311135162007-07-20T22:34:00.000+05:302007-07-20T22:34:00.000+05:30Damn, what a twist you threw in at the end. I hope...Damn, what a twist you threw in at the end. I hope this will continue....I love the story.<BR/><BR/>Have you published your work? If not, you should. You're a great writer.carmilevyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00360045114379957605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-63784470587728552232007-07-20T02:40:00.000+05:302007-07-20T02:40:00.000+05:30You did a short story this week and I tried a poem...You did a short story this week and I tried a poem. What is the world coming to? :)<BR/><BR/>I sort of gathered from the "lifestyle" line that it was something like that, though I thought he was changing teams, not that Olivia was really Oliver.Bonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10096591352278195759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-83823694366000503612007-07-19T20:49:00.000+05:302007-07-19T20:49:00.000+05:30I liked it! I didnt get to do 3ww this week so I ...I liked it! I didnt get to do 3ww this week so I commented my entry to Bone! lol<BR/><BR/>I liked your book review as well. It is an interesting parallel to the war in Iraq. Sadly.Helenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06481533361253699464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-15570847237045878082007-07-19T19:27:00.000+05:302007-07-19T19:27:00.000+05:30I was blind-sided by the ending. I feel like I mis...I was blind-sided by the ending. I feel like I missed a lot of little clues.TChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02487739742081226423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-59295957600907864462007-07-19T18:49:00.000+05:302007-07-19T18:49:00.000+05:30I like this very much. Well-done, Gautami. You alw...I like this very much. Well-done, Gautami. You always seem to find the words, or they find you.Don Iannone, D.Div., Ph.D.https://www.blogger.com/profile/01922412641433868679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-12087196896881224822007-07-19T11:09:00.000+05:302007-07-19T11:09:00.000+05:30nice one gautami(but reminded me why i don't go to...nice one gautami<BR/>(but reminded me why i don't go to parties) :)flootshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01530734765701940680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-21364342685870177522007-07-19T09:04:00.000+05:302007-07-19T09:04:00.000+05:30A wicked twist--what was that movie back in the la...A wicked twist--what was that movie back in the late 80s?sagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-76389412023406909122007-07-19T06:31:00.000+05:302007-07-19T06:31:00.000+05:30Oh, gautami, you twisted one. Loved it.Oh, gautami, you twisted one. Loved it.Anniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06609474935417830112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-8422235270571308272007-07-19T02:21:00.000+05:302007-07-19T02:21:00.000+05:30"Don't be afraid of your sexuality!"A twist in the..."Don't be afraid of your sexuality!"<BR/><BR/>A twist in the tale, well done but for me the start gave the end away.<BR/>sigh!Stevehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16715829842292110540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-75348084944165901312007-07-19T01:52:00.000+05:302007-07-19T01:52:00.000+05:30Didn't see it coming.Didn't see it coming.Gayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09308862059975983327noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-50097246159197339602007-07-19T01:44:00.000+05:302007-07-19T01:44:00.000+05:30Didn't see it coming, had to go back and reread. T...Didn't see it coming, had to go back and reread. The signs were there, I just missed one of them! I hope you write more stories along with your poetry.Marcia (MeeAugraphie)https://www.blogger.com/profile/00656288704821106002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-26093418243261110342007-07-19T01:42:00.000+05:302007-07-19T01:42:00.000+05:30oh... didn't see that coming :)excellent write!oh... didn't see that coming :)<BR/>excellent write!polonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-16985196561248184202007-07-19T01:17:00.000+05:302007-07-19T01:17:00.000+05:30You really caught me out, I didn't see the twist c...You really caught me out, I didn't see the twist coming at all. I really enjoyed it.<BR/><BR/>JayseeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-28222843484439428922007-07-18T23:43:00.000+05:302007-07-18T23:43:00.000+05:30This made me smile. All the backstory of Jason's ...This made me smile. All the backstory of Jason's life started with the fourth paragraph and sealed with the last line. Lovely.Lightheadedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15438507601416513826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-43962977952306498672007-07-18T22:51:00.000+05:302007-07-18T22:51:00.000+05:30Hi. You have won the drawing for "My Mother's Gar...Hi. You have won the drawing for "My Mother's Garden". Please email me, siouxcitysue@suddenlink.net with your postal addy.. Congratulations!!!!Sue Seiberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15079271353907261500noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-69702193982705822202007-07-18T21:58:00.000+05:302007-07-18T21:58:00.000+05:30Oh, I like this! I love the tension and the pace a...Oh, I like this! I love the tension and the pace and the twist on the end is wonderful. You write good stories too. :)<BR/><BR/>Rose<BR/><BR/>xoAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com