tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post7810009244001762431..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: ode to remnants of lovegautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-35837366794490544112009-11-29T18:29:32.298+05:302009-11-29T18:29:32.298+05:30There is a starkness about the imagery you use in ...There is a starkness about the imagery you use in this poem which is really effective in conveying a sense of hopelessness. This is one of your best.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-59677389479982126452009-11-28T21:06:22.163+05:302009-11-28T21:06:22.163+05:30Vaccumed state and heart aches. Wonderful words et...Vaccumed state and heart aches. Wonderful words etched hereJeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-81596959308974256852009-11-27T02:03:28.821+05:302009-11-27T02:03:28.821+05:30"the waste of my love" and "a vacuu..."the waste of my love" and "a vacuumed state"<br /><br />Those are great lines.Bonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10096591352278195759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-14223662609382278132009-11-26T22:25:24.890+05:302009-11-26T22:25:24.890+05:30Absolutely wonderful. It is full of emotion, power...Absolutely wonderful. It is full of emotion, powerful and raw. Very well done.Jane Doehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11087464056692451751noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-7546470134555285382009-11-26T00:46:25.581+05:302009-11-26T00:46:25.581+05:30Tami, I just love the flow of your words and the s...Tami, I just love the flow of your words and the so sad image you paint.<br /><br /><br />love, MelanieCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-6305229796540096232009-11-25T22:43:20.250+05:302009-11-25T22:43:20.250+05:30Good one Gautami...the red charcoals burning accen...Good one Gautami...the red charcoals burning accentuated the despair even more.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-514695487738679232009-11-25T18:12:20.036+05:302009-11-25T18:12:20.036+05:30Hi Gautami,
Whenever I am in Delhi next, cruising...Hi Gautami,<br /><br />Whenever I am in Delhi next, cruising for books in those great bookstores, I would love to meet you for tea. Or a lassi.<br /><br />You write very well.<br /><br />I love the gentle repetition, of the opening/closing lines. And that you spun the poem out of Keats, but with vastly different intent and positioning? Well, that is certainly fun in my books.<br /><br />Tschuess,<br />ChrisSepiru Chrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08600130405222535830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-45627993049552069002009-11-25T09:54:55.248+05:302009-11-25T09:54:55.248+05:30Hi Gautami! Beautiful writing.Hi Gautami! Beautiful writing.Gilsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14764043301335852527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-75987564656062052622009-11-25T07:32:54.627+05:302009-11-25T07:32:54.627+05:30yes, you are excellent again as always.yes, you are excellent again as always.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-11526541656825383642009-11-25T03:46:32.633+05:302009-11-25T03:46:32.633+05:30superb as usual.superb as usual.illyria taylornoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-12060833566084119702009-11-23T23:42:45.407+05:302009-11-23T23:42:45.407+05:30I loved this one!
You create a wonderful mood in y...I loved this one!<br />You create a wonderful mood in your poetry - be proud of that :)Vita Stunderhttp://vitastunder.blogspot.com/2009/11/courageous.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-45989099341210586102009-11-23T20:34:08.869+05:302009-11-23T20:34:08.869+05:30ah, the dregs...ah, the dregs...Beth P.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02621990661878989356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-32524678876715568032009-11-23T20:03:51.559+05:302009-11-23T20:03:51.559+05:30I see myself sitting by the fireplace, phone lying...I see myself sitting by the fireplace, phone lying on the floor... Nicely done.sagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-16687572930507307502009-11-23T17:22:08.562+05:302009-11-23T17:22:08.562+05:30You are so talended Gataumi... a poet/writer/philo...You are so talended Gataumi... a poet/writer/philosopherLorrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-80223940162050289552009-11-23T09:26:57.292+05:302009-11-23T09:26:57.292+05:30the heart break of waiting, hoping
and not knowing...the heart break of waiting, hoping<br />and not knowing what comes next certainly leads to a pained heart.<br />Old GrizzGeorge S Battyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15407137341843413701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-13915771325834597692009-11-23T01:27:38.810+05:302009-11-23T01:27:38.810+05:30I admire your ability to write about all the diffe...I admire your ability to write about all the different nuances of personal relationships...always managing to find something poignant to say.Cynthia Shorthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12386358503730817278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-36632946533251932022009-11-22T21:17:16.198+05:302009-11-22T21:17:16.198+05:30I like this one. Reminds me of trying to reach a s...I like this one. Reminds me of trying to reach a son in another state, at times when I've been in "a state" of worry :)Harveehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03490108303790217277noreply@blogger.com