tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post7972504314634663449..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: dancing versesgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger32125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-76030792689210866782009-02-09T10:08:00.000+05:302009-02-09T10:08:00.000+05:30love the interconnected ness and how it all develo...love the interconnected ness and how it all develops and flowsAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-22940216518454105062009-02-08T05:05:00.000+05:302009-02-08T05:05:00.000+05:30nicely donenicely donerebeccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18248554235709475320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-76375014794861770602009-02-06T23:12:00.000+05:302009-02-06T23:12:00.000+05:30this structure still interests melike the end a lo...this structure still interests me<BR/>like the end a lot:<BR/>"intensity for me-<BR/>equates to nuzzling<BR/>deeply into you<BR/><BR/>deeply into you<BR/>my pores<BR/>drenched with love"<BR/>(perfect for upcoming Valentine's Day" or any time...)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-50024590300245531572009-02-05T03:40:00.000+05:302009-02-05T03:40:00.000+05:30interesting structure.. loved the veiled repetitio...interesting structure.. loved the veiled repetitions of words :)Winnie the poohihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11445691463105808647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-39769999802303615542009-02-05T00:35:00.000+05:302009-02-05T00:35:00.000+05:30this was a great ride.this was a great ride.polonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-12555713851892215432009-02-04T22:42:00.000+05:302009-02-04T22:42:00.000+05:30Wow!! A dancing poem you have written!!Wow!! A dancing poem you have written!!Pat Paulkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03673667238840127360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-87885604283995850742009-02-04T14:13:00.000+05:302009-02-04T14:13:00.000+05:30From painting to love. An excellent journey.From painting to love. An excellent journey.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-89402899053879634552009-02-04T11:33:00.000+05:302009-02-04T11:33:00.000+05:30I'm really enjoying your new style...I'm really enjoying your new style...Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-58028317318262814012009-02-04T07:09:00.000+05:302009-02-04T07:09:00.000+05:30Oh, what a beautiful spiral! Love it!Oh, what a beautiful spiral! Love it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-8612311514404351362009-02-04T04:39:00.000+05:302009-02-04T04:39:00.000+05:30Love how these lead into one another a dance indee...Love how these lead into one another a dance indeed. Most enjoyable.Well done Guatami!Janice Thomsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02506920585319893814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-45332254174900650332009-02-04T02:32:00.000+05:302009-02-04T02:32:00.000+05:30Very nice! I like the three line layout I use it m...Very nice! I like the three line layout I use it my self sometimesArt and Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01991284507367796696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-89997946598217001262009-02-04T00:05:00.000+05:302009-02-04T00:05:00.000+05:30Why it is that the paint has to hide something on ...Why it is that the paint has to hide something on the canvas? Why can't it bring something to light?<BR/><BR/>Sorry. That was the first thing that sprang into my head when I read that first stanza. Guess I'm tired of hiding and ready for another fight. I'd better get over that FAST. I'm tired of fighting.Susan Helene Gottfriedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12778191943289129869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-85551742693241077832009-02-03T23:21:00.000+05:302009-02-03T23:21:00.000+05:30Wonderful!!!Love it!MargieWonderful!!!<BR/>Love it!<BR/><BR/>MargieMargiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14433759763753850718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-15277788396722676662009-02-03T22:41:00.000+05:302009-02-03T22:41:00.000+05:30very intriguing linking..I am now wondering whethe...very intriguing linking..I am now wondering whether a similar experiment could be done with images.- A - C -https://www.blogger.com/profile/04450741254982411491noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-40049335721770391852009-02-03T22:15:00.000+05:302009-02-03T22:15:00.000+05:30I love the way you've linked the verses together. ...I love the way you've linked the verses together. Your use of this verse form is very successful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-84701977469320803202009-02-03T21:40:00.000+05:302009-02-03T21:40:00.000+05:30i can see why you directed me to hear.lovely.dhyan...i can see why you directed me to hear.<BR/>lovely.<BR/>dhyanAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-51714168696662280062009-02-03T21:23:00.000+05:302009-02-03T21:23:00.000+05:30One stanza leads to the next with a sinuous sensua...One stanza leads to the next with a sinuous sensuality...wonderfully done!Sherri B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-63817193674030527542009-02-03T14:05:00.000+05:302009-02-03T14:05:00.000+05:30was lovely....like a rollercoaster ride!thoroughly...was lovely....<BR/>like a rollercoaster ride!<BR/>thoroughly enjoyed itmagiceyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17848851692951192508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-953247270719748412009-02-03T10:54:00.000+05:302009-02-03T10:54:00.000+05:30hiding thoughtsrise so highonly to fall downThis w...hiding thoughts<BR/>rise so high<BR/>only to fall down<BR/><BR/>This was my favorite...J. Andrew Lockharthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12567156257114496618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-53530200602737184182009-02-03T07:50:00.000+05:302009-02-03T07:50:00.000+05:30Wow...lovely write!njoyed readin it...Wow...lovely write!<BR/>njoyed readin it...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-678429434539632332009-02-03T02:26:00.000+05:302009-02-03T02:26:00.000+05:30intensity for me-equates to nuzzlingdeeply into yo...intensity for me-<BR/>equates to nuzzling<BR/>deeply into you<BR/><BR/>I love that line, just like it seems others do as well. I understand it. I feel the same way when I have my face tucked perfectly into the bend of my husband's neck. <BR/><BR/>Beautiful poem.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388819164221290647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-38891492482210478182009-02-02T23:39:00.000+05:302009-02-02T23:39:00.000+05:30Passionate and lovely imagery. Nice.Passionate and lovely imagery. Nice.get zappedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07716557355765204155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-32735886991299999952009-02-02T23:24:00.000+05:302009-02-02T23:24:00.000+05:30Your poetry's fascinating! I'm keeping a b...Your poetry's fascinating! I'm keeping a bookmark of you so I can come back on a regular basis... excellent stuff!!<BR/><BR/>;->...Gledwoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09308172310486574510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-74814397594591502572009-02-02T22:44:00.000+05:302009-02-02T22:44:00.000+05:30A lovely sentimental nuzzling..especially when you...A lovely sentimental nuzzling..especially when you are trapped in a frozen wasteland like I am. Last night we were nesting. It went from a balmy above zero melt at noon to 20 below with 50 kph winds within a matter of hours.<BR/>Nesting evolves into full blown coccooning under these circumstances.<BR/><BR/>I also liked the ebb and flow of the relationship..never static..and if it were it would be a warning..a portent of some calamity to follow.Romeo Morningwoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10826410608415260786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-70230410300480187092009-02-02T22:16:00.000+05:302009-02-02T22:16:00.000+05:30Wow it is dancing and quite intriguing, I enjoyed ...Wow it is dancing and quite intriguing, I enjoyed it verymuch Guatami :)Lorrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.com