tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post8253082983225234542..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: writing on a blank wallgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-44939247139994188102012-05-27T09:15:42.437+05:302012-05-27T09:15:42.437+05:30Jagged time === a beautiful phrase and lovely poem...Jagged time === a beautiful phrase and lovely poem. k.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-18487013664722310542012-05-27T04:06:44.650+05:302012-05-27T04:06:44.650+05:30rhyming away you are - beautifully! :)rhyming away you are - beautifully! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09894458424175347031noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-51084660943585518572012-05-26T02:36:39.120+05:302012-05-26T02:36:39.120+05:30I enjoy the images and how you weave color into th...I enjoy the images and how you weave color into the unfolding of the poem. Just beautiful.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-18155710317792609912012-05-25T22:06:14.604+05:302012-05-25T22:06:14.604+05:30Excellent write. Love the adjectives, very cool. ...Excellent write. Love the adjectives, very cool. Great read. ThanksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-12380700410621301712012-05-25T22:05:19.356+05:302012-05-25T22:05:19.356+05:30This is my first visit to your site...am so happy ...This is my first visit to your site...am so happy you visited mine...thank you...<br />This is lovely...like others, I am drawn to the first two lines and the last stanza...but the entire poem is wonderful.<br />Peace,<br />Siggi in Downeast MaineSiggi in Downeast Mainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12977578917775406831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-34064734234195647442012-05-24T23:54:34.299+05:302012-05-24T23:54:34.299+05:30Great work.
Anna :o]Great work.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-12411381993624665662012-05-24T22:27:13.366+05:302012-05-24T22:27:13.366+05:30I like the notion of massive crocuses...considerin...I like the notion of massive crocuses...considering they are so small...nice...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-24027122616565227042012-05-23T20:09:59.691+05:302012-05-23T20:09:59.691+05:30This is beautifully filled with melancholy thought...This is beautifully filled with melancholy thoughts of passing time. Your imagery is wonderful.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-42088601601307956842012-05-23T00:41:55.214+05:302012-05-23T00:41:55.214+05:30Lovely write.
"the massive crocusses sway
ak...Lovely write.<br /><br />"the massive crocusses sway<br />akin to the hips of a buxom dancer in a bar<br />a flower child of bygone era <br />now rotting in secret of her mind clatter" These lines blew me away.Nara Malonehttp://naramalone.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-7752808483768491732012-05-22T01:50:06.711+05:302012-05-22T01:50:06.711+05:30Simply brilliant, especially the last few lines.Simply brilliant, especially the last few lines.keiths ramblingshttp://www.keithsramblings.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-82635753650087351712012-05-22T00:14:43.662+05:302012-05-22T00:14:43.662+05:30stillness chills the grief
but cannot bend the mar...stillness chills the grief<br />but cannot bend the marrow<br /><br />equals<br /><br />word majesty.<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-82344467911872523212012-05-21T22:26:38.548+05:302012-05-21T22:26:38.548+05:30I think this is my favorite of this Whirl. Top to...I think this is my favorite of this Whirl. Top to bottom beautifulbarbarahttp://briarcat.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-22854209625518173032012-05-21T22:14:17.436+05:302012-05-21T22:14:17.436+05:30I agree, the first two lines and the jagged time i...I agree, the first two lines and the jagged time image rise above the rest of the poem.christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-36003766788586889662012-05-21T13:53:25.417+05:302012-05-21T13:53:25.417+05:30The 'empty hand' and the 'jagged time&...The 'empty hand' and the 'jagged time' in it paint a moving picture.Rinkly Rimeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-53416125403867491582012-05-21T13:50:31.280+05:302012-05-21T13:50:31.280+05:30Gauthami,
Read 2 poems now. Tears do clear out on...Gauthami,<br /><br />Read 2 poems now. Tears do clear out one's mind to see things more clearly without shades of grey. This one shows confidence to achieve what one wants inspite of doubts by others.<br /><br />Take careJackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15896075408610203350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-24139800846742033712012-05-21T09:12:32.901+05:302012-05-21T09:12:32.901+05:30I like the empty hand jagged time...this is a grea...I like the empty hand jagged time...this is a great work!! :)Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-69353618413696906042012-05-21T08:48:26.192+05:302012-05-21T08:48:26.192+05:30Love the last stanza.Love the last stanza.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-88741420840295836442012-05-21T07:01:13.386+05:302012-05-21T07:01:13.386+05:30your writings are also well written and from the h...your writings are also well written and from the heart. ThanksAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-54185241703605851882012-05-21T06:13:49.686+05:302012-05-21T06:13:49.686+05:30I agree about the last line....but it is all good ...I agree about the last line....but it is all good and thanks for sharing your wordsWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-69972462995567893652012-05-21T04:10:01.182+05:302012-05-21T04:10:01.182+05:30I enjoyed the whole poem but especially the last l...I enjoyed the whole poem but especially the last lines...an "empty hand filled with jagged time"..there are a lot of people inflicted with that disease...George S Battyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15407137341843413701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-63269579334265309822012-05-21T03:49:27.943+05:302012-05-21T03:49:27.943+05:30This is lovely - and as the others have said, the ...This is lovely - and as the others have said, the first two lines are brilliant ... also the last stanza but really, the whole thing is very nice ...<br /><br />http://thepoet-tree-house.blogspot.ca/2012/05/no-one-would-think.htmlS.E.Ingrahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02135141369161538082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-60887573801026030432012-05-21T01:28:15.583+05:302012-05-21T01:28:15.583+05:30Jagged time bites us all...Jagged time bites us all...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-85772505084026535832012-05-21T01:19:58.046+05:302012-05-21T01:19:58.046+05:30I like the first two lines, as well. I also love ...I like the first two lines, as well. I also love the last stanza. Well done.brenda whttp://undercaws.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-9721926994948288352012-05-21T01:01:25.279+05:302012-05-21T01:01:25.279+05:30Those first two lines are exquisite!Those first two lines are exquisite!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.com