tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post8355183505307161618..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: unbrushedgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-11868808129932165092011-09-26T05:22:29.838+05:302011-09-26T05:22:29.838+05:30love the words playing here with the imagelove the words playing here with the imageChronicles of Illusionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16168156674895078729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-25331855784099983152011-08-18T12:18:33.001+05:302011-08-18T12:18:33.001+05:30Ahaa!Covering evidence!
I have done some covering ...Ahaa!Covering evidence!<br />I have done some covering of secrets myself...<br />Nice magpie!Erratic Thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14852558150033296079noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-31835415493008706432011-08-18T05:29:39.036+05:302011-08-18T05:29:39.036+05:30Beautiful poem... Wonderful how paint can hide man...Beautiful poem... Wonderful how paint can hide many things, but it can also draw attention to others.Intellibloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-55937028892926287582011-08-18T04:59:34.407+05:302011-08-18T04:59:34.407+05:30I just love that last stanza, Gautami.
PamelaI just love that last stanza, Gautami.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-66113849188278506632011-08-18T03:50:42.486+05:302011-08-18T03:50:42.486+05:30Gautami, liked this very much. Glad the boy caugh...Gautami, liked this very much. Glad the boy caught the girl, but sad no one caught the speaker. The ending floats there, suspended, and I liked that, too. Nice! Amy<br />Mine: http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/08/17/strolling-we-write-poems/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-5988049444068273352011-08-17T23:38:48.834+05:302011-08-17T23:38:48.834+05:30Really like your choice of words:
"to cover t...Really like your choice of words:<br />"to cover the evidence<br /><br />of our raw tactility"<br /><br /><br /><br />Wow!<br />Thank you for your visit and leaving me this link to a wonderful poem.California Ink in Motionhttp://themslvh.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-52080742143359079692011-08-17T23:16:23.657+05:302011-08-17T23:16:23.657+05:30I always love your endings!I always love your endings!mareymercyhttp://mareymercy.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-34515044831103605952011-08-17T16:50:31.114+05:302011-08-17T16:50:31.114+05:30The meaning you describe is all too real and all t...The meaning you describe is all too real and all too intangible. Where's the evidence?irenehttp://enerihot.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-85043690409381689412011-08-17T07:58:16.863+05:302011-08-17T07:58:16.863+05:30I really like this.
"to cover the evidence...I really like this. <br /><br />"to cover the evidence<br />of our raw tactility"<br /><br />Wow!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-4845266947298318412011-08-16T17:40:39.924+05:302011-08-16T17:40:39.924+05:30Well done Gautami and the interconnection of the t...Well done Gautami and the interconnection of the two verses makes the pattern whole!!Nankahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05428694673909046094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-81995254192654647882011-08-16T09:20:16.085+05:302011-08-16T09:20:16.085+05:30Very nice!Very nice!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-83753652721072284072011-08-16T09:00:09.720+05:302011-08-16T09:00:09.720+05:30"to cover the evidence
of our raw tactility&q..."to cover the evidence<br />of our raw tactility"<br /><br />Loved these lines especially. Good one.Shailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07174562168503272243noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-65829711075615962852011-08-16T03:06:53.433+05:302011-08-16T03:06:53.433+05:30Thought provoking indeed!Thought provoking indeed!Kristen Haskellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07481526316071592146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-88900650230407290192011-08-16T02:23:54.008+05:302011-08-16T02:23:54.008+05:30wonderfully inventivewonderfully inventiveDonna B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/07015770616281528620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-42578968508716119362011-08-16T01:26:19.548+05:302011-08-16T01:26:19.548+05:30I came here via Brian's blog, and see he's...I came here via Brian's blog, and see he's the first commenter :) He's fast, isn't he?! I don't know how he does it :)<br /><br />Your'e good, Gautami....I liked the line in Hinder the Tremors, "I don't need an eye for an eye<br />the world is already blind."<br /><br />Nice....♥ Brajahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07693196044262677095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-33808063013675984482011-08-16T00:07:34.934+05:302011-08-16T00:07:34.934+05:30nice, love how you weave in the boy and the girlll...nice, love how you weave in the boy and the girlllto cover the evidence is a nice line as well...well played...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com