tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post8428048462007145341..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: rock bands rock out of my braingautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-48551494305319430062010-09-04T18:13:56.349+05:302010-09-04T18:13:56.349+05:30I really enjoyed this- whether it's autobiogra...I really enjoyed this- whether it's autobiographical or not- you are an awesome writer!Pattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04993186190720192589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-81659353546996896812010-09-02T01:32:10.605+05:302010-09-02T01:32:10.605+05:30There is a lot of emotion in your words! Well done...There is a lot of emotion in your words! Well done with the prompt, powerful. <br /><br />www.mypoeticpath.wordpress.com<br />www.veggiesyarnsandtails.wordpress.comGeraldine https://www.blogger.com/profile/07410019941984295767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-31899085468507104962010-08-31T22:36:33.182+05:302010-08-31T22:36:33.182+05:30writer's island this week's prompt "i...writer's island this week's prompt "if only" does have a sorta downer theme... not that i would think you would be pounding your head with yr fists...one more believerhttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2010/08/31/lost-and-found/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-44714488708504724842010-08-31T01:58:13.143+05:302010-08-31T01:58:13.143+05:30Highly creative! And unless noted otherwise, I alw...Highly creative! And unless noted otherwise, I always assume everyone's work is fiction... probably, because mine is. :)Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-25556860236487914052010-08-30T11:29:37.818+05:302010-08-30T11:29:37.818+05:30'creating the most beautiful ache', I thin...'creating the most beautiful ache', I think I have felt this. So tangible that no matter the feeling we know we are alive.Tammie Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09018402134070834516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-54918857706988417272010-08-30T06:40:44.573+05:302010-08-30T06:40:44.573+05:30it rocked Gautami......nice imagery and agree...po...it rocked Gautami......nice imagery and agree...poignant...thanks for the wordsWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-22351589262104555282010-08-30T03:29:34.098+05:302010-08-30T03:29:34.098+05:30Great, great writing indeed !
daily athensGreat, great writing indeed !<br /><br /><br /><a href="http://tagein-tagaus-athen.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">daily athens </a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-13324093466647520732010-08-29T22:37:04.525+05:302010-08-29T22:37:04.525+05:30I love the lyricism of this poem and the vibrant i...I love the lyricism of this poem and the vibrant images. The line about wrapping in tissue paper...i could see this in my minds eye...what a fragile medium.Khttp://khaalidah.blogspot.com/2010/08/haikus-on-emptiness.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-19770116639775626312010-08-29T21:46:31.551+05:302010-08-29T21:46:31.551+05:30misterious and original ending!misterious and original ending!Sandra.ifhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07861930312460679629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-15685061842768444192010-08-29T20:07:33.672+05:302010-08-29T20:07:33.672+05:30oh this is lovely, Gautami.. the chaos in mind do ...oh this is lovely, Gautami.. the chaos in mind do sound loud at times.. lovely expression.Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-39714487382750505332010-08-29T14:34:23.279+05:302010-08-29T14:34:23.279+05:30Great images I love this line
"if only it was...Great images I love this line<br />"if only it was possible to gather the crumbs<br />into my empty fold. if only.."Marjahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17458942200244031009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-89876083676174277262010-08-29T13:55:01.580+05:302010-08-29T13:55:01.580+05:30Powerful....Wherever the words come from, they com...Powerful....Wherever the words come from, they come as powerful wordsJeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-72259688031213370852010-08-29T13:28:39.856+05:302010-08-29T13:28:39.856+05:30Ouch! My ears are buzzing. A very clever poem, an...Ouch! My ears are buzzing. A very clever poem, and a great interpretation of the prompt.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-86586779910722482782010-08-29T13:27:12.199+05:302010-08-29T13:27:12.199+05:30Rightly said '... my own making'
Actuall...Rightly said '... my own making'<br /><br /> Actually that idea of marketing rock bands made me laugh.<br /><br />Very creative.Harshad Mehtahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10747054432059631577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-68271377802952492702010-08-29T08:37:49.619+05:302010-08-29T08:37:49.619+05:30Strong words and the image you portrayed within th...Strong words and the image you portrayed within this poem sort of brutal XD correct me if I am wrong :X<br />it is wonderfully written as always=DRiikaInfinityyhttp://riikainfinityy.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-32612627455337060042010-08-29T04:06:05.709+05:302010-08-29T04:06:05.709+05:30Strong imagery in this poem. I feel the beat.Strong imagery in this poem. I feel the beat.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-85455947586914606142010-08-29T03:38:20.738+05:302010-08-29T03:38:20.738+05:30Gautami poignant poem!
It moved me.
Nice!
PamelaGautami poignant poem!<br />It moved me.<br />Nice!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-81106511718415426282010-08-29T01:27:19.613+05:302010-08-29T01:27:19.613+05:30I really liked these lines and the imagery they co...I really liked these lines and the imagery they conjured . . .<br /><br />"I am nothing but air trapped in a vacuum<br />of my own making"<br /><br />"I wrap everything in a scented tissue paper"<br /><br />"if only it was possible to gather the crumbs into my empty fold"<br /><br />Nice writing, I enjoyed your take on this prompt. :-)Pan/Susannahhttp://panopticulated.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-17918141793490198512010-08-29T00:58:41.259+05:302010-08-29T00:58:41.259+05:30Very imaginative take on the prompt! Before I go, ...Very imaginative take on the prompt! Before I go, I've got a couple of awards:<br /><br />http://systematicweasel.wordpress.com/2010/08/28/awards/<br /><br />-Weasel =)Weaselhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12467584502095433332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-21682965907178731982010-08-28T23:47:04.218+05:302010-08-28T23:47:04.218+05:30I love what your imagination came up with here. Th...I love what your imagination came up with here. The lines are a feast of images and impressions. I especially love "to gather the crumbs into my empty fold." And I agree, its hard when others assume that the narrator is the poet. <br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://1sojournal.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-8955001481720052492010-08-28T21:41:48.841+05:302010-08-28T21:41:48.841+05:30I don't know why people assume because we writ...I don't know why people assume because we write poetry, it's all about us. Half of my poems are stories told to me by other people, or completely made up. Fiction is a part of poetry. That said, nicely done poem, I especially like:<br /><br />I wrap everything in a scented tissue paperand hit my head with my fists<br />if only it was possible to gather the crumbsinto my empty fold.mareymercyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03407666873261385487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-70787269639172340162010-08-28T20:19:12.573+05:302010-08-28T20:19:12.573+05:30I think you should go visit Ramesh! Seriously you...I think you should go visit Ramesh! Seriously you could be a rock star with all that rhythm going on in your head. But please don't hit your head with your fists! Wishing you a great weekend!Diane Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15886778060199433214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-84978273140010805552010-08-28T19:37:28.667+05:302010-08-28T19:37:28.667+05:30Such powerful, poignant words.Such powerful, poignant words.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-56516249680768950722010-08-28T19:12:42.224+05:302010-08-28T19:12:42.224+05:30Did I find sadness there, Gautami.. well, it's...Did I find sadness there, Gautami.. well, it's all in the flow.. I am sure you will be out of it.. but I adore the way you write, the word you create so naturally,, marketing a rockband out of thumps in the mind.. a salute to your creativity..<br /><br />If you wanna have a laugh, visit me, I promise laugh you would..Ramesh Soodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.com