tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post855922554963095890..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: my arms around myself won't let me downgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-31262049113110546992010-03-15T00:11:38.804+05:302010-03-15T00:11:38.804+05:30Strong sense of reality in this poignant piece. Ni...Strong sense of reality in this poignant piece. Nicely done.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-47547267802425623652010-03-14T07:52:25.193+05:302010-03-14T07:52:25.193+05:30You really do get it, don't you? The whole poe...You really do get it, don't you? The whole poem is powerful, but those last lines are really strong.Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-2836043518674665222010-03-14T04:53:05.820+05:302010-03-14T04:53:05.820+05:30The last line was full of hope, a nice turn in the...The last line was full of hope, a nice turn in the poem.spiritsoflenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09663418154339084941noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-52619759863217611392010-03-13T01:11:36.418+05:302010-03-13T01:11:36.418+05:30Nice capture of the experience of loss and grief. ...Nice capture of the experience of loss and grief. Nicely done, Gautami!Paul Oakleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17426789386840488470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-21850141475720291852010-03-12T22:16:14.190+05:302010-03-12T22:16:14.190+05:30very powerful and forlorn ...very powerful and forlorn ...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-48836440075980132872010-03-12T22:10:52.622+05:302010-03-12T22:10:52.622+05:30very powerful write... words directly from heart.....very powerful write... words directly from heart...Rajlakshmihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05947753574286557864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-72346591401554183092010-03-12T06:03:27.353+05:302010-03-12T06:03:27.353+05:30I can feel your grief here. It is so vivid. Nice.
...I can feel your grief here. It is so vivid. Nice.<br />Pamelapamelahttp://flaubert-poetrywithme.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-60540147868851126652010-03-12T04:42:04.088+05:302010-03-12T04:42:04.088+05:30In few words you managed to convey the total hopel...In few words you managed to convey the total hopelessness and grief over a broken heart. Powerful.Cynthia Shorthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12386358503730817278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-20165165996878171042010-03-12T03:58:40.998+05:302010-03-12T03:58:40.998+05:30but there is just always
a smile on your face
that...but there is just always<br />a smile on your face<br />that’s something no one can replace<br />usual you let them to..Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14317831523155115391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-39289138985969847722010-03-12T02:23:18.808+05:302010-03-12T02:23:18.808+05:30Oh, Gautami. What a sad poem! I, too am trying t...Oh, Gautami. What a sad poem! I, too am trying to write after a dry spell. Doing the prompts seems to help.<br /><br />Good work!Joyce Ellen Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13494251587598676788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-30496302788076820122010-03-12T01:48:25.675+05:302010-03-12T01:48:25.675+05:30the last line... and the title... so powerful. Tri...the last line... and the title... so powerful. Triumphant even amidst the ache. Beautiful.Julie Jordan Scotthttp://juliejordanscott.typepad.com/jjspoetry/2010/03/merely-5-foot-4-get-your-poem-on-117-.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-54354642263474301662010-03-12T00:35:06.072+05:302010-03-12T00:35:06.072+05:30I hope this isn't autobiographical! :-) I like...I hope this isn't autobiographical! :-) I like the idea you've come up with here.sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03818420999930644450noreply@blogger.com