tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post8727871024890099597..comments2023-09-29T15:38:34.435+05:30Comments on rooted: lowly flowsgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-40585397648020834872011-06-09T03:13:18.492+05:302011-06-09T03:13:18.492+05:30I've been seeing a lot of piku lately. You did...I've been seeing a lot of piku lately. You did a good job.Jess PJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10775984664764629241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-27451867385949081822011-06-07T17:27:29.966+05:302011-06-07T17:27:29.966+05:30Thanks for the piku info, nice work! Enjoy the pot...Thanks for the piku info, nice work! Enjoy the potluck :)<br />http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/06/03/omega/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-44947218380102602352011-06-07T11:25:04.429+05:302011-06-07T11:25:04.429+05:30So true how many of us when asked how were doing d...So true how many of us when asked how were doing don't actually answer the question consciously? How many of actually even understand the state of our emotions for all the repressing we doAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-8179647460847947002011-06-06T23:17:27.692+05:302011-06-06T23:17:27.692+05:30Poignant, moving = )Poignant, moving = )laurie kolphttp://lkharris-kolp.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-76264078337797998622011-06-06T21:52:42.682+05:302011-06-06T21:52:42.682+05:30smart write,
smiles,
Thanks for sharing.smart write,<br />smiles,<br /><br />Thanks for sharing.Jinglenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-37530164538664933922011-06-06T20:49:04.986+05:302011-06-06T20:49:04.986+05:30I might try a few piku's in the future. I'...I might try a few piku's in the future. I've never heard of a piku before. Good write.Andy McDonaldhttp://fictionisanaddiction.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-88101478785626494762011-06-06T13:59:40.531+05:302011-06-06T13:59:40.531+05:30piku, a new poetic form, I love exploring new poet...piku, a new poetic form, I love exploring new poetic forms.<br />I guess I would take the expressions into account as well to reach a conclusion. That might help!<br />Nice take!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-87644629181983803232011-06-03T19:56:45.229+05:302011-06-03T19:56:45.229+05:30this one makes me sad. still, it's beautiful.this one makes me sad. still, it's beautiful.Mommy Emilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09989213786947802537noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-80962886119611487482011-06-03T02:07:11.633+05:302011-06-03T02:07:11.633+05:30I like that this is one poem in linked pikus. Mor...I like that this is one poem in linked pikus. More than okay. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-76406749371908831162011-06-02T14:12:10.846+05:302011-06-02T14:12:10.846+05:30New form of writing...I learn each day from you..y...New form of writing...I learn each day from you..you inspire one to pen words of truth and new!<br /><br />Amazing verses with such a limited form of writing!! Nice feel and flow..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-9627843248665099072011-06-02T02:14:56.209+05:302011-06-02T02:14:56.209+05:30I could not get my headaround or into this form......I could not get my headaround or into this form.....but you certainly did well.....thans for sharingWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-73643118331225504352011-06-01T23:59:09.403+05:302011-06-01T23:59:09.403+05:30Interesting form you used for sure
But it was grea...Interesting form you used for sure<br />But it was great and a whole lot more<br />Yes okay can mean many things<br />As to many thoughts it brings<br />So one should just spit it out<br />And either laugh or pout..lolPat Hatthttp://rhymetime24.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-71034006046065194162011-06-01T23:03:23.165+05:302011-06-01T23:03:23.165+05:30Thank you for the form and the great example of is...Thank you for the form and the great example of is use. Sharing is the basis of love as is listening. I felt your words.Sean Vesseyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05509793249114004395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-10254757026183547012011-06-01T21:15:26.400+05:302011-06-01T21:15:26.400+05:30A good use of the piku form. I like your take on &...A good use of the piku form. I like your take on "okay". Hope that they find more than nightmare to share.<br /><br />RichardMr. Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05507517064398624652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-12913772804397845172011-06-01T19:17:56.526+05:302011-06-01T19:17:56.526+05:30"Okay" is nothing but B.S. Your piku rem..."Okay" is nothing but B.S. Your piku remind me of how I've observed that people -- myself include -- pass it off as a response when they really aren't okay. <br /><br />Also, your piku seem to slowly transform and dole out the meaning. Pain is better shared and understood than suffered in silence. <br /><br />-NicoleAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-14135071147777104012011-06-01T18:47:40.392+05:302011-06-01T18:47:40.392+05:30Well done with the pikus, it was indeed fun. BTW ...Well done with the pikus, it was indeed fun. BTW I discovered that Gautami is a typeface - I shall investigate further! What about Tripathy?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-5303087803194284602011-06-01T18:02:12.380+05:302011-06-01T18:02:12.380+05:30Not familiar with this form, but I am grateful for...Not familiar with this form, but I am grateful for your bringing it here.<br /><br />And I really liked this poem.<br /><br />Has great resonance for me.<br /><br />Lady NyoAsobimehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15661326504398833746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-11972500433826379182011-06-01T17:48:38.721+05:302011-06-01T17:48:38.721+05:30I liked your piku, agree that 'okay' is of...I liked your piku, agree that 'okay' is often a front that avoids deeper expressions. I like the piku form, found it fun.<br /><br />http://inthecornerofmyeye.blogspot.com/2011/05/untitled-pikus.htmlMaryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-61204025440302375912011-06-01T17:24:31.905+05:302011-06-01T17:24:31.905+05:30Yours, like mine, seem rather somber. Still it wa...Yours, like mine, seem rather somber. Still it was a fun exercise, was it not? Looking forward to next tomorrow's prompt.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-16336911891371756292011-06-01T07:03:57.610+05:302011-06-01T07:03:57.610+05:30I'm not familiar with a picu, but what I alway...I'm not familiar with a picu, but what I always look for when I read a new poetic form is whether the message and emotion in the poem get lost in the form. Yours definitely do not get lost, Gautami. The feeling in this would shine though no matter the form.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-34082239116335392982011-06-01T06:58:00.467+05:302011-06-01T06:58:00.467+05:30Interesting one shot!Interesting one shot!ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13825130.post-27911330417814620502011-06-01T06:48:48.877+05:302011-06-01T06:48:48.877+05:30not a big fan of okay as you are right it is often...not a big fan of okay as you are right it is often a cover for other feelings...interesting form on this...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com